Everyone Else Is Jealous That I Have a Dragon

I've finished reading it~ I've always felt that writing a complete novel is really a great thing! In retrospect, the clues in this novel are quite clear and smooth. Some important plots really aroused my mood. The "game" plot is in line with current events and is also very clever! All the couples are so cute~Liu Yinglongjun is so cute~ (although I still have a bit of a crush on Moli and the other three... Hhh) When I read this novel, I felt that although there was danger in the environment in the novel, the true love and goodness that it brought out in this way was also very touching. Overall, I felt that it created a beautiful world like a fairy tale, where good people get good endings, and their wishes are realized through their own efforts. I'll take the liberty to mention some minor deficiencies. First of all, the author has too much subjective and argumentative language in the article. The novel should be narrative, and of course a narrative tone will make it more attractive to read patiently. It is understandable that the author wants to explain the plot or some details clearly, but he can find a way to transform it into a narrative form, such as using the characters' language, actions, psychological activities, etc., So that readers can carefully recall the plot and details that the author wants readers to know while reading the story, and it also makes the language of the novel richer in connotation. Secondly, different characters have different temperaments, and their speaking habits will also be different. When designing what they say, you should think more from the character's perspective: given his identity, status, temperament, situation, background, etc., How would he say this sentence? Instead of speaking entirely from the author's point of view. The "audio-visual" picture constructed in this way will be more realistic and three-dimensional, allowing readers to be more involved in the drama and have a better reading experience. However, this is also a difficulty, because the character's language style is closely related to the character's personality, and it is indeed not easy to make each character in a novel have a distinct personality. After all, the author only has one personality, and other personalities must be conceived and grasped by the author, which needs to be slowly cultivated and experienced in writing practice. Thirdly, there are occasional typos, typos and extra words in the sentences, and some sentences are not fluent. Since my major has developed the habit of always finding flaws in sentences, I would like to suggest that the author review it carefully after completing a chapter to reduce flaws. It will be easier to detect these small flaws if you have a reliable person nearby who is willing to let a second pair of eyes check. Finally, I heard that minimizing the use of the word "" will have miraculous effects, but I have never experienced it because I rarely use the word "" in my own writing and am used to using a language that blends white and white, hahaha~ I hope the above will be of some help to the author in his future writing. If there is anything inappropriate, please point it out. Thank you to the author for your article. Please continue to work hard for new articles~ You will also pay attention~

Alas, this cheap uncle first hurt Chang Luo and then prepared to send him to death, but Chang Luo still respected him. . . So frustrating

Super pretty! Love it, love it

This wedding banquet is wonderful, Changluo is also a dragon, it is perfect!

Happy 520, refill.

Oh my God, it's all a no-brainer

Finished spreading flowers! I love you so much!!!!

I came here for three brushes, I look good in society hehehe

I can't help but give it a second try, it's really great

Congratulations on the completion!!! Sprinkle flowers~