
The Perfect Substitute
完美替身
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 389k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
In booklists 6
Tracking Fully Read Books (Green River's Four-Star Limit Counts as Five Stars)
I read a bit of everything and have no particular dealbreakers, but I generally don't read stories where the protagonist is completely detached from love and the plot is all that matters, or characters who feel too down-to-earth. I judge fictional characters based only on my own values, not the author.
Melodramatic Stories: Romance, Danmei, and GL
I can handle trashy characters and angst. I just can’t stand a story that’s too bland. Please don’t judge my values, aaaaaah!
More Scum-Exes Getting Their Comeuppance
Lots of angsty stories. I love reading them, and love complaining about them even more. I almost always skim. Just because they're not for me doesn't mean they're bad.
Angsty BL
They’re all angsty, except Past Its Prime, which is a little more realistic. The rest are melodramatic, I think. I highly recommend Past Its Prime!
DA Doesn't Want to Continue 0002
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It is indeed a bit sweet in the end, but it is also true that Mr. Gu was stupid and disgusting before. He is already a bitch, and it is not a loss for the audience to fall into the trap as a bitch. Ning Ning really makes me feel bad. I am a medical student. Although I don't understand Wenli's treatment process a little, and in the end I was a little confused whether he was completely cured or just woke up and the disease is still there. But because I feel bad for Ning Ning, I also hope that Ning Ning's illness can be easily cured. Besides, I quite like Secretary Zhang. His portrayal is pretty good. He is a very lovable and loyal little brother. The relationship between the two protagonists was not easy due to Mr. Gu's previous ego and strength, and the lack of communication made things a bit tortuous later on. Fortunately, Zha Gong finally turned into a big dog and was willing to change himself. Otherwise, I would have asked the author to return the favor. I saw some comments saying that Lin Ke has a character problem, which I think is a bit right, and the description in the article once made me feel that Lin Ke might fall in love with Ning Ning later, but then he suddenly fell in love with Mr. Gu due to a misunderstanding and contact. Ah, I don't understand why Lin Ke suddenly likes Ning Ning in the article. It is too easy to fall in love with someone who has been prejudiced for so long. There may be too much guilt and change, but at this time Mr. Gu has already paid so much for Ning Ning. Lin Ke also sees it and is still friends with Ning Ning. If he feels guilty and does it with Mr. Gu The partners are quite good, but being so entangled in suddenly falling in love is a bit green tea. If the author is using his relationship to break through the scumbag impression for Mr. Gu, Lin Ke will not give up his own research because of his relationship with Ning Ning. It is really unnecessary to like Mr. Gu. It is a pity that the character is designed in the middle of the plot. Suddenly his own opinions began to waver, but fortunately the author was firm again in the end, which did not affect the overall look and feel of the ending. Well, overall it's pretty good. I liked it quite a lot. I stayed up late to finish it and finished it. But I also hope there will be new extras.
This article really made me think about the meaning of reading the article about Zha Gong chasing his wife in the crematorium. . . . . . . . I couldn't stand it until halfway through and skipped to watch the ending. . . . . . After that, I immediately read this article. . .
It's over. I like Secretary Zhang more and more. Author, you are poisonous.
Finished spreading flowers!! Let's talk about your feelings after reading this article in one sitting. I think this point is reflected very well. Let's talk about what I don't like. The plot is a bit slow. Especially starting from chapter 60, it feels like one story is told in two or even three chapters. But this is probably for the better portrayal of the characters. However, I felt uncomfortable watching it, so I brought it up. Secondly, the character design collapsed in the later period. I think everyone who watched it should be able to feel this. Especially for the character Lin, the author did not portray it well. I think the author wanted to make Lin black and make it more bloody, but it was self-defeating. I only felt the fragrance of green tea. But fortunately, Lin was finally given up in the last few chapters, and other characters were also brought back, so when I saw the final chapter, I thought it was pretty good. If you are really interested in ancient Chinese literature, I recommend you to join in. It is true that it is bloody, but it does not reach the level of cruelty that I wanted. It means that the cruelty is not profound, and it feels like it lacks energy. Finally, I wish you a happy new year and may your writing become smoother and smoother! Come on!
Still writing. . . . . Still writing. . . . Still writing. . . .
I cried most of the night. Oh my god, the author really writes well.
I enjoyed reading it so much. Thank you, the author's wife!
