Kidnap a Master and Make Him My Dao Companion (Transmigrate into a Book)

Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, it's over

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The emotional line is a bit weak. If I could write about the emotional scenes in detail and then write about Qingyou, I think it would be better and more people would know this treasure. But I can't fault it because it's really well written. Treasure... There is a plot. The plot is also great, and there are twists and turns that I really didn't expect. There are also new ideas. The only shortcoming is what I said before. Thank you for meeting me in this book, and I hope it will get better and better.

Finished punching in!!! It's so well written. It's so good and so good. I really didn't expect the plot!!!

? After watching it, I just want to say, holy shit, Mission: Impossible. The plot is really interesting, but the emotional line is too weak. It feels like the master's love comes out of nowhere, and the relationship between the two feels a bit awkward. But the plot is really good (??ω??)??, Hehehe

I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I really like spreading flowers.

Looks good, but the twist caught me off guard

Watching the whole journey to the end, sometimes I would inevitably feel frightened, but fortunately I came back with a happy ending. I have seriously thought about the fact that eternal life is quite scary. Everyone wants to live a long life. Even if the person you like is around, you will feel bored. Being with a person for such a long time, even if it is the one he once loved... I don't know. Anyway, I still think that strategically living for decades will be enough, otherwise the long life will be very boring... For example, recently I was bored at home for more than ten days and almost went crazy. . So it's a bit hard to imagine what it would be like for a person to live in this state for a long time! (Hey, what am I talking about? This article seems to be quite relaxing.)

Just... Okay? Let me first state that I have no malicious intentions, I will just tell you my feelings after reading the whole story. Personally, I feel that the emotional line between the protagonists is a bit too weak, a bit far-fetched and inexplicable? Maybe it's because I prefer watching emotional dramas. I always felt that it was weird and a bit sudden, and the dual cultivation of the protagonist was also a bit weird. I felt that more effort was spent on the plot, and the characters and emotions were not very full. I just feel like there is so little emotional expression (?˙ー˙?) There are not many emotional descriptions of Li Qingπ_π There are not many emotional descriptions of Master, ( ??????? ) Sad So the title was "Kiddling a Master to Become a Taoist Companion". I thought it was about how the apprentice kidnapped the master and all the details. It feels like what's written on the front blocks the tree demon? Then I reacted for a moment, and it can be said that it was the same throughout the whole article, but how should I put it, it just felt like... It was buried too deep. It was so deep, it was as if the dryad was the surface of the earth, and the big line was buried to the center of the earth. The last moment, suddenly going from the center of the earth to the surface, felt like it was a bit too twisted and there was no foreshadowing. What if there were some interludes in the first half about Qingyou's encounter or confrontation with her master when she was still practicing the ghost path? Their conflict is followed by the hidden boss that goes as deep as the center of the earth. This may give me a better feeling. Generally speaking, it is the cause and effect relationship of the final finale. It feels like there is a missing cause. It doesn't seem to be the case. The cause appears together with the effect of the finale. Emmmm, how should I put it? It just feels like something is missing. Maybe it's because I focused on the love story, and this story is more about the plot than the love story, so I didn't think it was worth buying this love story.

Very good-looking, I like watching Danmei, part of it is. . . But the main reason is that the content of these articles is not about pure love, but about persistence and choice. Everyone has their own uniqueness, which is worth thinking about.