Yuta Crashes Into an Iceberg

My blood, which can almost be described as "boiling", has finally calmed down. Before I seriously comment on this extraordinary article, I would like to ask the author: What do you think a fan is? I don't want to analyze the definitions in the encyclopedia word for word. I just want to say something that fan authors have reached a consensus on long ago: since it is a fan, it should be the same as the word "human". The so-called people are characters that already exist in the original work, not your own original characters; the so-called sameness means that the character is still the same in your writing, not Zhang Sanli Si who wears the same name but even his own mother cannot recognize him! This is the basis for writing fan fiction and the most basic respect. However, for this first point, this article could not be more outrageous. The characters are distorted, which is common, but it is probably the only one that can completely deviate from the character image and completely deviate from the original work! Since the name is Yuta Hits the Iceberg, I naturally understood that this is a fanfic about Yuta and Tezuka. But looking at the whole text, in what way does the so-called "Yuta" here have any shadow of Yutai in the original work? It's just that my status is different. Instead of being in St. Rudolf, I skipped a grade and went to youth school for three years. I'm not in the tennis club, but became the director of the basketball club. It's just that my appearance is different. I'm 180cm tall, "I have the same appearance as Fuji Yuta in the original work, but I don't look as honest as him. Instead, I feel arrogant and imposing, especially the cross birthmark on my head. It makes me look cold and cold." As for his personality, he sneered, and I'm sorry. I really didn't see the so-called Son of the Wind, who was banned for 5 years for maiming someone with violent tennis when he was 10 years old. He managed to get a girl to die in a car accident because of a school dispute. He was domineering and uneducated towards everyone, and his IQ and EQ were extremely low. The so-called Son of the Wind, how could you tell that he was the awkward and stubborn little Yuta! The author gave the reason for writing this in "The author has something to say": "Because it is time travel, Fuji Yuta's character will be very different from that in the original work. In other words, I have always been my mother, so the protagonist is still close to omnipotence, but not too much. ~ In this article, I may idealize Yuta unconsciously, because in my eyes, the Ice Palace is perfect, supreme, and unrivaled. Therefore, only Yuta is perfect enough to be worthy of the Ice Palace. Of course, it is not too exaggerated." Yes, what a perfect reason, time travel is invincible, long live time travel. However, it doesn't even have a soul, so what the hell is this a fanfic? If people do not exist, how can the generals be attached? When I read POT fan fiction, I have seen novice novels like Raven and Almighty Stallion, and the characters are twisted everywhere. However, I can read those novels with a joking attitude, as if a familiar prince is acting out a funny script, but I cannot accept such a setting. Yuta, the child I have always loved, with a cross scar on his head and awkwardly shouting "I must surpass my brother", was killed by the author before he even appeared, for the convenience of his YY. People who are less than perfect are not worthy of your ice palace, right? Then why don't you go find a prince you like and stage a life-or-death show at eight o'clock, just using Yuta's body! Yuta is not perfect, so naturally there are people who love him for all his shortcomings. He lives happily in St. Rudolf, and does not need others to modify or destroy him! Author, if you want to write a protagonist who is omnipotent and indistinguishable between male and female, can't you create one yourself? Can't you just travel through time yourself? Are there many people who have been transferred from the Time and Space Administration to the POT and refuse to leave? Why did I choose Yuta's body for you to be a parasite? The above is the source of my greatest pain and anger when reading this article. That Yuta is not the Yuta I am familiar with, but he bears his name and identity. Moreover, this is not a ridiculous performance. After Yuta finishes reading the ridiculous lines, he will return to the sunny and innocent boy, take a breath and wipe the sweat and walk to Guanyue to rest. The truly lovable Yuta was completely killed before he even appeared. This was a murder in the name of love. The motive was to give Tezuka a worthy partner in someone's heart. The process was soul traveling - and in the end, it was Yuta who was also a foreign school student, shattering a drop of glass heart. After I ignored the protagonist Yuta - what else could I do but ignore? When the protagonist is abbreviated as singing Chinese pop songs such as "Love is like the tide" from time to time, running around the world at the age of ten, calling the wind and rain and killing people in the invisible god at the age of fourteen, the full name is psychotic, what else can I do except ignore it - continue to look at the supporting characters. So, I saw an amazing description, enough to make a person who is both Yuta Mikoto and Tatekai Mikoto have a mental breakdown: Fuji Yuta, he is possessed by a ghost, Yukimura Sanada Tezuka Akutsu, what about you? Are they all fucking insane? Are you possessed too? ! ! It's not that the character is out of shape! It's not just the characters that are out of shape! What makes me angry is the author's contempt and insult to these supporting characters between the lines! Please look at the appearance of Yukimura in the