A Rich Merchant in Ancient Times, a Poor Soul in the Modern World

Seeing this, I decided to say a few words before leaving. Author, hold on~ First of all, the personal change is confusing and abrupt, destroying the coherence of the article~ Secondly, the character creation was unsuccessful and there was no cuteness~ Finally, always use your own spear to attack your own shield... At first, Zhao Xiaoliu said that he didn't like reading. He felt that if he had to work on the land, he would starve to death, and reading "a, o, e" was useless. Later, he actually turned into a child who likes to read. Did he have a split personality? Embarrassing Chu Nan's mind really does not have the common sense that a successful businessman should have. The creation of this character is a failure. It can be said that there is almost no redeeming feature. It is impossible for such a person to become the world's richest businessman (well~ It was originally, but it was a pity that it was destroyed by Nai~= =), not to mention that he doesn't know the difference between elementary school, junior high school, high school and university, nor does he know what kind of reading material is suitable for Xiaoliu, let alone how many books can be bought with a few hundred yuan (don't think about opening a bookstore with such a small amount of money, it will make people laugh...), Besides, why should he ask Xiaoliu and his uncle to give him a clear number? Who does he think he is... This character is too broken, especially the mixing of third person and first person, which always gives people a sense of confusion... It is best to speculate on psychological activities several times before writing, and also pay attention to the ideas in the context, and don't always contradict yourself~~ I won't pick out many details... I hope the author will pay attention to improvement and practice his writing style. That's it for now, I hope the more you write, the better! Author's reply: Thank you. I don't have anything to say. I just hate writing novels lately!!

Come down and have a look, it seems pretty good

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Pack it up, download it to your mobile phone and watch it slowly

A bowl of rice plus some marinated pork, rat, or dog meat. -------------------------- Ouch, that's so BH hahahaha

After reading this chapter, I think Xiaoliu also has the potential and tendency to become a small attacker~~

Suddenly a question came to mind, is Chu Nan attacking? Author's reply: I wonder, right?!! Because I follow the kingly way of being plain and ambiguous, so it is basically impossible to have an H. The question of attack and reception does not need to be so serious! ~Bluerobin, do you think so?? Men and women should be ambiguous for a while, then turn off the lights and have sex, and then be done with it, right??? Haha

This article is indeed quite simple~~