Liu Sanye transmigrates into a novel she's read. To return to reality, she has to steal the heroine's fortune. But how exactly do you steal someone's fortune?
The male lead takes the heroine as his disciple. Liu Sanye barges in.
The devoted second male lead confesses to the heroine. Liu Sanye barges in.
The cannon-fodder villain challenges the heroine. Liu Sanye barges in.
The heroine, Bai Tong: Why does this Sanye spend all day hanging around me? Could she be in love with me?
Male Lead #1, beaten into a pig's head by Liu Sanye: +1
Male Lead #2, beaten into a pig's head by Liu Sanye: +2
Male Lead #3, beaten into a pig's head by Liu Sanye: +3
Everyone in the cultivation world thinks Liu Sanye likes Bai Tong. Liu Sanye insists she's innocent. Are you all blind? She's a proper, vicious female supporting character! She's really just picking fights with the heroine! Damn it!
Theme: Dare to fight back against fate.
Eighty percent of the reason why I wasted time and stayed up late to read this novel was because I was angry about Chu Danxue's death. I don't know what the author's original intention was when he wrote this novel. This is the first time I'm so angry at the plot of a novel.
I am both a reader and a writer. The creation of my works is the result of inspiration combined with countless lucky coincidences. It is hard-won, and to put it crudely, it is just like my own flesh and blood. Everything the author gives it may be a love for a small plot or a fantasy about a certain type of people, forming a story and a world in the hands of the author. And it can be created later to resonate with readers. In my opinion, it is all a coincidence of countless encounters. It deserves respect from the creator who is called the author.
Novels will have protagonists and supporting characters, and life and death, which is normal for humans. The author is also a human being. When arranging plots for his characters, the most important thing is to think like a human being. Isn't it true that writing a novel means believing that "one flower, one world, one tree, one bodhi"? Don't you just want to change an unreasonable plot that shouldn't happen? Isn't it just to change the seemingly determined destiny? Does it make sense that Chu Danxue Demon Clan's Sacred Artifact was killed, was rescued, became a senior sister, was humiliated and turned into a demon and wanted to die, and was finally saved again? The first time he was killed by his lover because the devil was a pervert, the second time he was insulted and possessed by a pervert because he was caught by his lover and coveted by the pervert. After being insulted, he still called Jin Lingdang's name for help? ! Is this TM written based on the author's enemies? Please help Chu Danxue, who is wearing a book. This is completely in line with the law of beautiful, strong and miserable authors not being human beings.
I get angry when I think about it. In order to make up a novel, the character plot does not need to be so miserable. We all know that life is worse than death. Writing a character to death to advance the plot is already a debt to the character. At least there are people behind others who remember that cultivating a savior can be regarded as a benefit to the world. Writing a cannon fodder is dead, and brushing it off is also showing respect for the character. Why did Chu Danxue die so miserably? Isn't death bad enough? ! It was said before that Chu Danxue's death was just to push the plot in the early stage. The physical torture was not much better. Later, Liu Sanye acted as a variable. Chu Danxue solved the mystery of his life experience and chanted his lover's name for help. His spirit was tortured again. How could it be worse? ? ? ? ? What's the use? What is the use of the protagonist?
I thought that at the end, the protagonist could be ruthless and destroy the world, live in a big dream, be a puppet and a puppet, and end the tragedy of sacrificing a few people to save the many, and he would not be in vain. Okay, so this thing can still be used as HE? All those who died have become ghost cultivators, and Chu Danxue has grown up and practiced cultivation again, but she feels that she has forgotten something. Her lover seems to be with her, the abuse is over, and everyone has a bright future. I really... To put it bluntly, a novel must be able to see something, right? The silly ones can be entertained, the tragedies can be moved, and the brainless ones can be entertained. What about this thing? It made me feel uncomfortable and angry, and the most memorable thing is the supporting character's ridiculous death and happy ending. How can I spend money to make it happen?
You can see how angry my remarks are from being rational to being a firecracker, right? The novel ends with a conspiracy in the upper world. There is a new world behind it, so don't harm other worlds. The original intention of the first dozens of chapters is really like a dream. I would rather the world in the book was destroyed by Liu Sanye with white pupils. I would rather write this book after dozens of chapters and discard it. I would rather never read this book!
There is no need to refute me in the comments below. There is no personal attack and it has no impact on society. If I can't even say that I can't take the blame when I encounter something that doesn't go well with me while reading a novel, what's the difference between me and the non-human plot in the book? I have so many moonstones!
How should I put it? There are both comedy and serious things in a novel. The character Jun Yining is part of the comedy, and the ending of turning into a ghost cultivator is also expected. But the senior sister made me feel very outrageous. Jin valued her so much, but in the end she was simply taken away by Qiu He. The scene where Sanye and Bai Huo ascended to the upper realm made me feel even more bloodthirsty. They were treated like clowns and the torture ended so happily. Sanye hated the previous Gu Du so much. Shouldn't she hate the upper realm that was more outrageous than her?
