[Demon Slayer] A World of One Color

It is a very free and easy life but also difficult to settle down. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of writing style with subtle twists and turns in a plain narrative, wearing the clothes of a fan, but revealing the sadness of realism. Each original character has his own story, a sad and ordinary life trajectory in the context of a big era; compared to the original work with a strong youthful passion element, each original character also has a more complete humanity beyond the original work. In contrast, I prefer the original characters in your writing. You have created a soul out of them, a soul similar to us in reality. We look at the characters in the book from the third person, as if everyone's life is not very good, and even the ending is full of sadness, which seems far away from us, but the nature of life itself is unfortunate, and we will always compromise with human nature for the sake of desire. Standing on the resonance point, I fully agree with the eldest sister's point of view. Compared with many people, her life is a long and lucky life, and may even be luckier than us who are currently enveloped by the oppression of reality. Besides, the white kid is very smart and thoughtful. If he keeps following the idiot boss, he will definitely be the defeat of the Demon Slayer Team. Her character of acting from the heart and being fearless is what many people yearn for, but no matter how free and easy she is, she cannot accept herself as a human being. No matter how brave she is, she is still afraid of being left behind. It is very contradictory, but this is human nature, or in other words, all living beings are like this. The full text is consistent with her vision. It is different from the original work but escapes from human beings and tells the story from a place with a higher dimension than human beings. Therefore, we often sympathize with ghosts and hate that human hearts are not much nobler than ghosts. This is also a contradiction. No matter how high we stand, the will of all living beings is always there, and the same goes for the protagonist. Fortunately, she was saved in the end. What I regret is that the writing and story ideas are still a little immature, and the description of getting along with Lei is not particularly delicate in emotional expression. It is too bland, and the meaning of Lei's appearance in the end may not be as shocking to the readers as Qishan Yu's recent ones. Therefore, the subsequent ending description of Bai Naihu's redemption and letting go of the past is a bit hasty, which makes it a little bit confusing. Although it has flaws, it cannot hide its beauty. All in all, this is a piece of fan fiction that I like very much, I like it very much. In the new year, I also hope that the author can continue to maintain his original intention and always bring us more love with hope.

After reading it in one sitting, there are many fanfics about demon slayers who become ghosts, but I didn't even read it. Human beings are all on the side of the protagonist group, and this article is indeed written from the perspective of an "evil" ghost, creating a different kind of beauty, even if Bai Naihu keeps eating. People, but it doesn't disgust me. Most of the characters in it are original, and all the stories are as smooth and natural as water, which makes people feel comfortable to read. Of course, I burst into tears at the end. I really like this article. Of course, my favorites are Lei and Bai Naohu!

Teacher Crocodile has to call her family after reading this novel (laughs)

I like this ending very much, especially because at first, I wanted to go to hell independently to atone for my sins and let Bai go to heaven. Later, I realized that wherever I go with the important person, I will be happy, so I will never let go of the hand held by me again. Bai lost her heart, but when she found it, she gave it all to Tiu, because the happiness she had been chasing all her life was indeed given to her by Tiu. This ends well.

It would be better if there was a reincarnation chapter

It's well written. I originally wanted to read some fanfics with villains, but I didn't expect to see such good original character fanfics. In fact, I feel that Shirono should be able to get along well with Tongmo and Mei, but this is just a story about Tired and it is very complete.

I couldn't help myself and stayed up all night to read it. It was a very good article, but maybe it made me cry, so I didn't shed any tears. But the eldest brother and the third brother (you should all know which one I'm talking about) are really upset. Wwww, I really liked the daily life in Spider Mountain at that time. It was so beautiful. Except for the third sister, it was basically the best time in the whole story (at least I think so???)

I feel like the author's portrayal of the characters is so delicate. I really like it. I really couldn't help but cry at the end. I really like the interaction between Lei and Bai Naihu.

It's really amazing. The author is so awesome. It can be said to be jaw-dropping. It's not the character of a good person, but it's unexpectedly in line with human nature. The ending is hehe... But a lot of people still died...

This is not fanfic at all. . Already sublimated, good guy