Crossover Otome: Forever Almost

Okay, great! There are so many clever brothers!!!

I love the man named Corey so much! And it's clever! My suggestion: You can divide it into more paragraphs. The words are crowded together and it affects the viewing. I found that Da Da has been missing for a long time. If you see this comment, I want to say: Come on Da Da! I think the writing you wrote is very good compared to other fandoms (of course there is a lot of room for improvement) compared to those that are OOC and the heroine Mary Sue is outrageous. I think it is quite good, so if you have a dream, just stick to it! I'm not someone who often comments, and maybe people find it a bit troublesome so they don't comment, but I've seen hundreds of clicks on each post. If you've seen it, please keep up the good work! (Maybe I won't reply because I'm about to take the high school entrance exam and I've been missing for a while)

Teacher, you are so good at writing. It's a delicious meal. Thank you for the hospitality~

Www Mr. President, hiss, hiss, hiss

Everyone in Free has broad shoulders and narrow waists, which really makes me jealous.

Did you find out halfway through that Da Da Da was missing?!

What kind of magic is this!!!

The author writes well! Come on!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~~

The writing is pretty good. Come on