There is something I may never be able to say in this lifetime.
Right and wrong have long since become impossible to distinguish,
And what we call love and hate have gradually fallen silent beneath the passage of time.
The nation, the realm,
Only when all has settled and I look back do I realize:
What was lost has long been lost,
And the ending was already destined from the moment we first met.
I almost thought we bumped into each other again, so I came over and saw that I was actually sitting on the sofa. I was so excited.
If you look at the chapter I left a comment on, you should know that when I opened the webpage on the 8th, it only showed that you had updated to 10~ Don't blame me if JJ has convulsions=-=
What I mean by being overly descriptive is that your fights feel like they have no focus and are panning in all directions. By the way, I still scrolled through the article quickly because I really have no love for the surname Helian. Look at the names you gave me, Qianchu, Changge, Ye Zhiqiu... Ha... They are not my cup of tea. (Happy cup, please slap me if you hate my comments. By the way, people who haven't updated in a week have no right to protest against others) Author's reply: Look, what do you mean by a week's rice watch? It's obviously only three days, let's give it a kick to relieve the hatred! I've always been bad at naming names, I've known it for a long time... Now I can't wait to replace the names of all the characters and places with ABCD!!! As for fighting, Yuanmu, I myself feel that it is getting more and more chaotic, but there is nothing I can do about it. Someone who is poked in the fatal spot bursts into tears...
Wonderful description, learning... Author's reply: So I looked at the message from that guy from LS and felt really ashamed...
Was my reply swallowed? Woo woo
Taken away! Lala, make a cup of fragrant tea and take a closer look! What a blessing!
I have always felt that Xiao Xiao's writing style is definitely not gorgeous. If I were asked to use an adjective, the words that come to mind are skinny and proud. There is not too much description or stuffing, but simple words are used to tell a story vividly and yet profoundly. I really envy the dead. In the first three chapters, there is not much cumbersomeness. A lonely, cold and somewhat fragile killer and Prince Lanchu just appear on the page. Seeing Lan Chu's skillful execution of the assassination of He Lian Yi, anyone would think that he should be a killer who has been strictly trained since childhood. He used ruthless methods and understood He Lian Yi's death. Unexpectedly, when he returned to his home, he would have such an identity. I have to say this, it surprised me. What kind of emotion can make a father train his child to be a killer, and even use such vicious methods to torture the child. In the relationship between the two of them, there is no sign of fatherly kindness and filial piety, no warmth of family affection, but only as cold as business, with infinite malice. What kind of trouble would it take for such a child to almost give up on the warm feelings that should have been there? Looking at the interaction between him and Prince Guangling, you will know how grateful this child is and how he longs for family affection. The story started with an assassination, and now the plot of the story has officially progressed, after the second assassination. After that, the two protagonists, Lan Chu and He Lian Zhan, actually became each other's father-killing enemies - although it was felt that Lan Chu could not be regarded as the murderer in killing He Lian Yi, he was just performing a mission, and He Lian Yi's death should ultimately be attributed to a certain emperor who has gone to hell, so He Lian Zhan has actually taken revenge. However, I don't think Lan Chu would think that Helianzhan was his enemy. His father's death was actually a relief for him. At present, the most important reason for Lan Chu to stay in Xiling is his brother Guangling who gave him warmth back then. Seeing Lan Chu standing alone on the mountain in the wind and snow, I just felt a sense of sadness in my heart. This sadness was even more aggravated after knowing the poison in Lan Chu's body. How much suffering did he suffer at the hands of that person, how much pain did he endure, before he finally turned into such a lonely and cold person? If the situation on the other side of Xiling makes people feel that it is cold to the core, then in the army of Beiming, there is a warmth that cannot be ignored in the chill. The death of the general did not bring irreparable disadvantages. The cooperation between high-ranking generals kept the entire army in an upward atmosphere at all times. After the Helian battle successfully reverses the situation between the two sides, the counterattack that follows will definitely make General Helian smile with a smile on his face. However, the following description of the war made me discover Xiao Xiao's attitude throughout the story - impartiality. In his writing, there is no preference for that aspect. He just uses the method he wants to use to describe every character in his mind. After reading the previous chapters, no one would have a good impression of Xiling with such a ruthless emperor. However, in Xiao Xiao's subsequent description, it is impossible not to like those who guard Yizhou City. The integrity and courage they displayed are all admirable. There are very few parts of the extremely fierce battle that are actually used to describe the characters in Yizhou, but it is this description that makes the entire people guarding Yizhou come alive. The magistrate who is calm at the top of the city, the doctor who talks hard but has a soft heart. Thinking about the fact that there are such wonderful people in this place, who can not have a good impression of him? The end of the war means that something hidden under the war is about to begin. Lan Chu stayed in the Beiming Army. Rather than wanting revenge, it would be better to say that he wanted to do something for Guangling! In that cold palace, perhaps the only thing that worried him was the gentle and beautiful prince. However, Helianzhan's care and love for him left a crack in his cold heart. This may be proof that his heart has not been completely frozen. I'm afraid this is also thanks to Guangling's love and Guhong's protection. The arrival of Xiling reinforcements and Guangling's private entrustment made the following story even more suspenseful. I don't know when Helianzhan will know that the young man he is so worried about, Ah Mo, is the famous Prince Ning in Xiling, but the poison in him comes from his own father. Thinking of the viciousness of the poison, I couldn't help but feel a little more disgusted with the dead emperor. I always felt that he was poisoned in order to monopolize Lan Chu's beauty all the time. Even if he dies, he must let this child accompany him. What kind of emotion is this. Presumably this is another hidden thread in the article. Looking forward to Xiao Xiao's next chapter. Author's reply: Now I don't know if I am just a writer of spare parts or if I am obsessed with description... However, no matter what it is, as long as I am happy when I write it, it will be cool if it is cold.
Damn it, I forgot to score, so make it up!
Xiao, your description of the fight is indeed wonderful and fascinating! By the way, after reading these chapters, basically every character has a distinct personality and unique characteristics! The only one who is unclear is Lan Chu. He is not shocked by honor or disgrace, nor does he change color even when he is pressed to the top of Mount Tai. I wonder what his state of mind is now. After all, the country's gates have been breached, and the enemy is close at hand. Moreover, his friendship with Prince Lanling made him feel more responsible for protecting Prince Lanling after he ascended the throne, right? I like He Lianzhan better, he is a heroic warrior and has a tender heart for his children, but this love between his children will become his fatal weakness in the future. The so-called hero is sad to be a beauty, and there will be days when he will struggle in the future! Seeing the touching scene in Lan Chu's grandson's house, even though it only lasted a short moment, it was really touching from the bottom of my heart! What has Lan Chu ever experienced that made his experience so 'extraordinary'? Xiao Xiao, all these things are waiting for you to decipher one by one! Author's reply: Lan Chu's character setting may be too cold, but that's how cute I am... He knows that Helianzhan treats him well, but he has his shackles. As for being indifferent to the war, well, it is still a matter of personality... He Lianzhan is quite cheerful, and I felt inexplicably happy when I wrote this. This one can be regarded as a young general who fought hard on the battlefield. He does not have too many deep calculations, but he is indispensable for his heroic spirit.
I'm here to see BaWang Wendi. Please rate it first and reply later another day! Happy Chinese New Year, dear!!!!! Author's reply: Happy New Year