
Give Me a Piece of Bread
给我一块面包吧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 236k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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55Chapters
12.8kFavorites
9.3Score
3.1kNutrient gifts
11.4kClicks per chapter
1.4kComments
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I read more than forty chapters in one go, but suddenly I didn't dare to read anymore, so I read the ending. Wen Chuan's death seems inevitable, who will keep him? In front of her brother was a bright and grand female general. She wanted to cut through the darkness with a sword. She kept moving forward. She wanted to chop off all the thorns in front of the river. She walked faster, but she didn't know at the time that the light of the river was actually herself. As she walked faster, the light of the river became farther away. The underground garage was dark, but it still had the light of before. They love each other, one wants to find light for him, but the light is far away from him; the other wants her to move towards the light, but the target of her walking towards the light is you. When the light is gone, he is gone, and when he is gone, her light is gone.
"Give me a piece of bread" book review ——When a person has been in darkness for a long time, will he still yearn for light? In my opinion, Youge and Xiaochuan are the people in the dark. One of them - her mother doesn't care, her brother doesn't care, her father is a lifelong shame for her identity, but she still goes her own way and carves out her own way; the other - is immersed in the world of painting, using a brush to describe everything in the world, the ugliness of the world, and the love of her life. While reading this book, there was also a famous scene that moved me very much. The most impressive thing is that when Brother You was bullied by his classmates, Xiaochuan was also locked up on the rooftop. He shouted alone in the dark campus, but no one responded to him. He couldn't fly, so he could only jump down from the third floor and search all over the city to find Brother You. Finding scars all over their bodies that couldn't be healed in time added to their heartache, but they cared about each other so much. At an age when they can't even speak of love, they already understand what love is. Love is a lonely courage that I try my best to fight for you, and it is also a two-way rush to catch each other in the dark. In fact, after reading this book, I was a little confused - in Xiaochuan's heart, is painting more important or having a brother? I still follow my own ideas, which is - Brother You is ranked first in painting. At the end of the story, I still can't believe that the author would write such an unexpected ending. The biggest blow before Wen Chuan's death was the collapse of his faith. He thought his paintings would be appreciated, but it turned out that the rich woman who bought his paintings was arranged by You Ge; in the last quarrel between him and You Ge, You Ge was tortured by depression and made angry remarks, and Wen Chuan fell into self-loathing and couldn't extricate himself. His only set of photos were taken at the darkest moment before the end of his life, when he lost the courage to move on. His paintings were exchanged for the last sincere piece of bread. I finally knew why this story was called "Give Me a Piece of Bread". That piece of bread turned out to be Wen Chuan's last bit of comfort before his death. Ten years is half of You Ge's life. In You Ge's heart, Wen Chuan is as important as life. So after Wen Chuan passed away, Brother You had a missing piece in his heart, a bloody scar. She was also blaming herself and regretting that she shouldn't have said those words at that time. If she had spoken properly at that time, the two of them might not have ended up like that. But what was wrong with her? She obviously worked so hard in life. She wanted a complete family when she was a child. She was not understood by her peers when she was a teenager. When she grew up, she experienced abuse, insults, and dirty water... Why would the world judge an innocent person casually and maliciously? Youge is obviously such a kind girl! I feel sorry for her in my heart. As an outsider, I feel sorry for her, but what about the people in the game? When night falls, will they clutch the quilt tightly and roll themselves into silkworm chrysalises? Do they feel more pain than me? … The beginning of the story was very sweet, and it reminded me of the poem "If life is only like the first time we met". Chapter 1 When the two of them were walking home arm in arm after supper, Brother You asked Xiaochuan what "good thing" she missed the most in high school. Wenchuan lowered his eyes and looked at her: "The good thing was meeting you." Brother You disliked him for being stupid, and Xiaochuan said: "It's true." It's true. At that time, we met for the first time in life, which is worth remembering. They walked and smoked. You take a bite and I take a bite, shabby but satisfied. They are two lonely travelers. Only with each other can they have a home. Oh, yes, there's more! Their first kiss - Brother accompanied Xiaochuan to take the art exam. In the hotel, she bought two boxes of Xiaochuan's favorite strawberries and kissed him secretly while Xiaochuan was sleeping... The most innocent love at that time was hidden in the cruel life. The most sadistic moment in the book is probably the finale. Brother You blames himself and is grieved: "I held on to him that night, but then I let go. I shouldn't have let go. I have been thinking about it for so many years