article, the leader of the army of kings, the majestic Yukimura, and Sanada in the article, the iron-blooded deputy and the emperor on the court: "It's quite funny when I think of my acquaintance with Genichiro and Seiichi. I never thought of the goddess and emperor of Rikkai. One is sinister and the other is strong, but when they were young, they were so innocent and cute. When I was seven years old, I was already the registered disciple of old man Sanada. I often stayed at his house for training during holidays. I met Genichiro at that time, but I didn't take it to heart. But by chance, I saw Seiichi and Genichiro being bullied by other children. Anyway, Genichiro can be regarded as the grandson of my master, so I took action to teach those children a lesson, and at the same time I understood the reason. Seiichi was already very delicate and cute when he was a child, and Genichiro was innocent and innocent at that time. These two children were always liked and mentioned by adults, so they were naturally ostracized and bullied by other children of the same age. Thinking about it, they can be considered old acquaintances, so I naturally put them under my protection, and also found two little followers for myself. I have always been violent, and I am invincible in the world, so no one dares to mess with me in Tokyo and Kanagawa. Naturally, Seiichi and Genichiro are well protected by me. What I didn't expect was that my behavior would subtly affect two simple children. It even directly led to the principle that Genichiro became the "Black Faced God" and always solved problems with his fists. Many years later, when I knew these inside stories, I only had one thought, "To the animals and plants of Rikkai, I'm sorry for you..." Do you need to be protected by an unknown creature that is one year younger than them and comes from some unlucky world? Will Yukimura Sanada be your follower? ! If the above is just a foreshadowing, the following is the wonderful performance when the three people actually meet: ""Jingshi 1 "When Yuta 1 saw me, Seiichi looked very surprised and rushed towards me. I reached out a hand and caught him, protecting him in my arms. This was a habitual action when he was a child. Every time he was made to cry, he would throw himself into my arms and cry like this. It's been a long time since he's been like this, so it's obvious that he's worried about his illness. Even those in Lihai University were extremely surprised when they saw the behavior of their minister. He took Jingshi back to bed and placed the pomegranate flowers by the window. I didn't ask any more questions, but walked towards Genichiro and punched him quickly. He dodged. I punched and kicked quickly one after another and stopped when I felt satisfied. "Not bad." I said with satisfaction. It seems that the training has not fallen behind. This is the case every time we meet. I hug Seiichi and then test the training status of Genichiro. I always thought that Genichiro was the protector of Seiichi, so he was very strict with him. "Hey! Who are you! Why did you beat our minister without saying a word? 1 Kirihara shouted at me in dissatisfaction. Remembering that this little kelp was still hurting Shusuke in the future competition, I narrowed my eyes. Do you want to teach him a lesson first? "Shut up!" Genichiro saw me narrowing his eyes and shouted nervously at Kirihara. "Yuta, I haven't seen you for a long time." Seiichi opened his mouth to relieve Kirihara. I knew what he meant, so I didn't say much. Kirihara was about to say something, but he was immediately covered by Nioh Masaharu. Being able to cure Sanada shows that my skills are not simple. Of course, he has to protect his own little seaweed. " Above, between the lines, there is a strong breath of Qi·Dian Magnum Stallion's writing. I won't talk about how Yukimura later became jealous of "Yuta", or how Kirihara was taught a lesson by "Yuta" because of his match with Fuji. I won't talk about Sanada later. Fortunately, he was hidden in the snow, and he wouldn't be embarrassed and defeated. He just took over Yukimura, who "Yuta" looked down on. I told myself over and over again that this is not Li Hai, this is not those people... But! The author yourself said, "Tezuka Kunimitsu is a person worthy of my love. Other characters seem to be unworthy of your love, but please don't step on me so unscrupulously!" Give others a little respect and give it to yourself! ! ! Similarly, I don't recognize Fuji Shusuke here who has almost no personality, I don't admit Akutsujin who has been colluding with a gangster since he was 15 years old, I don't want to see Atobe Keigo who doesn't know anything other than chasing Fuji, and I don't know what the relationship between that little brat who had his hair rubbed hard by the protagonist without any resistance and who showed up in the bar at the age of 12 has anything to do with Echizen Ryoma! It's not difficult to ruin a character. It's rare to ruin a character while trampling on countless characters. Some people may say that this is because of love, because the author loves the ice palace in his heart so much. Okay, let's look at this passage: For the first time, I felt confused and didn't know what to do. I hid the panic in my heart and even ignored the problem as if I was running away. Yes, I was running away. I was touched by everything Yuta did to me, and I also knew that I had different emotions for him, but was this love? I don't know, I always feel like something is missing. Love, shouldn't be like this, right? It was a bit funny to watch Yuta approaching me cautiously, even at the expense of creating rumors to make me get used to his existence, and then suddenly leaving me so that I could understand my own heart... I knew all this, and