Yun Zhao is the vicious male supporting character in a danmei novel, secretly in love with the protagonist gong. Upset that the gong is getting close to the shou, he murders people and frames them, sneaks into the gong's bed, and tries to seduce him. He does all sorts of melodramatic, over-the-top things to come between the official couple, becoming the quintessential toxic green tea who makes readers sick.
In the end, the protagonist gong kills him with his own hands, to everyone's satisfaction.
After being reborn, Yun Zhao suddenly awakens to his own consciousness. He decides to stay away from the protagonists, cultivate diligently, and aim for ascension
Wait, why have I become a cat???
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The Beast Taming Sect unexpectedly acquires a snow-white Snow Spirit Cat, the only one of its kind in the cultivation world. But to resolve the clan's troubles, they decide to offer this precious spirit beast to the Immortal Venerable Luo Yuanlan.
And so Yun Zhao is carried under his armpits, utterly bewildered, his cat face held up and his soft little belly exposed, delivered defenselessly right in front of the protagonist gong.
Yun Zhao: Mrowwwww!!!!
The enemy is right here! Level-ten alert!!!
Immortal Venerable: ?
Does this little thing have it in for me?
Coming soon: "I Became the Demon God's Short-Lived Beloved from His Past." Please add it to your collection~
Blurb:
#The blurb is in first person, while the story is in third person#
I am the last little phoenix in the immortal realm.
Before my master ascended, he told me I owed someone a favor. If I didn't repay it, I wouldn't be able to ascend to immortality.
After going through untold hardships, I successfully made my way into my benefactor's life.
My benefactor was born with a baleful constitution that brought misfortune to his family and friends. Everyone avoided him, leaving him utterly alone. To repay my debt, I became his disciple and stayed by his side.
My benefactor was misunderstood and condemned by thousands. To repay my debt, I became his partner and stayed faithful to him.
My benefactor was injured saving all living beings, and lay at death's door. To repay my debt, I risked my life to give him blood from my heart to heal him.
The only person my benefactor loved was at death's door, beyond the reach of medicine...
A phoenix's body has the miraculous power to bring the dead back to life.
So that he wouldn't grieve,
I refined my body into medicine, bringing the two of them together.
Then I ascended.
Life in the mortal realm was probably dull and dreary. The heavenly realm without my master was no better.
Until one day, while wandering around the immortal realm to pass the time, I met a strange man.
His eyes were covered with white cloth, and his face was haggard. He held something in his arms and kept murmuring to himself.
Curious, I listened. It was the Rebirth Mantra, and I couldn't help feeling sorry for him.
The Rebirth Mantra is used specifically to deliver the souls of those who died horrific deaths, even to the point of having their souls scattered.
I was about to go over and offer a few words of comfort when the man raised his head, holding an exquisite porcelain bottle in his arms.
It was the thing I'd left behind after refining my body into medicine all those years ago.
Oh, I thought calmly. The one he was crying for was me.
Only later did I learn that on the day I died, his hair turned white overnight, and he slaughtered everyone in the world. Then, in a single night, he became a demon.
#After that, all of heaven heard the tale of how I was the Demon God's unattainable beloved from his past.#
1. The gong and shou are a one-on-one couple from beginning to end.
2. The shou suffers in the first half, the gong in the second. The gong has to win back his wife.
3. The story will probably start in October.
4. A little angst is good for the soul. Please add it to your collection~
Theme: Love and redemption
It feels like an anticlimax, and I handled the situation without investigating whether there were any murders, and the punishment was the same. It feels like the management of this powerful sect is like playing house.
Samsung's sweet article, my wife's writing skills are good, this article is worth reading. The characters are also quite likable, and the plot is quite interesting.
But I feel like there's something wrong with the chapter arrangement. There are fifty-two chapters in total, and the first forty chapters are all daily sweet stories. It's a bit overwhelming if I don't know that Maomao is his apprentice. But the last dozen or so chapters are really exciting, especially the part when Shou is about to leave and confesses to Gong. The person he likes is so good, but this good thing is for Lin, not him. This part poked me so much that I suddenly had a picture in my mind. And there is also a problem with the relationship arrangement, that is, I feel that Gong only likes black, and he only feels guilty for Zhao Zhao.
Finally, it's not clear why I can't be controlled by the "book" this time. Or is it just an illusion, I don't understand it, please answer QAQ
Overall, the plot is too baffling and very formatted. Fifty-two chapters, of which no one mentioned the protagonist's past life identity in more than thirty chapters. There is no good preparation.
