I Pretended to Be the White Moonlight and Took Down Scumbags

It's a pity that I only read this article a year later. It's a heart-wrenching and tearful story. Everyone in the article has his or her own destination, but it's hard for me to forget that beautiful and beautiful woman who told the heroine not to hate or take revenge. The one who protected the heroine with his own death. The one who hoped that the sea and rivers in the world would be clear. Ye Huaixu

Hello, madam, I spent an afternoon and evening reading this novel and would like to share my views. I have never written a novel, and what I said is just a matter of paper. Please forgive me if I am offended by what I said. If you think it does not make sense, just read it and laugh it off. There are very few good drama novels written by Jinjiang. My wife's writing style is mature. Every character she writes has good and bad qualities, which fully reflects the complexity of human beings. The plot arrangement is compact and smooth, which is really great. I picked it up from my wife's latest sadistic novel, and I have to say that compared to the entanglements in the emotional drama, my wife's plot twists in this article are more mature and profound. But I personally feel that the biggest shortcoming of this article is that it has no positioning. First, the positioning of article types. There are two main types of dramas commonly seen in Jinjiang: refreshing articles and growth articles. Shuangwen has a large audience of readers, and the main purpose is to be happy and mindless. The setting of the heroine in the opening scene as the enemy of the country and the boss behind the scenes is the setting of Shuangwen. However, the plot development has been repeatedly frustrated, and the other villains are still pretending. Although the heroine finally regained 10%, the protagonist group except the protagonist did not live well. The villain simply died happily, without crying or regretting, and the feeling of satisfaction was very insufficient. I guess this is also the reason why many readers abandon the article (based on the previous remarks)? Maybe my wife feels that being stupid is an insult to my IQ. Reality is complicated, so the plot development is more realistic, so the plot tends to be a coming-of-age story. Coming-of-age stories value profound meaning, the protagonist's step-by-step analysis of himself and others, and his epiphanies time after time. But perhaps due to the limitation of the setting of the protagonist's big boss at the beginning, the protagonist has no epiphany or growth throughout the story. It is quite complicated to look at the protagonist at a single point in time. As the timeline develops, the protagonist becomes flat and boring. But in fact, even if the setting is already very powerful, the concept and cognition can still be further developed. For example, the heroine was bent on revenge at the beginning, but later analyzed her own and other people's emotions under various things, and understood that the real revenge on some people is not caring. Everyone has their own helplessness, etc., And the means of revenge have also changed, and finally reached a reconciliation with herself. The above is just a random example. In summary, this article has a pleasant setting but not a pleasant setting, and has a sense of reality but no deep meaning. The second and most important thing is the positioning of the intention. The purpose is the belief of the protagonist of the novel and the functioning of the world, so it is really, really important. After reading it in one breath, I felt that there are two main themes of this article. One is the small theme of revenge in the first half, and the major theme in the second half is that the heroine kills the male supporting character. In the first half of the paragraph, the latter theme was almost completely not reflected. The readers only had a general understanding of the relationship between the two countries. Therefore, some readers made inappropriate comparisons between China and foreign countries. Although the wife explained it in her words, the worldview was not laid out deeply enough in the article. Therefore, the sense of fragmentation is very serious in the second half. The former theme is too blunt and the latter theme is too blunt. The latter theme collapsed, and revenge became the main idea. Let's talk about this theme in detail. Revenge is too simple and has a lot of room for extension, including freedom, the concept of retribution, a sense of justice, etc. However, this article did not delve deeply into it. It even denied the concept of justice and advocated that the winner is the king and the loser is the enemy. Maybe it is to extend the concept of history? (In the long history, personal grievances are too small.) But because the original main theme is not connected, the sublimation is not successful, and revenge stays in a superficial sense. If you think about it, it is like you kill me and I will kill you. The never-ending resentment and revenge, the heroine's behavior becomes narrow, and the whole text lacks faith. The above are just my personal thoughts and I don't mean to offend my wife at all TT

Modify My rating is still pretty good. It's just that the characters are a bit flat. For example, the character Ye Qihuang is very contradictory. On the one hand, he is good to everyone and very kind, but on the other hand, he is greedy for life and afraid of death, deceiving himself and others. In the end, when he appeared on the stage to vindicate and sue, I felt that it did not reach the climax. According to the author's writing style, which often makes people kill themselves, I felt that he would have to die in order to show the complexity of his character. The heroine's feelings towards her are also very strange. First she said she didn't like him, but later she said she admired him. Got me around. Bringing up the most outrageous point, this is something I really didn't expect. Ye Nanzhi had a younger brother die. I was very surprised. I didn't expect that his father would be so angry to death because of the betrothal gift. This is really outrageous. There is also Yin Mingyue. I felt that he was a proud type of person earlier. I don't think he would kill himself for a sweetheart. It feels like these people died for the sake of dying, just to promote the development of the plot, without any sense of flesh and blood or overall character. The good thing is that the heroine's character is very outstanding. She is not a silly and sweet heroine, but she is more interesting. The unexpected twists and turns are also very good, and the foreshadowing is also well laid out. It just made my head hurt watching it. I watched it from 1 o'clock to 5:30. Fortunately, I don't have to go to work tomorrow. I also read another book by the author, I Returned from Darkness after reaching the full level. I feel that the overall storyline is almost like a revenge and slap-in-the-face flow. It is good to occasionally read a plot flow that is not very sweet. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

I just like this kind of character creation that is very three-dimensional. There is no absolute bad guy, and there will never be an absolute good guy. Every character is very real, and they are all selfish people. This is only natural.

Make up one mark after reading it. I saw a comment and another sister said that this article was delayed by the title of the book, and I smiled knowingly, : p

Why do I think Nanzhi and Jingzhao look cpp?

It's so well written, both in terms of writing and story. It's so rare that I discovered such a good novel.

Jing Zhao also seeks benevolence and gets benevolence, but his life is a bit too deserted.

When will the injustice be repaid? The world is really too small

1:09 In the morning, get up at 7 o'clock. The article is so beautiful