The Dark Sect's People Spoil Me

Comments on "Everyone at the secret door is sick" First of all, I would like to congratulate Gu Chu on the successful completion of Da Da, and spread the flowers! ! ! Then, let me talk about my thoughts after reading this work—— It was wonderful and soul-stirring, and made even a "hard-hearted" person like me shed tears several times. The world view is not big, but although the sparrow is small, it has all the internal organs. As a story about a group of young heroes, it is enough. There are some small flaws, but they are totally out of the question. Start. I still remember when I first read the opening of this article, I thought it was very novel and a somewhat different opening. This kind of opening, the male protagonist disguises himself as a woman and sells himself to bury his father. It is reversed several times and finally revealed. There are advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that as I just said before, it makes people who like it shine and feel that it is very unusual. But the downside is that the protagonist only really appears in the second or third chapter, so there is a bit of a lack of immersion. Sure enough, the reason why routines can become routines must have some advantages. I still like this big opening very much! After all, a cookie-cutter start is not very interesting. It's always good to innovate. I heard that some readers thought it was a romance novel with a female protagonist when they read the opening, hahahaha... Secret door. The next step in the middle is to add the secret door. Regarding the assessment and the description and characterization of the characters, they are all quite good. My favorite sister Yaoran also appears here. , Sister Yao, hehehe, hehehe... Sister Yao, hehehe, hehehe... There were also several reversals in the middle, some of which were unexpected. There is also the "bearded" bandit boss in the back, Zhang Huzhi, hahaha, the part where the male protagonist becomes his wife made me laugh to death. Yuzhou corruption case. I quite like Miss Li Yu and Mu Ying who appear here. Several times, I originally thought it was a clichéd story, but there were a few twists in the middle that I didn't expect. One thing is that after Muying escaped, he said that he was from the Mu clan in Northern Xinjiang, but no more information about him was given later. It's a bit like Gu Long's martial arts history. The heroine's brother is still missing. But it doesn't matter, just think of it as running away. Northwest Ordnance Case. In this section, Zhang Huzhi is here again, hahahaha... However, when Zhang Huzhi died, I shed tears. Lu Yingjue, the Marquis of Dingguo, was overthrown here. However, the young emperor actually used his adopted son Lu Xuan to inherit the mantle and power of Marquis Dingguo. Well, although there is an explanation, maybe I am a little concerned about this and feel that something is wrong. But it's a small thing, innocuous. It's the last part, and starting from the previous paragraph, the plot has become somewhat pathos. It's also starting to wrap up. I have to say, it's almost a chapter and one person will die. (A bit exaggerated) Wu Sha, Sister Yaoran, cry, cry, cry, cry, I want Sister Yaoran! And Zhou Ci, something is wrong. Why do I keep thinking about this cruel official? There are old ghosts, old ghosts! Dad! ! !… The last paragraph is so well written! I think it's very touching, and everyone's feelings are sincerely touched. It is also linked with another work of Dada, "The Pretending Monk". For us old readers, it is really an Easter egg surprise, Master Xuanqing yyds! The final ending is also very disappointing. Good and evil must come to an end. Overall, I like this work very much. The friendship and family love in it moved me deeply. Moreover, everyone is flesh and blood. Needless to say, the protagonists have distinct personalities. Like Sister Yao, Miss Li Yu, Wu Sha, Lao Gui, Zhang Huzhi, any one of them has made me shed tears... And Zhou Ci, although I didn't cry for Zhou Ci, why did he die suddenly? What I wanted to see, Zhou Ci died before he could do it. Among the villains, there are two major villains, Lu Yingjue and Nan Shuyu. Lu Yingjue is less described, but old readers know that they are also supporting characters in "The Pretending Monk". So I automatically made up a lot of changes for Lu Yingjue, hahaha, it feels pretty good. As for what Nan Shuyu said, well, what can I say? In the disguised holy monk, the little prince who was so cute and interesting has now become such a big villain and has harmed so many people. Just like Xuan Yuan said, "The human heart is indeed the most unpredictable thing in the world." By the way, Xuan Yuan and Wu Xin appeared later, hehe, it also made me happy! It's like watching a Marvel movie, a single hero movie, and seeing other familiar heroes. It's very interesting. The whole story is very good, and so is the final ending, where great revenge is avenged and good and evil have an end. The male protagonist and his friends happily wander around the world and far away rivers and lakes. Moreover, there is a reversal that I did not expect in the little emperor. No wonder. He is worthy of being the son of the late Emperor Nan Shuxuan! Finally, all in all, this is a work that I like very much. However, the results were not very satisfactory. Thinking about it, it may be because the male protagonist has no obvious cheats and there is no systematic writing. Secondly, the beginning is a bit novel but it also filters out readers. Then, actually the male protagonist is not my favorite character. He is a bit weak and is a group favorite. A delicate and weak group favorite may be a favorite of many people, but it is not my favorite. All I can say is I don't hate it. Therefore, many times, the male protagonist cannot show off in a particularly cool way, so the sense of immersion may not be enough. But the flaws do not hide the flaws. I even feel that Gu Chuda spent a lot of thought on this book. If it is polished and the details are enriched, it can be adapted as a script. Of course, these are all my personal opinions. Great work, I'm looking forward to your next work!

It was too easy for Nan Shuyu to kill so many people, but he was actually allowed to see Xuan Qing before he died to fulfill his wish. It pisses me off to death. The saddest thing about revenge is that even if

I laughed like a fool in the first few chapters, and cried like a fool in the last few chapters...

Nan Zhen was disgusting. His self-professed affection only moved him.

The pacing is a bit fast in the middle and later stages, and then the text feels a bit sadistic as the text is sweet. I hope the author can make a side story to see how he feels after he faints and whether he has grown up.

Isn't it? Ending? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! Just torture and then it's over? The villain hasn't had his retribution yet. Could it be that the hero forgives the villain, puts things past the past, and becomes a Buddha immediately? No! Although I don't want to abuse the male protagonist anymore, I don't want to be so abrupt. After all, the person who loved the male protagonist so much is gone. Woohoo. His family members depended on each other, including his biological father and mother, plus the village's creditors, and Wu Sha. Nan Shuyu can't be taken advantage of, and Nan Qingchen is not a good guy either. It's no use trying to get the male protagonist involved to help him. I still hope that there is at least half of this article left. There was no revenge, but more people got involved. It shouldn't end so quickly.

I haven't finished reading the other one yet, and it's spoiled like this? Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh!

Ahhhhhhhhh, it's over. I can't bear to leave Dim and his friends. Their story in the book has ended, but I believe their story has just begun! ! ! !

Xitong should be open right?

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