[Bungo Stray Dogs Crossover] No More Memories

It's still very satisfying. Although I'm not qualified to judge Dazai, it's really great that Chuuya can get rid of Dazai!

I think human life needs an anchor. Dazai already had few anchor points, and Qing Tokizai had even fewer anchor points, so he couldn't let go even more. Oda has many children, which is also his anchor point, but they are relatively fragile and need to spend a lot of energy on the children. He can pull Dazai back but cannot pull him back. He can pull Dazai back a few steps from the edge of the rooftop, but cannot pull him down from the rooftop. The people Chuuya interacts with are more equal. After joining the club, he was even favored. He gave a lot but received more feedback. He was mentally richer and stronger in interpersonal relationships. He could bear Dazai's weight and pull Dazai off the rooftop, but he was given up. It was a pity. The original Butei Zai was finally able to smile gently when facing Oda's tombstone, admit his mistakes and incompetence, and become stronger mentally. Dazai in the novel has not lost his anchor point and has a comfort zone. Although he has established a new anchor point, he prefers to stay in the comfort zone and his growth rate is not as high as that of Dazai in the original novel. Zhong is also a person who keeps losing and standing up again. He keeps losing and regaining. He loses sheep when he gains sheep. He loses close friends when he gains good friends. He loses subordinates when he gains subordinates. In this process, he continues to gain experience and growth. He can better deal with the negative effects of loss and get along with himself better. Dazai builds high walls and gets less, and the losses are more obvious to him. He also thinks a lot, so his reason and emotions are somewhat separated, making it harder to get along with himself. These are two opposite people. People are attracted to people who are similar or opposite to themselves, and they are in sync with each other or complement each other, so it is really a pity. It's all Boss Dan's fault! ! ! ! ! It's all Boss Dan's fault! ! ! ! ! It's all Boss Dan's fault! ! ! ! !

Yay! Zaike Bio should also stay away from our home!

After chasing it for so long, I finally couldn't help but comment on this article. Out of 5 stars, I give it 2 and a half stars. The reason is very simple. The author failed to grasp the rhythm of the entire article. At the beginning, the author's setting was still very attractive to me, but after reading it, I found that except for the six skeletons at the beginning to rescue Nakahara Chuuya and the trip to Vongola for treatment, other parts, that is, after Nakahara Chuuya returned to Yokohama, were basically sketched. The author himself has a small number of words in each article, a little more than a thousand words. It is difficult to resonate with this short word count and the abbreviated content. To put it bluntly, it is just a running account. There are some points that you can describe carefully, because they are very important. The best thing is to explain the feelings and thoughts thoroughly in two or three chapters (referring to the word count of the article: 3500-5000). Especially the change of feelings is a supporting role. Once it is interrupted, or seen intermittently, the readers will be very frustrated, especially during the period when the author often disappeared, and the dissatisfaction reached its peak. To make an analogy, it's like when you go to the toilet, you are supposed to be relieved in one breath, but it is suddenly divided into several times. Isn't it uncomfortable for you? Second, after Nakahara Chuuya returned to Yokohama, he basically followed the original plot, with no highlights and lack of his own ideas. Author, you need to figure out what the most attractive setting of your article is. Dazai Osamu caused Nakahara Chuuya to die in order to save his best friend. Dazai Osamu is still stuck in the past, but Nakahara Chuuya has moved forward, and nothing can be recovered. To push this regret to the extreme, we should focus on how Dazai Osamu views Nakahara Chuuya with his past attitude, but Nakahara Chuuya has amnesia and treats him coldly. Dazai Osamu digs out the truth bit by bit behind this and constantly deceives himself. This is the biggest highlight! Instead of just following the original plot, it actually said nothing. At most, it talked about Akutagawa becoming Nakahara Chuuya's new partner. The production of explosion points is quite unqualified in my opinion! Even if you write about a battle group member, Dazai Osamu witnessed Nakahara Chuuya being filthy, and he was able to stop Akutagawa from going berserk without relying on him, so that it shocked Dazai. Such a description is good, but the result is that the author can't get the so-called explosive point. He could push a relationship forward in several places, but he stopped abruptly and turned to other places. Give me a detailed description! ! ! I would rather not read the original plot, but I also want you, the author, to do a good job of the explosive points that you should have. Regret is the core of this article! It's the core! Since this is the core, let me focus on describing the parallel lines between Nakahara Chuuya and Dazai Osamu. Third, apart from saving Zhongyuan Zhongya at the beginning, the appearance of the tutor was basically useless in the later stages. As a close friend of Nakahara Chuuya, Liu Daozong should make full use of his identity. Didn't you, Osamu Dazai, sacrifice your partner to save Odasaku? Then why couldn't Liu Daozhi take action against you, Dazai Osamu, for the sake of his best friend? Even if he didn't take action, Liu Daozhai should have blocked the meeting between Taizhong and Taizhong, or revealed the truth intentionally or unintentionally, watched Dazai Osamu's emotional fluctuations falling into the cold pool with cold eyes, and secretly cursed that he deserved it. This is the awkward and defensive Rokudou Skeleton. Until the end when Rokudou Skeleton mocked Dazai Osamu for being a coward, I thought, couldn't it have been earlier! Original plots are also possible. For example, Osamu Dazai saw Nakahara Chuuya and Rokudo Rakuya talking and laughing while sightseeing in Yokohama, but he had no way to get involved. Until Nakahara Chuuya temporarily left, Dazai Osamu appeared next to Rokudō Roku and asked why Rokudō Rakuya was there. Appearing here, Liu Daosui pretended to call Nakahara Chuuya affectionately, saying that he wanted to become a cross-over partner between the two major families, which made Dazai Osamu disgusted and made Dazai Osamu realize that Nakahara Chuuya was not the only one... Anything like this is fine! In addition, it will obviously be possible for everyone to see the strength of Vongola's demolition team several times later. Why! Can't we show Dr. Sen a scene of the reimbursement bill and the corner of his mouth twitching? ! To be honest, I was so frustrated reading this article. According to your writing content model, it can be completed in 50,000 words instead of 110,000 words. You want the essence and focus, my author! (I almost couldn't take a breath) That's all for now. Finally, congratulations to the author for finishing. If you can, go back and revise this article. Really, there are too many flaws. Even if I have no time due to studies or work, I hope that every update you make will be of quality and weight, rather than being perfunctory.

I feel pretty good? It's good that Chuuya is so free and easy

I was crying, but I wasn't sad at all. Instead, I felt relieved.

Have a sweet dream, Lord God

Is it Zai you are torturing? It is me you are torturing!

Wow wow wow wow! What a great knife, QA There was so much writing all night and I couldn't even touch a little candy. The end is another knife, ugh ah ah ah Don't be a human QA

When I think about it, when I was 16 years old, as an artificial supernatural being, I didn't have any dreams.