After reading the whole novel, the most uncomfortable thing is the death of the senior sister
After two days of reading, I finally finished the article. During this period, I laughed, cried, and felt confused. The pace in the early stage is slow, focusing on describing the growth of the characters and foreshadowing the emotional lines between the characters, such as Chu Danxue and Jun Yining. In the early and middle stages, the pace begins to speed up, but it always maintains a gentle trend. Until the middle and late stages, the pace suddenly develops rapidly. The most obvious one is the plot of Dragon King Palace and beyond. It feels like being rushed to add the presets quickly. Golden Bell is the key node that speeds up the plot. From knowing the truth about Ah Xue's death, to running back to the palace and then to the furnace and back to the palace, and finally not looking for Chu Danxue because of guilt? Could it be that the matter of Chu Danxue's spiritual vein being sealed by her was over? There are demon cultivators everywhere outside. Not to mention the plot of being kidnapped, Chu Danxue is also very dangerous in the Northern Territory because he cannot use his spiritual power! And shouldn't there be a lot of people in Linglong Palace? After all, Jin Lingdang is also a princess, and the maid beside her can't even defeat Chu Danxue, who can't use spiritual power, but she is still being blackmailed? Forget it, apart from Hong Jian, the other palace maids should also know that Jin Lingdang values Chu Danxue very much, but she didn't keep strict supervision and let Chu Danxue escape? The darkening of Golden Bell was also arranged very quickly, and it was settled in just one or two chapters. At this point, bugs continue to emerge, and all the foreshadowing laid in the early stage has become questionable. For example, Xunqiu, who occupied so many scenes in the early stage, was offline without any explanation until the finale. Qiu He and Gu Panlian only explained that they were "outsiders", but where did this outsider come from? Does the earth in the article really exist? If Tiandao only tampered with Liu Sanye's memory, what about Gu Panlian and the others? Giving them the identity of "an accident caused by Tian Shui Yue" would be nothing more.
And one thing I'm very strange about is that since the demon king has been labeled as a person who has suffered a lot, why are the fox sisters indifferent? Even if they can protect themselves from being affected, what about the other sects? The article barely mentions other sects, only emphasizing that He Guizong is the strongest. But there was a war later, and the strongest sect in the world of immortality was difficult to resist. Didn't any other sects want to come and help? If He Guizong is defeated, they will not be able to escape, so it is better for Bo Yibo to help He Guizong. Even if I don't want these details, what about the final Demon Lord? Jin Lingdang is dead, where is the Demon Lord puppet she controlled? Wouldn't it be more advantageous for the Demon Lord to break free if she died? But if it's gone, it's gone. Although the ending is a happy ending (doubtful), and every positive character is alive, it makes people not happy at all, because this is just a farce in which the "villain" wins. The two protagonists are trapped in the border of chaos forever. Chu Danxue is still the same as before, just like when she was a demon sacred object, she is also the one who lives and dies. Jun Yining walked around the world happily and openly, ignoring the agreement he had made with Liu Sanye. Mrs. Fish could never get her red koi back. The world is as usual, just like Liu Sanye and Bai Tong never came, and they destroyed the Demon Palace by the way. Nothing has changed.
It was fun at first, but later on I felt like my writing skills couldn't keep up with my imagination.
When I first heard that this book had an upper realm, my heart skipped a beat, but I didn't expect the ending to be more hasty than I thought.
Turns out this is what it feels like to be fooled
After reading the whole article, the beginning is quite interesting. I don't want to comment on the rest. I can only say that words are the most faithful mirror of thoughts. Good luck.
Damn it, in the middle of the night, Senior Sister is actually behaving like that. . . . The author keeps me awake! !
Hey, if you die, you are dead. If you are reborn, you will no longer be the senior sister.
