I Became the Heroine of a Master-Disciple Romance

The emotional description of the supporting characters is not very detailed, too impetuous, the whole story is not smooth enough, and the writing is a bit hesitant.

Mingmingranran said before that it is impossible to change from family affection to love. How come they are together at the end? It is too far-fetched. Moreover, the master did not explain anything at the beginning. He just said that eating does not interfere with doing things. There are a lot of allies. It is fake. Okay. Occasionally, he reveals his expression after buying something, or saving someone on the way. And although this Emperor of Heaven is neither the male protagonist nor the male supporting character, he is called the Emperor of Heaven because he is the co-owner of heaven and earth. He can beat anyone with one or two hits. , The same goes for the two little foxes of the Qingqiu tribe. The younger brother obviously likes Ranran very much. He feels like he will turn into a black man in the future. But it turns out that he likes her too and still acts like a normal person. Also, although the ancient monster beast in the secret realm has no spiritual energy and has not practiced for many years, why? Ranran didn't use any big moves in the early stage, but he just hit the seven-inch mark and it was gone. At least he had to fight Ranran twice more to show off Ranran's diligence and talent as a spirit bead. The ending was too fast. If I were Ranran, I would want to travel around the world's beautiful mountains and eat delicious food.

I have mixed feelings when I see that the heroine's daughter may develop a relationship with the master.

I didn't expect that I was with my senior brother [Goutou] and I thought the other people were pretty good too.

Ahhh, there are still too few sweet clips and I haven't eaten enough!

In the end, master and apprentice become son-in-law and mother-in-law? !

After reading them all, I wonder if the author did it on purpose. Every time there is an important and exciting plot, the author just brushes it off. The exciting moments passed by in one stroke. Such a good theme and plot are written in a clear and watery way. Unfortunately, I always feel like something is missing.

It's boring. The story about the identity of the heroine's spirit bead ends so hastily after being picked up. The interaction between the heroine and the hero has no tension. The heroine's character has nothing special and attractive. I don't know if the author's writing skills are not strong enough and the heroine is made like a background board.

Why do you still call me "Senior Brother" when you've already given birth to a baby?

Damn it, when did you order it?