I Captured a System [Quick Transmigration]

Isn't it another woman who was bound to the system at the beginning? How come the heroine is the first one to be bound?

Is there a sequel to the story of Mian and Ning?

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Excerpt "Tan Chun is a Little Miracle Doctor [Red Mansion]" by Qiu Ling Chapter 1 ... There are indeed risks in time travel. For example, if you travel once and again, you will wonder whether this is not a time travel article, but a fast time travel article. After the fast time travel article, will it turn into a newspaper article again... After the heroine stands at the top of the world, she then travels back in time. When one day she becomes invincible, will she be pressed to the ground and rubbed?

It feels like it's almost over, and I want to bb again... It feels like the plot has started to jump a bit since the introduction of the character Zhu Xuan. The world of Yan Shisan is better, but the infinite horror in the back and the original and obvious feeling now have begun to mess up. It feels like the purpose of introducing this character is to immediately remove him and force an end to a certain world when he can no longer write it. I originally felt that the author had a stiffness between the lines, but you can still look at the plots. Now even the plot has begun. It has become stiff, and I have no idea what the author wants to write about. If I want to write about fast time travel, the element of fast time travel can be said to be gone now. If I want to write about the emotional development between the male and female protagonists, it can be said that only the second and third worlds write the emotional history between the male and female protagonists in a very short space. The other ugly parts are that the male protagonist is licking the female protagonist, and I know I want to marry her as soon as I see her. The original aloof character design is completely OOC. This kind of semi-Mary Su style love is really... Then let's talk about the title of the book, Kidnapping a System, but the role of System Novice in the nearly two hundred chapters of the text is basically a tracker and warehouse. It can be felt that the author wants to make Xiaobai play a cute role at this point, but as my previous review said, the dialogue between the heroine and other people and other descriptions are too stiff, completely crushing Xiaobai's cuteness role. I read this book, and my impression of the author is that the beginning is not very impressive. I can practice more or imitate other authors. The first three worlds after time travel can still be read, and there is still room for improvement. After that, it starts to go downhill. The middle worlds are not very obvious, but the dialogue is a bit stiff. But since the male protagonist Zhu Xuan As soon as it came out, the plot started to fall apart (if the author can round up all the seemingly plot-breaking places since Zhu Xuan came out, I didn't say it), especially the two worlds that Zhu Xuan forced to travel to after coming out. At best, it is called a plot, at worst, it is forced to drag the story to make money. It depends on how the author smoothes it out later. I know that some of what I said was excessive and may have directly negated some of the author's efforts, but I sincerely hope that the author will grow up, otherwise I wouldn't be able to read so many chapters that make me uncomfortable and then post a lot of messy words. Isn't it better to follow a few more books or play a few games if I have this free time than just lazing around here? And I also know that a person's writing level cannot be improved overnight, so I suggest that the author read more books, and then read it carefully after coding to see if there are any flaws, and think about how to correct it, even if you really don't know how You can also write it down to see if there are any similar places when reading other books. The progress must be bit by bit, but I don't feel your progress at the moment. On the contrary, the places where you could have achieved a passing grade have begun to fail. This is very fatal. If you see this comment of mine, I hope you can consider my suggestion. After all, what every author needs most is to stabilize the fans of this book, and then transfer these fixed fans to the next book. If you open a book to gain a batch of fans, I feel that you will not get far. If you just want to write on a stand-alone computer and then thank you for a gift, you must have strong writing skills. Another book I am following is Stand-alone+Thank You for Gifts. She also interrupts updates from time to time, and a lot of people scolded her, but once she updated, a lot of people came to read it. This is the benefit of strong writing skills. I hope you can become such a person with strong writing skills (don't learn if you stop updating). After I finish this book, I will read the next one, but if the next one is still bad, then I will have to say goodbye.

I don't like this kind of female protagonist for two consecutive chapters. She ignores the outside world in order to practice, or is a fool who keeps walking without realizing it. If she doesn't practice well, the male protagonist will not come, and will she have no love in her life? Can it not develop like this?

Travel to a new world, the world where the system mastermind is located

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