In the last chapter, when the protagonist washes away his grievances, he is very confused. Are the grandparents and grandchildren still there after decades?
Also, the emotional scenes are the most emotionless. Suddenly fell in love with her because of her looks? Why didn't I fall in love with my eldest disciple before (Yun Zhao was exactly the same in his two lives after he grew up). And the more the Immortal Lord favors Yun Zhao in this life, the more aggrieved I feel for Yun Zhao in my previous life. Because if the Immortal Lord really tried in his previous life, he would definitely be able to find evidence of his apprentice's innocence, but he did nothing. Most of their interactions are filled with negative emotions, but they just like each other inexplicably?
Behind the popular themes are logic, rhythm, and rational characters. For example, a character who is proud of his favor: He grew up in a honeypot, so he is naturally proud? Or maybe he had a bad life before, so now he can live happily every day? Yun Zhao's past doesn't seem to fit his current character, so we have to write down why it doesn't fit.
Although this plot is developing in a touching direction, but, for some reason, I didn't see how deep the feelings between the two of them are.
Then there might be something wrong with the immortal "personally ordering the execution"
Was it changed at the front? I remember that Yun Zhao's previous appearance was not very good-looking due to malnutrition when he was a child.
Look at the logo, I read it a long time ago []
Gong's name is wrong again hhh
That kid in the fantasy is the Immortal, right? Hhhhhhhhhhhh
After Successfully Overcoming the Tribulation, I Thought About It
Become the Vicious Cannon Fodder in Danmei's Novel
I Became the Demon God's Doomed White Moonlight
After Saving the Paranoid Big Shot
I Was Killed by My Master, Then Reborn
Raising the Dragon-Blooded Protagonist [Book Transmigration]
I, the Male Supporting Character, Was Reborn! [Book Transmigration]
I Became the Demon Lord’s Short-Lived White Moonlight
Saving the Beautiful but Broken Villain [Book Transmigration]
It feels like an anticlimax, and I handled the situation without investigating whether there were any murders, and the punishment was the same. It feels like the management of this powerful sect is like playing house.
Samsung's sweet article, my wife's writing skills are good, this article is worth reading. The characters are also quite likable, and the plot is quite interesting. But I feel like there's something wrong with the chapter arrangement. There are fifty-two chapters in total, and the first forty chapters are all daily sweet stories. It's a bit overwhelming if I don't know that Maomao is his apprentice. But the last dozen or so chapters are really exciting, especially the part when Shou is about to leave and confesses to Gong. The person he likes is so good, but this good thing is for Lin, not him. This part poked me so much that I suddenly had a picture in my mind. And there is also a problem with the relationship arrangement, that is, I feel that Gong only likes black, and he only feels guilty for Zhao Zhao. Finally, it's not clear why I can't be controlled by the "book" this time. Or is it just an illusion, I don't understand it, please answer QAQ
Overall, the plot is too baffling and very formatted. Fifty-two chapters, of which no one mentioned the protagonist's past life identity in more than thirty chapters. There is no good preparation. In the last chapter, when the protagonist washes away his grievances, he is very confused. Are the grandparents and grandchildren still there after decades? Also, the emotional scenes are the most emotionless. Suddenly fell in love with her because of her looks? Why didn't I fall in love with my eldest disciple before (Yun Zhao was exactly the same in his two lives after he grew up). And the more the Immortal Lord favors Yun Zhao in this life, the more aggrieved I feel for Yun Zhao in my previous life. Because if the Immortal Lord really tried in his previous life, he would definitely be able to find evidence of his apprentice's innocence, but he did nothing. Most of their interactions are filled with negative emotions, but they just like each other inexplicably? Behind the popular themes are logic, rhythm, and rational characters. For example, a character who is proud of his favor: He grew up in a honeypot, so he is naturally proud? Or maybe he had a bad life before, so now he can live happily every day? Yun Zhao's past doesn't seem to fit his current character, so we have to write down why it doesn't fit.
Although this plot is developing in a touching direction, but, for some reason, I didn't see how deep the feelings between the two of them are.
Then there might be something wrong with the immortal "personally ordering the execution"
Was it changed at the front? I remember that Yun Zhao's previous appearance was not very good-looking due to malnutrition when he was a child.
Look at the logo, I read it a long time ago []
Gong's name is wrong again hhh
That kid in the fantasy is the Immortal, right? Hhhhhhhhhhhh
I want a side story, but I can't bear to do it.