In the imperial palace of the Great Song dynasty stands a towering Heqing Palace. In the southern kingdom, on the territory of Prince Ning, there is also a Heqing Palace adorned with carved railings and jade decorations.
No one knows that these two palaces, though they share a name, record the same story. They have always existed to commemorate one person,
me, Zhao Qingci.
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Oh my god, Xiaojing~ I just saw it T_T
Speaking of first person and third person, in fact, the first person is easier to write than the third person, but the psychological description of other characters is lacking.
In fact, I think each has its own characteristics. If you choose to use the third person, of course it needs to be completely revised. All the psychological activities of the heroine must be reduced, and the focus must be on the interaction of the characters and the advancement of the plot.
I think if you want to use the first person, that's absolutely fine. Many great writers also use the first person.
Come on, happiness is the most important thing!
Oh my god... Why why... It hasn't been updated yet!
Xiaojing, happy Lantern Festival O(∩_∩)O~
I received the article yesterday and will read it today. The second chapter actually locks the bird~~ Helpless, Floating Away. The author's reply:
I'm so ashamed, even if I start reading from Chapter 3
I guess it's not bad either…
It shows how embarrassing my writing is.
Why can't readers reply? . .
That Qingge is not me~ Someone also searched for it yesterday. . Ahem.
I haven't posted yet. Written... Probably not as good as Nai. Feel free to update! ! ! Hiding your face ~ Author's reply:
Why don't those 80,000 words of Qing Ge be shared with JJ...
If I update it, would it be ridiculous to switch to third person halfway through...
Is Xiaojing revising his essay? My writing is like a child, I feel distressed wherever I touch it.
In order to write better, keep working hard~~The author's reply:
Hmm... I'm wondering whether to move the wedding to the front, so I finished the flashback.
Then the whole text should be in the third person...
Tangled, tangled
Nope~ touch. The beginning of my article is very confusing: I am here to scatter flowers~ Come on and update~ Updates are the way to go. Author's reply:
Prepare for a major revision of the article~~The structure needs to be adjusted...
I'm also very confused
Check it out again~Collect it. . . .
It is recommended that you think about the structure carefully before writing and revising. JJ children are very impatient, so the first chapter must be interesting ~ Ahem, for a person like me who can only talk but not do anything, I am actually very embarrassed. Author's reply:
Search Qingge, there is only one JJ, is it you? Go and worship
"It happened to be a green light. I raised my feet and saw an oncoming car, and then..." A more representative way of traveling. After reading too many time-traveling articles like this, I really don't dare to drive. The backstory material in the opening chapter contains too much and is too complicated, making it difficult for readers to continue reading.
Author's reply:
Mr. Renmin, I'm so excited to see you~~
I understand Renminjun's opinion.
Prepare to revise
But... How to create a natural point that can integrate the huge introduction with the plot?
Car accident, drowning in the lake, maid frustrated... The original time-travel routine was very cliché, but the phrase "It's so similar, it's so similar" brought out some new ideas.
However, there are too many characters in the back and they are too complicated. Readers who just click on your first chapter will probably be frightened by the introduction of so many characters and relationships and run away directly.
It can be seen that Dada has good writing skills. I like this calmness. I will save it first. As for the long comments, I will read them. Haha. The author's reply:
Talk
Thank you Kankan for your advice, I will definitely take it into consideration...
You probably won't find anything new here, I'm just a lay person
When I saw someone talking about how I could still read my words, I shed tears~~It's so beautiful
If you have any other suggestions, please feel free to comment.
Oh my god, Xiaojing~ I just saw it T_T Speaking of first person and third person, in fact, the first person is easier to write than the third person, but the psychological description of other characters is lacking. In fact, I think each has its own characteristics. If you choose to use the third person, of course it needs to be completely revised. All the psychological activities of the heroine must be reduced, and the focus must be on the interaction of the characters and the advancement of the plot. I think if you want to use the first person, that's absolutely fine. Many great writers also use the first person. Come on, happiness is the most important thing!
Oh my god... Why why... It hasn't been updated yet!
Xiaojing, happy Lantern Festival O(∩_∩)O~
I received the article yesterday and will read it today. The second chapter actually locks the bird~~ Helpless, Floating Away. The author's reply: I'm so ashamed, even if I start reading from Chapter 3 I guess it's not bad either… It shows how embarrassing my writing is.
Why can't readers reply? . . That Qingge is not me~ Someone also searched for it yesterday. . Ahem. I haven't posted yet. Written... Probably not as good as Nai. Feel free to update! ! ! Hiding your face ~ Author's reply: Why don't those 80,000 words of Qing Ge be shared with JJ... If I update it, would it be ridiculous to switch to third person halfway through...
Is Xiaojing revising his essay? My writing is like a child, I feel distressed wherever I touch it. In order to write better, keep working hard~~The author's reply: Hmm... I'm wondering whether to move the wedding to the front, so I finished the flashback. Then the whole text should be in the third person... Tangled, tangled
Nope~ touch. The beginning of my article is very confusing: I am here to scatter flowers~ Come on and update~ Updates are the way to go. Author's reply: Prepare for a major revision of the article~~The structure needs to be adjusted... I'm also very confused
Check it out again~Collect it. . . . It is recommended that you think about the structure carefully before writing and revising. JJ children are very impatient, so the first chapter must be interesting ~ Ahem, for a person like me who can only talk but not do anything, I am actually very embarrassed. Author's reply: Search Qingge, there is only one JJ, is it you? Go and worship
"It happened to be a green light. I raised my feet and saw an oncoming car, and then..." A more representative way of traveling. After reading too many time-traveling articles like this, I really don't dare to drive. The backstory material in the opening chapter contains too much and is too complicated, making it difficult for readers to continue reading. Author's reply: Mr. Renmin, I'm so excited to see you~~ I understand Renminjun's opinion. Prepare to revise But... How to create a natural point that can integrate the huge introduction with the plot?
Car accident, drowning in the lake, maid frustrated... The original time-travel routine was very cliché, but the phrase "It's so similar, it's so similar" brought out some new ideas. However, there are too many characters in the back and they are too complicated. Readers who just click on your first chapter will probably be frightened by the introduction of so many characters and relationships and run away directly. It can be seen that Dada has good writing skills. I like this calmness. I will save it first. As for the long comments, I will read them. Haha. The author's reply: Talk Thank you Kankan for your advice, I will definitely take it into consideration... You probably won't find anything new here, I'm just a lay person When I saw someone talking about how I could still read my words, I shed tears~~It's so beautiful If you have any other suggestions, please feel free to comment.