Oooh, oh, oh, absolutely, it makes my heart hurt
The end is full of flowers, it's so great, I just like to torture him
Cause: When I was reading a review of a certain book, I thought that a reader's long review was very interesting, so I went to check that person's book list, and then I found this book called "The Perfect Substitute". The other person gave it a very high praise, and I was very curious, so I read it. Process: When I saw the "ancient dog-blood flavor" in the copywriting and the title "substitute", I got excited. Although I am not a crazy fan of bloody novels, I actually prefer novels with plot flow, but it is really refreshing to read a bloody novel to change my mood, especially when I am reading a long QD story, it is really refreshing to read a bloody novel. Result: It's really sour and refreshing PART1 Invincible The first half of the 60 chapters should be regarded as the standard "scumbag" mode after some mutation processing, and it will be a crazy attack. The elements of Invincible Blood include: a substitute, the main character is terminally ill and dying without telling Gong, a contracted lover, Gong has Bai Yueguang, Bai Yueguang is going to return to China, Gong's relatives and friends all look down on him... It is really an extremely eye-catching "ancient bloody flavor" setting. I can think of countless bloody novels based on this element. But elements are just elements. Even if you write about the same elements, the final product will still end up being completely different due to the different personal characteristics of the author. Let's talk about Shou's setting first. In the first half of the article, he is an old-style back-and-forth, but he looks at the relationship between himself and Gong very calmly and detachedly, maintaining a sense of wanting to leave at any time. Therefore, although it is an old-fashioned bloody novel, although it is hit hard by the element of "substitute contract lover", the "terminal illness"->"knowing that I am not far from death"-"emotional stripping" surprisingly isolates a bit of twisted "refreshment". All readers can feel it when reading the article. It is foreseeable that the "protagonist's suffering" will inevitably leave the "protagonist's attack" ending. The author has created this expectation very well!!! In the early stage, I didn't feel cruel at all! I do feel sorry for the protagonist, and feel that what he has suffered is too unfair, but I know that he will definitely leave the protagonist, and when the contract time is up, he will want to abandon the other party, suppressing first and then rising up - this paragraph is written so well by the author, and what I want to praise is the author's grasp of grievance. Every time when the protagonist's grievance reaches the extreme, it will rebound and let people see some "hope", that is, he will appropriately place some places that can make people feel proud. Or by describing the protagonist's very subtle psychological changes, it expresses his determination to fight. I think the most important thing about Chasing Wife at the Crematorium is the description of suffering. In fact, chasing his wife in the crematorium was just a momentary highlight. In fact, the most important part was the completely selfish sacrifice that was let down in the early stage. So this involves two parts. 1. The attachment to feeling. That is, "cheap". But it's not the kind of meanness that would make people very annoying. You have to have the kind of persistence that is so "cheap" that you have character, and you are so "cheap" that you can move forward without hesitation and never look back until you hit a wall. 2. A deep love eventually gives up slowly. In other words, he was full of passion, but his life was destroyed by "scumbag". Why is there always a market for this type of bloody writing? I think it can actually resonate with many people in this part. In life. For example, everyone will experience the trough stage in life, right? Expectations for the future were eventually suppressed by all kinds of reality. "Future expectations" = The protagonist is in love with Zha Gong. The collapse of future expectations = the protagonist collapses due to his love for Zha Gong. So I always feel that the highlight of the wife-chasing crematorium is at the front, and the face-slapping crematorium at the back is mainly to give people a proud explanation. This proud explanation is necessary. An article must improve its acceptance by others, so a proud HE is a necessary element, right? PART2 The slag shape disintegration of slag attack Probably because of my understanding of the crematorium, after Chapter 60, I didn't enjoy watching the scumbag chasing his wife in the crematorium but chasing the protagonist Shou instead. The author did arrange the detailed story of the torture of scumbag Gong very carefully, but the torture was not absolute enough, and the feelings towards Gong were also very ambiguous and muddled, so the later stage was not painful and it felt like it was stuck with a piece of garbage chewing gum that could not be shaken off, and the key part was It's particularly long, Gong's remorse, what can I say about the character creation of the protagonist Gong - in the early stage, Gong was a lofty thing, a cold and uncontrollable fine porcelain. When he started chasing his wife in the crematorium, he was like a piece of dregs that was chopped to pieces on the ground. The moment when valuable utensils are thrown into pieces, it feels very satisfying. But the debris on the ground is something people don't want to pick up. So I have always felt that the best arrangement for chasing my wife at the crematorium is to "change the attack." It's satisfying and refreshing, and it can maintain the protagonist's ability to attack the "scum" - because the "scum" of a character is actually something you can't control, and that kind of charm is the character's strength. When he removed the "scum" element, the character was actually deboned and only a piece of soft skin was left, which felt quite scary to the touch. Therefore, if the article changes its attack style, it actually maintains the "attack" image. Well, when I say changing the attack here, I don't mean to force the author to change the attack. It's just that I suddenly thought of this as a personal hobby due to my divergent thinking. I was thinking all the way to this point while writing. In fact, I didn't think deeply when I wrote this post-reading review. But as I talked about it, I kind of understood that there were some bloody stories in the past. The early torture was so hateful, and the later torture was light. It was probably just that after the "slag attack porcelain" was smashed, the debris all over the ground was not displayed. Of course, "falling" must be "falling". The moment of "falling" is the highlight and needs to be described emphatically. If the ruthlessness of the "falling" is lost, the bloody writing will lose its flavor and the response that was created in the early stage to pave the way for "expected value" will definitely be scolded by the readers. PART3OthersOthers Overall, the author writes very well! Some people may not like to read such bloody articles about chasing wives and crematoriums, but when it comes to the elements of the article, the structure and rhythm of the article are very well controlled. It is simply a model of scumbag writing, and it is worth learning from other scumbag writers who make no sense. 1/11/2020