even though it was clear, I still fell into his trap, but it was undeniable that I was somewhat willing. Perhaps, in Yuta's scene, he is no longer an outsider from the beginning. In this case, giving it a try seems to be a good choice. I don't know if it's love or not, but slowly explore and search for it, this is the path I choose... The above is the inner monologue of Minister Tezuka, who is infinitely loved by the author in this article. I'm sorry, I didn't know that this was the minister, the 15-year-old minister who was as handsome as ice, the boy who lived a determined and progressive life. I didn't know that the so-called perfection meant having such a flat chest and being as delicate as a woman. If there are tens of thousands of people who can step on one person, even though it is twisted, it is still a kind of love. But when the person who is "loved" over and over again is deformed and insulted, what is this? Regarding this article, after taking off the title of "Fan Ren", the God's perspective of existing as a "article" has been repeatedly confused, the language is blocked, typos are everywhere, common sense is messed up and other basic issues, which can be almost ignored, because the examples cited above are believed to be too shocking for everyone who loves those princes, so that they ignore the scars that are visible at a glance on the surface, but are not so shocking because of their superficiality. What I want to raise here is another question purely for the purpose of the article. It is a question that seems harmless at first glance but is thrilling when you think about it carefully. In the article, the setting of Yuta is that he was a man who killed countless people in his previous life, committed countless crimes, was omnipotent, and had hundreds of millions in savings in the bank when he died. Well, the so-called son of the wind. In this life, due to my uncontrollable physiological reaction, my brain automatically blocked the description of "Yuta"'s identity outside of students. So, please let me lead you to watch this protagonist's wonderful performance in Qingxueli: This "Yuta" had just become the director of the basketball department, but because "the deputy director stood in front of me, what was his name? I forgot. Really, I can't even say a word clearly." And "without looking, I just snapped my fingers, and from today on, XXX is the deputy director of the basketball department." Not to mention whether a so-called minister has the qualifications to arbitrarily replace the deputy minister, just based on the drama-like style here, I judge that the protagonist has no idea about respecting others. And the subsequent descriptions all confirm my view. After the battle at Fudomine, "Yuta" was thinking about whether to teach Ibu a lesson because he hurt Echizen; After the battle in Kanto Rikkai, "Yuta" decided to repair Kirihara for Fuji, and warned Yukimura, "I only care about my people, Seiichi. If you stand on Kirihara's side at this time, I can understand you, but you will no longer be my friend. I will shut you out." After the national competition, "Yuta" completely fell out with Li Hai, and his performance was as follows: "Seiichi turned his head and looked at me complicatedly, but I only gave him a cold look in return. He understood that it was the way I looked at strangers. Seiichi, Genichiro, from From now on, we are strangers." After that, he sneered at Yukimura and declared arrogantly, "I will not let anyone hurt Kunimitsu. I want you and me to get to know each other, so don't show up in front of me again, okay?" As for Yukimura, his response was ""Yuta, your gentleness is the cruelest weapon. Yuta, don't go, look at me, watch me walk out of your life step by step. Fuji Yuta, you have to remember that it was me who left first. "Yukimura looked at me with determination and relief in his eyes." I was excited again. Author, do you hate Lihai so much? Do you have to trample the people in Li Hai and run away quickly? Don't say any bullshit that hurt Tezuka! You also wrote about the battle between the two sides. Why didn't you see any revenge that Atobu encountered after that, and he still worked together with someone to study tricks on how to chase boys? The topic has been repeated, bring it back. At this time, "Yuta" said something to Yukimura, which made Yukimura, and me as a reader, completely understand his face. I was not afraid that Yukimura would know the other side of me. I looked directly at Yukimura, as if I wanted to see the depths of his soul. "Yukimura, do you know what happened to the two people who injured Kunimitsu's arm in the first grade? I was very merciful and just took one of their arms; and the little girl who had been chasing Kunimitsu, now, has Married to Hokkaido, right? Married to a man who is old enough to be her father. There are many others. Anyone who dares to harm Kunimitsu, anyone who approaches Kunimitsu with bad intentions, I will not let go! Now, Yukimura, are you sure you want to show up?" He raised his lips and smiled mischievously. Yukimura said he was crazy. And I was really surprised. It turns out that the only person worthy of Tezuka in the author's mind is actually such a bastard who has no distinction between right and wrong and is full of evil. And the next chapter is even more breathtaking. Because a girl planned to separate him and Tezuka (a very retarded method, she found a few gangsters), so after almost beating to death those who came to cause trouble, "a few days ago, a girl from Qingxu died in a car accident. I also felt relieved, I did a good job this time, it was absolutely a natural death, (this is so strange) no one will suspect me." With such an understatement, a human life disappeared, and the protagonist, of course, did