People say that reading your writing from years ago is humiliating, and I wholeheartedly agree. It's been five years since I finished this story, and my old writing is painful to look at. After thinking it over, I decided to start a new version while keeping the original. Today, with Home Tutor being treated as a literary renaissance, I still want to revise this story from a dead fandom, probably because of nostalgia. I've edited some awkward lines and implausible plot points, but the original feeling of the story is gone, too. I'm also trying hard to overcome some of my current writing habits, and I hope you can see the tiny bit of progress I've made in my writing.
