
It's Hard to Pretend to Be B, Alpha Can Only Sigh
装B不易,强A叹气
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 337k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
88Chapters
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9.2Score
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It's over, scatter flowers "Hey Hey Hey"
Hahahahahahahahaha
I've rushed, I've rushed, I've bought a new book.
Am I the only one who wants to see the follow-up...
Does anyone still remember Xia Zuo who was almost cold?
The post is too long. I'm afraid Shui'er won't be able to see the reply, so I'll start a new post to praise you. From the time I realized it to the present, I have seen you go from writing an 800-word article and giving up at the beginning, to now being able to write such a long and completed article. It can be said that you have made a lot of progress. As for the question of whether it is a pigeon, I would like to tell those who have long commented on the building: don't embarrass this stubborn dove spirit. It is a miracle on earth that she can finish writing this book. Do you know how many holes I saw in her? Interesting stories are about the pain of miscarriage! Woritama, you know she wants to solve this book and run away! You know what? You know what? It almost made me angry to death. Is this the work of a human being? No, I'm here to praise the author. Shui'er is great, great, great, you are great. The perfunctory end, I left.
Explode another one in an attempt to test the Holy Will (?)
It seems that there is no long review for this article in DaDa, so I will come over and give a long review after I finish the exam. (This is my first long review, please forgive me for any shortcomings) Let's start with how I discovered this book. The impression is not too deep, I think I saw it on the Thousand Words List of New Books. The copywriting is quite attractive, but the content doesn't seem to match the copywriting very well (personal feeling). The character design is excellent, but Xia Zuo doesn't seem to highlight the yandere attribute personally. Even things like being tied up and imprisoned can only be done in dreams. You can't do it, Azuo (manual funny). It's more like the feeling of an affectionate and loyal dog, with a little bit of paranoia. Generally speaking, apart from being a bit inconsistent with the copywriting, the emotional line is excellent, but a little lacking (maybe it's because the articles I read tend to be light-hearted hhh). The plot was not laid out enough, so I was confused when I saw the old king suddenly showing up (who am I, where was I, what did I miss, did I miss a whole chapter?) And why I felt like there was a little foreshadowing that was not revealed (for example, when Mi 17 was on the phone with the teacher, who was there to listen in, and how did he cooperate with that person...) Of course, I also understand that this is going to be another article, but not everyone has the patience to follow everyone and read another one. I think I originally wanted to write a lot, but in the end I deleted and deleted a lot of places and I didn't know how to deal with them, so it ended up like this. Of course, if it were me, I wouldn't know how to deal with it hhh (laughing awkwardly) (What the hell are you talking about?) As a reader, I feel that the length of the article can be longer, and some more events can be designed and then let Zhizhi integrate them, and tell the readers what the meaning behind these events can be, but at the same time, leave a little suspense so that Zhizhi can be confused with us (of course it is unlikely hhh) (No, someone just doesn't think it's enough) The ending was a bit sudden, it felt like I picked it up high and put it down gently. I don't know why I felt very sorry. I always feel like I could write better and better. The supporting characters in the extra story are quite fleshed out, but the students in the main plot are almost as if they were specially prepared for Zhizhi to return to the Emperor Star and see the old king's conspiracy. Except for the one who was a spy on the old king's side, I almost couldn't even match the names - in the main plot, their sense of participation was too low. So low that it feels like it doesn't matter if one or two of them are missing. Compared with the introduction in the copy that seems to be student-centered, the gap is indeed a bit big. But there is one advantage that is definitely worthy of praise (?) This article is finished! Completely finished! (The poor readers who have been pigeoned every day burst into tears of joy) Look at the pigeon next door that is difficult to treat, I have already looked away. (Serene) In the end, everyone who can complete the article completely is probably a god descending to earth! Thank you for your hard work! Come on! Above. (By the way, does this count as a long review? 2333)
It seems that there is no long review for this article in DaDa, so I will come over and give a long review after I finish the exam. (This is my first long review, please forgive me for any shortcomings) Let's start with how I discovered this book. The impression is not too deep, I think I saw it on the Thousand Words List of New Books. The copywriting is quite attractive, but the content doesn't seem to match the copywriting very well (personal feeling). The character design is excellent, but Xia Zuo doesn't seem to highlight the yandere attribute personally. Even things like being tied up and imprisoned can only be done in dreams. You can't do it, Azuo (manual funny). It's more like the feeling of an affectionate and loyal dog, with a little bit of paranoia. Generally speaking, apart from being a bit inconsistent with the copywriting, the emotional line is excellent, but a little lacking (maybe it's because the articles I read tend to be light-hearted hhh). The plot was not laid out enough, so I was confused when I saw the old king suddenly showing up (who am I, where was I, what did I miss, did I miss a whole chapter?) And why I felt like there was a little foreshadowing that was not revealed (for example, when Mi 17 was on the phone with the teacher, who was there to listen in, and how did he cooperate with that person...) Of course, I also understand that this is going to be another article, but not everyone has the patience to follow everyone and read another one. I think I originally wanted to write a lot, but in the end I deleted and deleted a lot of places and I didn't know how to deal with them, so it ended up like this. Of course, if it were me, I wouldn't know how to deal with it hhh (laughing awkwardly) (What the hell are you talking about?) As a reader, I feel that the length of the article can be longer, and some more events can be designed and then let Zhizhi integrate them, and tell the readers what the meaning behind these events can be, but at the same time, leave a little suspense so that Zhizhi can be confused with us (of course it is unlikely hhh) (No, someone just doesn't think it's enough) The ending was a bit sudden, it felt like I picked it up high and put it down gently. I don't know why I felt very sorry. I always feel like I could write better and better. The supporting characters in the extra story are quite fleshed out, but the students in the main plot are almost as if they were specially prepared for Zhizhi to return to the Emperor Star and see the old king's conspiracy. Except for the one who was a spy on the old king's side, I almost couldn't even match the names - in the main plot, their sense of participation was too low. So low that it feels like it doesn't matter if one or two of them are missing. Compared with the introduction in the copy that seems to be student-centered, the gap is indeed a bit big. But there is one advantage that is definitely worthy of praise (?) This article is finished! Completely finished! (The poor readers who have been pigeoned every day burst into tears of joy) Look at the pigeon next door that is difficult to treat, I have already looked away. (Serene) In the end, everyone who can complete the article completely is probably a god descending to earth! Thank you for your hard work! Come on! Above.