not even have basic guilt, let alone guilt. What he was most worried about after that was that Tezuka, who had noticed this, wanted to leave him. Then, naturally, after one passion and one meditation, the protagonist decided, "Before patriotism, I have to be myself first." So he went out and worked for two years. At the age of 16, he "established a wind tour group, and developed it to the point where people heard about it" (this group can be seen as imitating hunters at a glance). When he came back, he saw Tezuka waiting for him on his own initiative. Moreover, it is also interspersed with the touching inner monologue of the heroine Tezuka: I have always suspected that something is missing in this love, and I have been testing whether I have ever loved Yuta. After thinking about it clearly, it turns out that what is missing is the devotion. It turns out that being moved does not equal love. That person hid his true self and used a false mask to treat this relationship. This realization made him angry and ashamed. He thought he had always been loved, but this love was just his own show. So I chose to give up, not wanting to be treated like a weakling or being manipulated by him. But only now do I realize that it turns out that he just doesn't know how to love. It turns out that he doesn't have no feelings. Two people who were ignorant about feelings collided together like this. They invested themselves ignorantly and fell in love with self-righteousness. In the end, all they got was hurt, but they couldn't deny the deep love. After losing it, I realized that I had gained so much. After disappearing, I realized how sincere he was and that I had received such a sincere love. I often receive weird gifts from him from nowhere, and the familiar words in the letters, as if it had never happened, as if he had never left me. I have never received a call from him, but I remember what he said before he left, "Call me if you miss me, and I will fly to you immediately even if it is the end of the world." Thinking of it always makes my heart warm, and even the corners of my eyes have a faint smile. I once thought that tennis would only be with me throughout my life, but now, there is him. He thought I had not forgiven him, but little did he know that the moment he left, I no longer blamed him. Even with a hint of hope, Fuji Yuta, in what manner will you appear in front of me again? You asked me to keep my heart for you, oh, Yuta, being loved like that by you, who else can I be moved by? Really? Insulting others, trampling on friendship, and ruthless treatment of life, but it became the sentence "He doesn't know how to love." Is this a third-rate heroine in Qiong Yao's works, or Minister Tezuka, who can almost be the embodiment of justice? ! From beginning to end, I didn't see the author condemning the protagonist's unconscionable behavior. On the contrary, the author himself sang praises for the male protagonist he created. Do you want me to copy the previous author's words again? "I may unconsciously idealize Yuta." Is this the ideal person in your mind? An executioner with bloody hands? ! Is this the true destiny of your beloved Tezuka? Are you a T fan or a T black guy? I never want to talk about three-dimensional issues. I have never been afraid to speculate on the author's thoughts with the greatest goodwill. I have always felt that reading the article is enough. Even if the article is like the person, why bother with the feelings between the lines? However, I have never seen an article that does not distinguish between good and evil to this extent, and I have never seen a love story that is so shameless! I have never seen a man who has no conscience, no education and no morals. He can be said to be infallible and perfectly interprets the word bully - a positive male protagonist! There is no requirement for every article to be positive, but I cannot tolerate such works that glorify evil! What's more, this kind of article is still in the name of "love", love for that minister and love for those princes. When I first read this article, I was surprised and happy because Baby Yuta, who had been almost forgotten by fan authors, finally had the time to turn around and become the protagonist. Unfortunately, the more I read, the more I hope he will stand in a forgotten corner forever and never be paraded through the streets by the author who pimps in the name of love. If you use someone else's character, you must not only be responsible for your own words, but also for those characters. In the world, you are not the only one who loves them, there are countless people who regard them as their destiny and are willing to do their best to protect them. Not to mention stepping on other people's idols to promote your own interests, that is the most despicable behavior. I thought that one day I would see a cold CP article, in which the beloved princes were all cute and happy. I guessed the beginning, but I didn't guess the ending. What I saw was my beloved characters, one after another, being rendered bloody and bloody by this author. And the child I loved most never appeared from the beginning. The above is not a review, but I would like to give it to the so-called POT fan who shocked me tonight: "Yuta Hits the Iceberg".

This article subverts the internet king, okay?

So… Touching... People… Want to... Cry...55555555…

><, I haven't seen Chapter 23~~

The chapter about torturing Yukimura's beauty was so heartbreaking

Come on~~~Don't be careless. . . Come on

Are you sure this is a Net King fan? Evil…

... It's not that the NP is very good or powerful, but it makes the prince sad. I really can't bear to see it...

Why doesn't anyone give you extra points? ! ! It's still a good article O(∩_∩)O~

Very interesting O(∩_∩)O Ha!