and I can't figure out why I let go." She attributed all Xiaochuan's departure to herself, so much so that she had hallucinations, thinking that he could come back. "He came to me every night. Once, we had a child, and we kept naming the child until I woke up. What do you think the child would be called?" But they didn't have a child, and they would never have one. She went to where Ogawa left. Kneeling on the ground, touching the bloody handprints and scratches on the ground, leaning down to kiss... She said she would live for a long, long time. She thought she was afraid to see him, but she was not. She left everything behind and followed him alone to find him. That year, she was only thirty-two years old. It had been five years since Wen Chuan passed away, and he would always be twenty-seven years old. They went to meet in a clean world. It must be bright and bright there, and the classmates there are friendly. They were born into lovely families, and they would have lovely children in the future. Just like Brother You once dreamed, they would live happily and forever with time. From the age of seventeen to twenty-seven, they devoted half of their lives to each other, and devoted their affection to each other for years. However, they were still defeated by the cruel reality, their hopes were lost, and their bodies were bruised and bruised. If you have read this story, I hope that if you can meet a devoted lover in the future, you will not let go of his hand. Also, the Internet is a double-edged sword. Take care of your words and deeds, and don't let your words become a sword that hurts others. "If you can't be a pure good person, please don't be a bad person." Don't let the world have one more brother You, one more Liu Xuezhou, one more Zheng Linghua (sister of a graduate student with pink hair). Special thanks to the author for writing a happy ending in the extra chapter, which also made me breathe a sigh of relief. At least they stayed together in parallel time and space for a lifetime. As the saying goes - "If they were exposed to the snow together in the morning, they would be considered dead together in this life"! (If you are interested, you must buy a physical book and read the extras! I always love happy endings!) May all those struggling in darkness be able to wait for a ray of light. May all those who are hungry and cold be able to wait for a piece of bread.
Wen Chuan has always been the best Wen Chuan, but he doesn't seem to belong to this world.
Long comment to Liao: ?? Contains spoilers, new sisters read with caution. This is a story from the age of flip phones. Some plots may not escape the clichés of that era, and not all characters are necessarily typical and classic. I am just an insignificant person who happened to pass by this story. I just want to say something true. The beginning of the story is extremely dull, with a second-rate actor and an unknown painter. As uin said, a psychopath is a psychopath. (I don't know if I remember correctly) I was suddenly moved, maybe because it was at night, or maybe it was these few words of conversation that made these two people stand still. (The part about two people smoking a cigarette in Chapter 1) It was very simple, they were cuddling together in a dark garage with a weak light burning, tired and realistic. It is a breath of fresh air in the midst of depression. I have seen their unconventional high school life; I've seen Brother Mu You's instant success; I saw Wen Chuan praying for a piece of bread on the roadside with his frostbitten fingers. Too many experiences, like a movie, connected in my mind frame by frame. Many of these moments gave me palpitations, and there were also many moments of sadness. The kiss in the sedan chair, the figure of the young man jumping from the third floor, the isolated rose in the art exhibition, a bird in the painting book, and the sketch of the nude in "Titanic". You see, they were originally dim. But strong. My favorite is Brother Mu You from high school, who is like a brave female soldier. She accepted her broken native family, endured school bullying, and worked hard to love Tang makeup and Hanfu, which were not appreciated by others. Although she would shed tears, she would be unable to hold on, and would say to Wen Chuan, "Let's not see each other again." A little immature, a little sad, but still beautiful. Everyone who is firm in his or her own cognition is very powerful. I think she and Wen Chuan are destined to meet, fall in love, and perish. When they meet, her justice will not let the shovel go; when they fall in love, she is brave by nature. As for destruction... I want to know first, What kind of person is Wen Chuan? Wen Chuan gave me a very dull impression at first. There's nothing special or novel about it at all, let alone a lunatic-like stubbornness. Later, I looked back at his high school, his livelihood, his unwillingness and surrender, and his first humble tears after "selling" the painting. I seemed to have seen the life of a homeless man, it was so bleak. Except his body was nailed to the garage. It is his heart that wanders. Just like Van Gogh, he is crazy, and his eyes can only hold the twisted human body and weird color palette. He painted his own heart, the desolate wilderness without wind. Lai Hongcheng said: "Three points of arrogance is not enough. Seven points of arrogance is just right. But if you are very arrogant, you are stupid." He took a sip of wine and said, "He accounted for 11 points." Wen Chuan is such a person. Their ending, I think, was due to the nature of the two people, which resulted in too little communication. Maybe