What does it mean to be strong?
Is it looking down from the summit?
Or the desolation of silence?
It's a world no one can enter, nor ever will,
like the long years of a million years of loneliness,
when at last, I still waited for you.
The traces we left together
are etched in my heart, impossible to erase.
Even as time goes by,
that searing pain that cuts straight to the heart
still aches faintly
on nights when no one is around.
I've put my heart into writing this story. If you really like it or think it's any good, please don't hesitate to leave a comment and add it to your collection!
A deep bow of thanks...
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Write a side story, it's so cruel that my heart aches.
I'm going to 눈_눈BE! After you have passed, let's talk about life ( ̄┰ ̄*)
Although this article is not too long, the hint of helplessness and sadness between the lines makes people cry. The writing is exquisite and the emotions are well expressed. The article is one of the most touching and memorable that I have ever seen.
If someone in life misses me like Atobe misses Chiba-ryu, my life will be wasted. I like the emotional tone expressed in this article and hope you can write better works.
Wuwuwu> Why is it sad? It makes my heart twitch when I see it. I really want them to be together. Write a side story~
Like peonies falling
I don't know why I always think this is the best ending. Stop in your best years, stop in the time when you can still dream, stop in the time when you can still avoid being worn away by life.
You are in my memory as before, unchanged.
I have always felt that if a decent person remembers the best version of himself, he should leave when he is most affectionate. When the love is strong, the love will turn weak, so why wait until the end.
Forgot to rate it, send it to me!
By the way, this is the second article I've read about relatives.
Really good!
DaDa describes the characters' personalities and emotions very delicately. I read this article after reading DaDa's original article first. DaDa's style is really unified. They are all so light and breezy, touching the softest part of people's hearts, making people want to shed tears, whether it is warm or sad.
Liu in this article is a heart-wrenching child, with a delicate mind, ups and downs, and the softest feelings. Such a person is also the easiest to touch people's hearts (you must have planned it - -) After reading this article, I feel a touch of sadness in my heart, but also an indescribable tranquility, just like the chirping of insects in the fields on a summer night, tranquil, distant, profound and memorable; and Atobe is a stubborn and simple child , unwilling to admit the feelings in his heart, from escape to acceptance, the psychological change is natural, without losing his personality, but after accepting his feelings, the other party has left him, there must be some regrets, in the deepest part of his heart.
After reading the whole article, I didn't have the urge to cry (it shows that I have a hard-hearted heart), because I saw a touch of happiness underneath, loved and had good memories in this article, and that was enough. Even though the ending was not happy, I liked it very much. When I started reading the article, I was wondering if the two of them would be together and what it would be like for them to be together. I found that I couldn't imagine it. I can't imagine what Ryu would feel like being with Atobe, who looks so much like Ling. Even if you really like, well, love, everything in the past will not disappear. All the memories with Ling will last forever in Liu's heart, and this will also hurt Atobu, that stubborn child. Can such an ending be considered a happy one? What's more, I really can't imagine what would happen if Atobe's father knew about this. In that case, how would Ryu and Atobe be affected? Doesn't Liu suffer more? And Atobe, what consequences will his stubbornness and persistence bring? I can't imagine. So, I think this is the best ending. Having loved is enough. Even if there are regrets. Even if it is sad, it is the best memory in my heart.
This is my first time writing a long review. It's not good, so don't be surprised.
Write a side story, it's so cruel that my heart aches.
I'm going to 눈_눈BE! After you have passed, let's talk about life ( ̄┰ ̄*)
Although this article is not too long, the hint of helplessness and sadness between the lines makes people cry. The writing is exquisite and the emotions are well expressed. The article is one of the most touching and memorable that I have ever seen.
If someone in life misses me like Atobe misses Chiba-ryu, my life will be wasted. I like the emotional tone expressed in this article and hope you can write better works.
Wuwuwu> Why is it sad? It makes my heart twitch when I see it. I really want them to be together. Write a side story~
Like peonies falling I don't know why I always think this is the best ending. Stop in your best years, stop in the time when you can still dream, stop in the time when you can still avoid being worn away by life. You are in my memory as before, unchanged. I have always felt that if a decent person remembers the best version of himself, he should leave when he is most affectionate. When the love is strong, the love will turn weak, so why wait until the end.
Forgot to rate it, send it to me! By the way, this is the second article I've read about relatives. Really good!
Oh my god, it tortured me to death.
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DaDa describes the characters' personalities and emotions very delicately. I read this article after reading DaDa's original article first. DaDa's style is really unified. They are all so light and breezy, touching the softest part of people's hearts, making people want to shed tears, whether it is warm or sad. Liu in this article is a heart-wrenching child, with a delicate mind, ups and downs, and the softest feelings. Such a person is also the easiest to touch people's hearts (you must have planned it - -) After reading this article, I feel a touch of sadness in my heart, but also an indescribable tranquility, just like the chirping of insects in the fields on a summer night, tranquil, distant, profound and memorable; and Atobe is a stubborn and simple child , unwilling to admit the feelings in his heart, from escape to acceptance, the psychological change is natural, without losing his personality, but after accepting his feelings, the other party has left him, there must be some regrets, in the deepest part of his heart. After reading the whole article, I didn't have the urge to cry (it shows that I have a hard-hearted heart), because I saw a touch of happiness underneath, loved and had good memories in this article, and that was enough. Even though the ending was not happy, I liked it very much. When I started reading the article, I was wondering if the two of them would be together and what it would be like for them to be together. I found that I couldn't imagine it. I can't imagine what Ryu would feel like being with Atobe, who looks so much like Ling. Even if you really like, well, love, everything in the past will not disappear. All the memories with Ling will last forever in Liu's heart, and this will also hurt Atobu, that stubborn child. Can such an ending be considered a happy one? What's more, I really can't imagine what would happen if Atobe's father knew about this. In that case, how would Ryu and Atobe be affected? Doesn't Liu suffer more? And Atobe, what consequences will his stubbornness and persistence bring? I can't imagine. So, I think this is the best ending. Having loved is enough. Even if there are regrets. Even if it is sad, it is the best memory in my heart. This is my first time writing a long review. It's not good, so don't be surprised.