What Should I Do About My Villainous Fiancé Loving Me Too Much?

The ending is too sloppy. The first part is really good, but a few lines are too big. The last few chapters are unstoppable and the writing is messy. The content of the next 10 chapters is not clear. Several foreshadowings failed to come true well. It's good to just read the front of the whole book, forget about the back.

After reading it for the second time in three years, I still feel that the ending is a bit rushed. In fact, readers can roughly guess some of the blank spaces and hints, but the author still needs to give it a happy ending so that it does not feel like it is unfinished. I still don't quite understand what the wick spiritual fire that warms and nourishes the broken soul specifically means. In the first life, A Yu passed through the womb. After gaining a soul, he was bewitched by the "system". He almost crushed Xiao Jiang's original life lamp and committed suicide by bumping into a sword to save Xiao Jiang (Xiao Jiang misunderstood that A Yu wanted to kill him from the beginning). In the second life, Xiaojiang 2.0 Forced Ayu to go to the devil's road. Xiaojiang 1.0 Took away Ye and planned to kill Xiaojiang 2.0 And use Ye's body to marry Ayu. Then Xiao Jiang 2.0'S body was used to summon Jiang Xuan's soul, and A Yu was killed by a mysterious person (system?). The third generation Xiao Jiang pretended to be Jiang Xuan to the end and was discovered, reversing time and space again. The system said that "Jiang Yu" had already failed the mission, which may refer to the previous failure to seduce A Yu. This life seems to be the fourth life, but since it is a reversal of time and space, where is Xiao Jiang when he returns to this life? I'm afraid that there were countless time and space reversals in the middle, so that his soul was damaged and Ayu's soul was scattered elsewhere. Only then did he have a life as a modern college student and a life as an official lady. Xiaojiang killed Ayu and brought his soul back to the current world of immortality, which gave rise to this life. The puppet of Uncle Jiu is the work of Xiao Jiang in this life. He can understand what happened in the year and month to this extent, and complete the events step by step: teaching the weapon skills, giving the heart mirror, looking for the iron ring of the family leader, seizing the golden book of talismans, and finally collecting the dirt to save everyone from fire and water. Every joint event that Uncle Jiu participates in may have been tried with blood and tears in a certain life. Every mission carried out by Uncle Jiu corresponds to a failed retracement. In the life without the breast shield, Ayu was taken away and his soul was scattered... Xiaojiang must have gone back countless times. Where did Xiao Jiang go after leaving the puppet of Uncle Jiu in this life? The wick can only burn for three years, which should be the result of countless times of nourishing a broken soul. This kind of protection was too heavy, and Ayu was deeply shaken, so he sealed up his memories to prevent himself and Xiaojiang from being entangled in these heavy memories of life after life.

I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, and the early layout is very smooth, but the ending is too rushed and confusing.

Woohoo, the front and middle are pretty good, but it feels a little bit unfinished. It's a mess at the end, but overall it's okay and worth reading.

Some plots seem to have failed to come true.

It's so confusing, so many things are not explained.

I would like to make a suggestion. I hope that next time I write an article, I won't end it hastily. It feels like this article has a huge world line, but it is not explained clearly, and the protagonist's story ends abruptly. The writing is so good, I really feel sorry for you. After reading it, I always feel a little bit worse. I hope you can reply to me

Finished reading. I still feel that there are too many characters in this article, especially the Ximen family, whose names are even confusing. I feel it would be better if the plot lines of the male and female protagonists are more prominent.

I also watched Loneliness, so what happened to Master Jiu. Z

My aunt laughed all the time, I still like the modern extras, where everyone lives happily together, without the love, hate, and unforgettable pain that is constantly being sorted out and messed up. Ayu's parents are both here, his cousin is just a little girl who got sick in kindergarten, and his brother and Siyu continue to love and kill each other. The life span of ordinary people is not as long as that of monks, but they still have enough time to love you.