The Strange Tales of Bai Ze

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It seems that the scenes between Bai Ze and Archie have also been greatly increased.

I think this change is much better. First of all, Yuuna's hard study after that is not so abrupt. Secondly, Bai Ze's warning in advance is selfish. Before, it always felt like Bai Ze deliberately wanted to harm Yuna.

I don't know if you have read Wang Yuchen's "Strange Stories". This is the first work involving such a subject, and there are some flaws at the beginning. After all, such a novel must be complete in conception, and it requires heavy writing and description to foreshadow it. Then strengthen the huge narrative ability to extend the entire main line throughout the book. If you haven't read the book I mentioned, you can read it and learn some writing skills from it. I feel that greatly re-planning the writing outline and determining a complete narrative structure will add a lot of color to the entire book. The appearance of Zhuo Yan and Zi Ran does not necessarily only appear in Volume 5. Their huge family protects itself by saying that the eldest son must learn the magic of gods and ghosts. How could such a secretive family completely stay out of these stories? Ha ha. Appropriately adding some characters who are familiar with their family will definitely be much better. Although Qiongqi and Bai Ze are the protagonists, no book is entirely written around the protagonists. Use the stories of supporting characters to set off the protagonist to achieve the purpose of making the entire main story line more complete and exciting. Ji Yan in Strange News comes from a similar family to Zhuo Yan, but his life experience is more complicated. The partnership between the male pig's feet and Ji Yan is more like Bai Ze and Qiong Qi. Most of the stories about gods and ghosts in Strange Stories come from Chinese legends and records since ancient times. If you want to write well about these topics, you must read a lot of information. Only with more authentic stories can you attract others. The large copy is well written. Although it only has a few sentences, it can attract people. The Yellow Emperor met the mythical beast of Baize and asked for an illustration. The identification was lost, and the mythical beast revisited the world. This is a very good main line, but I think the second volume is the best. The first volume was inevitably lacking from the beginning, and the main story of the second two volumes was a bit unsatisfactory. One roll of the demon man can definitely keep Jin Shixuan. Paving the way for subsequent articles. After all, even the Demon King will encounter things that he cannot control. In order to deal with Qiongqi's aftermath, Bai Ze let him go first, then collected him, and then executed him. If the story were slightly changed, evil forces outside the order would appear to help Jin Shixuan escape. Jin Shixuan's future strength and revenge will bring more setbacks to Bai Ze and Qiongqi. Another point is that the Queen Mother who transformed into Xiaoyu, even in the name of looking for love, her feelings for Mecca came too quickly. Even if I regret that love cannot be saved, it is too strong emotionally. The Queen Mother is the deity and ruler above the heaven that separates love. Even if she is faced with a person like Mecca, she should not just fall in love with him so easily. Otherwise, why would the Queen Mother have to travel around the world to find the love she talks about? Ahem. I think I'm being a bit cheeky. I can conceive it, but I can't write it. Even though Wang Yuchen was promoted as a rising star of fantasy writers, even though Strange Stories had the highest click-through rate and sales ranking, his books still had many shortcomings and flaws pointed out later on. So today I said don't mind it. I don't often read fantasy novels here, preferring to read physical books. It can be said that this is the first time I read this type of novel in Jinjiang, and I was a little excited. No matter how big the story is, the main plot is well set up. Must try harder. I hope it will be published in the end, so that a lot of hard work will not be wasted. Brother Cliff, a young man, talks too much. Pay my respects here.

I don't know if you have read Wang Yuchen's "Strange Stories". This is the first work involving such a subject, and there are some flaws at the beginning. After all, such a novel must be complete in conception, and it requires heavy writing and description to foreshadow it. Then strengthen the huge narrative ability to extend the entire main line throughout the book. If you haven't read the book I mentioned, you can read it and learn some writing skills from it. I feel that greatly re-planning the writing outline and determining a complete narrative structure will add a lot of color to the entire book. The appearance of Zhuo Yan and Zi Ran does not necessarily only appear in Volume 5. Their huge family protects itself by saying that the eldest son must learn the magic of gods and ghosts. How could such a secretive family completely stay out of these stories? Ha ha. Appropriately adding some characters who are familiar with their family will definitely be much better. Although Qiongqi and Bai Ze are the protagonists, no book is entirely written around the protagonists. Use the stories of supporting characters to set off the protagonist to achieve the purpose of making the entire main story line more complete and exciting. Ji Yan in Strange News comes from a similar family to Zhuo Yan, but his life experience is more complicated. The partnership between the male pig's feet and Ji Yan is more like Bai Ze and Qiong Qi. Most of the stories about gods and ghosts in Strange Stories come from Chinese legends and records since ancient times. If you want to write well about these topics, you must read a lot of information. Only with more authentic stories can you attract others. The large copy is well written. Although it only has a few sentences, it can attract people. The Yellow Emperor met the mythical beast of Baize and asked for an illustration. The identification was lost, and the mythical beast revisited the world. This is a very good main line, but I think the second volume is the best. The first volume was inevitably lacking from the beginning, and the main story of the second two volumes was a bit unsatisfactory. One roll of the demon man can definitely keep Jin Shixuan. Paving the way for subsequent articles. After all, even the Demon King will encounter things that he cannot control. In order to deal with Qiongqi's aftermath, Bai Ze let him go first, then collected him, and then executed him. If the story were slightly changed, evil forces outside the order would appear to help Jin Shixuan escape. Jin Shixuan's future strength and revenge will bring more setbacks to Bai Ze and Qiongqi. Another point is that the Queen Mother who transformed into Xiaoyu, even in the name of looking for love, her feelings for Mecca came too quickly. Even if I regret that love cannot be saved, it is too strong emotionally. The Queen Mother is the deity and ruler above the heaven that separates love. Even if she is faced with a person like Mecca, she should not just fall in love with him so easily. Otherwise, why would the Queen Mother have to travel around the world to find the love she talks about? Ahem. I think I'm being a bit cheeky. I can conceive it, but I can't write it. Even though Wang Yuchen was promoted as a rising star of fantasy writers, even though Strange Stories had the highest click-through rate and sales ranking, his books still had many shortcomings and flaws pointed out later on. So today I said don't mind it. I don't often read fantasy novels here, preferring to read physical books. It can be said that this is the first time I read this type of novel in Jinjiang, and I was a little excited. No matter how big the story is, the main plot is well set up. Must try harder. I hope it will be published in the end, so that a lot of hard work will not be wasted. Brother Cliff, a young man, talks too much. Pay my respects here.

It's well written, but the first part is a little inconsistent. The connections in the story are too thin. But it's really great to be able to write such an article. I hope to keep up the good work and continue the next volume of Bai Ze and Qiong Qi's journey through the mountains and rivers, bringing more stories. You might as well learn a little bit from the Classic of Mountains and Seas and other records of gods and ghosts, which will make it richer.

Okay, I can see there's been a change here.

Who are Zhuo Yan and Zi Ran?

Okay, I really don't see what you changed.

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