[Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation / The Untamed Fanfiction] A Quiet Song in the Cloud Recesses (Jiang Cheng BG)

The writing is good, but... What about the integrity that a little girl of the Lan family should have? Do things only for Jiang Cheng, not for the family? There is really no need to highlight Lan Qujing's love for Jiang Cheng in this way, and the inner monologue in which she plans to give up her child to protect her senior sister. It is unnecessary. It also highlights her love for Jiang Cheng, which is really not qualified as a mother. Summary: This article writes the heroine in a too romantic way.

If she only exists for Jiang Cheng, she'll be fine. But an article means a whole world. Just speaking from my personal opinion, don't be angry. The biggest failure is that the little girl of the Lan family is absolutely impossible to fall for a man, and it is impossible to give up the Lan family and family for a man. For a child who lost his mother at a young age, family is the most important thing. I didn't see her character and arrogance throughout the whole process, but I only saw that she was for Jiang Cheng. The biggest flaw in human life is that the female protagonist is completely written as a little girl who is dependent on the male protagonist. She has no thoughts of her own and is completely inconsistent with the vision her identity brings to her. She lives completely for the male protagonist. The biggest flaw is that she is not a living person in this story world, but a paper person for Jiang Cheng, so I didn't pay attention to it at all. The story didn't bring me in.

The plot is quite satisfactory, but the heroine is so powerful. I still can't understand why the original plot has no impact on the death of the senior sister. Why is the inner monologue of the original novel, and if so, it will not be spoken by Jiang Cheng himself? How can a mother abandon her child just for her husband and his sister? This is really speechless. Her life experience determines that she should not be just a love mind, and she will not only have Jiang Cheng in her heart. The plot does not reflect the heroine's sense of responsibility to the family.

I can't help it anymore. The heroine, Virgin Mary, is hopeless.

I finished reading the article in one sitting. When I read the main text, it was quite good. It is also a good short story. But after watching this episode, I really did. . . So angry I even feel aggrieved. I was already doing other things, but I still can't help but want to come back and say a few words. This setting is very good. . . Too much! All mothers in the world who truly love their children would not be able to say that they would give their children away, right??? I have a fragmented outlook on life and feel morally kidnapped. It's so frustrating. Please remove the filter on the character. Don't mention Jiang Cheng and Jiang Yanli, and tell this story based solely on relationships: My husband's sister is coming back, so why should I trade my daughter's life? Exm? Author, do you think this is feasible and reasonable? This problem is even more unreasonable than the daughter-in-law and mother-in-law falling into the river! The girl looks like her sister, so everyone can empathize and pamper her as much as her sister. But if there is a chance to bring my sister back, this is not something that can be perfectly solved by my sister voluntarily withdrawing, right? Even if she left on her own initiative, looking at Nian Nian's face that still looks like her, can they not think about what would happen if this was their sister? In an instant, it's like a sadomasochistic stand-in that's so bloody, okay? I'm really frustrated. I** this shouldn't even need to be discussed!? Whoever deserves it belongs, good guy With the blessing of love, a group of righteous protagonists can sit together and hold a meeting to discuss letting my sister take over. Is it good? I was really fascinated by these extra chapters. This development is really inappropriate It's okay to be resurrected on the Ghost Festival. Let me say a few words about the resurrection: Those who are alive have no regrets, and those who are dead are at ease. It's also right to ask your son to come over and see your mother. But if it is postponed to the next day, it will change the taste, right? Is there a word limit for teleportation instruments? Is it difficult to explain the situation so that Jin Ling can come to see his mother quickly? Once this kind of plot setting comes out, the entire style of this article will be distorted, right? Finally, the lotus incarnation can barely make up for it, and it can have a happy ending. Damn, let me finally tell you that I am torn between you and my child. My love is not pure anymore??? Good I threw up The mother herself said that she should let her daughter die because she wanted to prevent her husband from being sad and confused. In the end, it was my husband who still felt sorry after everything was over!? These three views! Is this heroine the co-author of a love story? My daughter is really miserable, thank you Really, normal people would be mentally distorted if they did this. I don't know if the author has seen the Tangshan earthquake. It's really difficult to choose between the two for your loved ones. It will be very sad and sad. This incident suddenly happened in the extra episode, and it was really not handled well.

The heroine is really enough. If I were her daughter, I would hate her to death if I found out about this.

Hahahaha, Director Nie is so funny too

I finished reading the article in one sitting. When I read the main text, it was quite good. It is also a good short story. But after watching this episode, I really did. . . So angry I even feel aggrieved. I was already doing other things, but I still can't help but want to come back and say a few words. This setting is very good. . . Too much! All mothers in the world who truly love their children would not be able to say that they would give their children away, right??? I have a fragmented outlook on life and feel morally kidnapped. It's so frustrating. Please remove the filter on the character. Don't mention Jiang Cheng and Jiang Yanli, and tell this story based solely on relationships: My husband's sister is coming back, so why should I trade my daughter's life? Exm? Author, do you think this is feasible and reasonable? This problem is even more unreasonable than the daughter-in-law and mother-in-law falling into the river! The girl looks like her sister, so everyone can empathize and pamper her as much as her sister. But if there is a chance to bring my sister back, this is not something that can be perfectly solved by my sister voluntarily withdrawing, right? Even if she left on her own initiative, looking at Nian Nian's face that still looks like her, can they not think about what would happen if this was their sister? In an instant, it's like a sadomasochistic stand-in that's so bloody, okay? I'm really frustrated. I** this shouldn't even need to be discussed!? Whoever deserves it belongs, good guy With the blessing of love, a group of righteous protagonists can sit together and hold a meeting to discuss letting my sister take over. Is it good? I was really fascinated by these extra chapters. This development is really inappropriate It's okay to be resurrected on the Ghost Festival. Let me say a few words about the resurrection: Those who are alive have no regrets, and those who are dead are at ease. It's also right to ask your son to come over and see your mother. But if it is postponed to the next day, it will change the taste, right? Is there a word limit for teleportation instruments? Is it difficult to explain the situation so that Jin Ling can come to see his mother quickly? Once this kind of plot setting comes out, the entire style of this article will be distorted, right? Finally, the lotus incarnation can barely make up for it, and it can have a happy ending. Damn, let me finally tell you that I am torn between you and my child. My love is not pure anymore??? Good I threw up The mother herself said that she should let her daughter die because she wanted to prevent her husband from being sad and confused. In the end, it was my husband who still felt sorry after everything was over!? These three views! Is this heroine the co-author of a love story? My daughter is really miserable, thank you Really, normal people would be mentally distorted if they did this. I don't know if the author has seen the Tangshan earthquake. It's really difficult to choose between the two for your loved ones. It will be very sad and sad. This incident suddenly happened in the extra episode, and it was really not handled well.

If there is a problem because of this angry five-year-old child

Hahahahahaha Director Nie