Brother Mu You can tell Wen Chuan that I'm just sick and I don't want you to die, instead of waiting where you are; Perhaps Wenchuan could hug her and tell her about the torn heart in his paintings... And his impoverished life. I think in the second half of the time, they were more like buddies. Maybe you say, they can change for each other? However, they won't do this. Not possible either. Because of their true nature, they met each other and fell in love. The origin of all stories is their mutual attraction to each other. Brother Mu You is a person who can change his own destiny, while Wen Chuan is willing to go with the flow of his own destiny. They owe each other nothing, and both enthusiastically accept and love each other's differences. The final contradiction is that everything in the entertainment industry is unpredictable. Ha, this is an eye-opener for me in life. ) Man, you are never satisfied. The social status gap between Mu Youge and Wen Chuan is getting wider and wider, a female star and a wild dog. Both men's hearts were broken. But it doesn't matter, people can be weak. But they don't, or in other words, they are more like products outside the world, too sharp, so they have only one ending. Uin said that in the final fire, Wenchuan had a chance to escape, but he chose to be burned to death, along with his paintings. Brother Mu You stabbed his heart with a hairpin. I think how desperate they must be to choose to leave like this. No, they were probably numb. After Wen Chuan's death, everyone in the world knew about his talent, and his reputation spread far and wide. No one will know his mind when he prayed for bread in the snow. Mu Youge left the world, and everyone inside and outside the circle mourned. The funny thing is that all those who scolded her disappeared overnight. She left the world and the world loved her even more. It's just a pity that they don't seem to be married yet. Finally, I want to praise the cute Uin! What a pitfall, the writing is great, when will the book be published? ? A little earlier, the progress can be clearly seen from A Zhi. I really like ?'S narrative style. I think if it were a little more profound and the various disclosures a little more explicit, it might be fuller! Come on, brother!? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? April 21, 2023?
I didn't know what to say. The descriptions in the book were bland but silently depressing. When I read more than thirty chapters, I didn't dare to read any further. I was depressed and groggy for a few days after I stopped, and it took me a while to calm down before I dared to continue reading.
Finished reading. I cried to death too. It's obviously all regrets, and it's obviously all reality.
Give me a piece of bread ? I haven't read a VIP article in Jinjiang for a long time. I knew the author because of "Azhi, Azhi", so I read this article (because the number of words is relatively small, more than 500,000 words) ? On a Saturday, I saw intermittently from the morning of 4.19 To 1:59 a. M. On 4.20 ? I am the same as Wen Chuan, I am an art student It's not because I love art so much that I continue to study it. On the contrary, I hate it ? Even hate That person is right. There are very few people like Wen Chuan who always love painting itself. It's rare. ? Aren't those ugly painters his comparison? ? Everyone in the text has an annoying sadness, no matter who it is, but it is so real ? Why is it so perfect - two similar but different people? ? When I watched it, I really hated those villains in my school days. But why am I not like this? ? From the past but only now is it true ? The two fathers in the article are both unbearable to me in reality ? Youge and Wenchuan may have disliked them, but they also truly loved them. ? There is no absolute good guy or bad guy in the article ? From my superficial point of view, my aunt treated Wenchuan well, but the wedding gift was treated like this, which made me feel a little unhappy, but people are like this ? No matter how hysterical and unreasonable Song Zhi is, Brother You still regards her as his only mother, but as the article said, she also did a good deed. ? You Ge's father's wife is also a full-fledged character. She reveals the facts. Maybe what she does is slightly contradictory from this perspective, but her image can also be seen. And the bread related to the article and the little boy (whose life experience is somewhat similar to Wen Chuan) I'm grateful he didn't sell the portrait ? The article also has many, many characters that are not directly described. They are all different. They are also bitter, selfish, and sad, but they also have other sides (not just for You Ge and Wen Chuan). These are vivid characters. ? It presents the story we see from each small aspect/perspective. Maybe I don't understand it thoroughly enough, and I still can't fully understand Youge and Wenchuan. It's lucky that they met. But separation is inevitable (because they are different in being the same) Finally, Xi Tian, the character who paved the way for them, is truly a rare and close friend. I am grateful for his appearance. I think this is the best ending So far
I was just thinking that it would be nice if the ending could be better. It's a pity that Ogawa's words "Marry me when you grow up" will never be heard again...
Give me a piece of bread. There is only a picture of bread. Brother You didn't get it. She can't buy it with money.
Suddenly I miss Xiaochuan. Life has been really difficult recently. I always feel confused and stop in one place in a daze. When I think of Xiaochuan, I come back to take a look.