Eighty percent of the reason why I wasted time and stayed up late to read this novel was because I was angry about Chu Danxue's death. I don't know what the author's original intention was when he wrote this novel. This is the first time I'm so angry at the plot of a novel. I am both a reader and a writer. The creation of my works is the result of inspiration combined with countless lucky coincidences. It is hard-won, and to put it crudely, it is just like my own flesh and blood. Everything the author gives it may be a love for a small plot or a fantasy about a certain type of people, forming a story and a world in the hands of the author. And it can be created later to resonate with readers. In my opinion, it is all a coincidence of countless encounters. It deserves respect from the creator who is called the author. Novels will have protagonists and supporting characters, and life and death, which is normal for humans. The author is also a human being. When arranging plots for his characters, the most important thing is to think like a human being. Isn't it true that writing a novel means believing that "one flower, one world, one tree, one bodhi"? Don't you just want to change an unreasonable plot that shouldn't happen? Isn't it just to change the seemingly determined destiny? Does it make sense that Chu Danxue Demon Clan's Sacred Artifact was killed, was rescued, became a senior sister, was humiliated and turned into a demon and wanted to die, and was finally saved again? The first time he was killed by his lover because the devil was a pervert, the second time he was insulted and possessed by a pervert because he was caught by his lover and coveted by the pervert. After being insulted, he still called Jin Lingdang's name for help? ! Is this TM written based on the author's enemies? Please help Chu Danxue, who is wearing a book. This is completely in line with the law of beautiful, strong and miserable authors not being human beings. I get angry when I think about it. In order to make up a novel, the character plot does not need to be so miserable. We all know that life is worse than death. Writing a character to death to advance the plot is already a debt to the character. At least there are people behind others who remember that cultivating a savior can be regarded as a benefit to the world. Writing a cannon fodder is dead, and brushing it off is also showing respect for the character. Why did Chu Danxue die so miserably? Isn't death bad enough? ! It was said before that Chu Danxue's death was just to push the plot in the early stage. The physical torture was not much better. Later, Liu Sanye acted as a variable. Chu Danxue solved the mystery of his life experience and chanted his lover's name for help. His spirit was tortured again. How could it be worse? ? ? ? ? What's the use? What is the use of the protagonist? I thought that at the end, the protagonist could be ruthless and destroy the world, live in a big dream, be a puppet and a puppet, and end the tragedy of sacrificing a few people to save the many, and he would not be in vain. Okay, so this thing can still be used as HE? All those who died have become ghost cultivators, and Chu Danxue has grown up and practiced cultivation again, but she feels that she has forgotten something. Her lover seems to be with her, the abuse is over, and everyone has a bright future. I really... To put it bluntly, a novel must be able to see something, right? The silly ones can be entertained, the tragedies can be moved, and the brainless ones can be entertained. What about this thing? It made me feel uncomfortable and angry, and the most memorable thing is the supporting character's ridiculous death and happy ending. How can I spend money to make it happen? You can see how angry my remarks are from being rational to being a firecracker, right? The novel ends with a conspiracy in the upper world. There is a new world behind it, so don't harm other worlds. The original intention of the first dozens of chapters is really like a dream. I would rather the world in the book was destroyed by Liu Sanye with white pupils. I would rather write this book after dozens of chapters and discard it. I would rather never read this book! There is no need to refute me in the comments below. There is no personal attack and it has no impact on society. If I can't even say that I can't take the blame when I encounter something that doesn't go well with me while reading a novel, what's the difference between me and the non-human plot in the book? I have so many moonstones!
How should I put it? There are both comedy and serious things in a novel. The character Jun Yining is part of the comedy, and the ending of turning into a ghost cultivator is also expected. But the senior sister made me feel very outrageous. Jin valued her so much, but in the end she was simply taken away by Qiu He. The scene where Sanye and Bai Huo ascended to the upper realm made me feel even more bloodthirsty. They were treated like clowns and the torture ended so happily. Sanye hated the previous Gu Du so much. Shouldn't she hate the upper realm that was more outrageous than her?
After reading the whole novel, the most uncomfortable thing is the death of the senior sister
After two days of reading, I finally finished the article. During this period, I laughed, cried, and felt confused. The pace in the early stage is slow, focusing on describing the growth of the characters and foreshadowing the emotional lines between the characters, such as Chu Danxue and Jun Yining. In the early and middle stages, the pace begins to speed up, but it always maintains a gentle trend. Until the middle and late stages, the pace suddenly develops rapidly. The most obvious one is the plot of Dragon King Palace and beyond. It feels like being rushed to add the presets quickly. Golden Bell is the key node that speeds up the plot. From knowing the truth about Ah Xue's death, to running back to the palace and then to the furnace and back to the palace, and finally not looking for Chu Danxue because of guilt? Could it be that the matter of Chu Danxue's spiritual vein being sealed by her was over? There are demon cultivators everywhere outside. Not to mention the plot of being kidnapped, Chu Danxue is also very dangerous in the Northern Territory because he cannot use his spiritual power! And shouldn't there be a lot of people in Linglong Palace? After all, Jin Lingdang is also a princess, and the maid beside her can't even defeat Chu Danxue, who can't use spiritual power, but she is still being blackmailed? Forget it, apart from Hong Jian, the other palace maids should also know that Jin Lingdang values Chu Danxue very much, but she didn't keep strict supervision and let Chu Danxue escape? The darkening of Golden Bell was also arranged very quickly, and it was settled in just one or two chapters. At this point, bugs continue to emerge, and all the foreshadowing laid in the early stage has become questionable. For example, Xunqiu, who occupied so many scenes in the early stage, was offline without any explanation until the finale. Qiu He and Gu Panlian only explained that they were "outsiders", but where did this outsider come from? Does the earth in the article really exist? If Tiandao only tampered with Liu Sanye's memory, what about Gu Panlian and the others? Giving them the identity of "an accident caused by Tian Shui Yue" would be nothing more. And one thing I'm very strange about is that since the demon king has been labeled as a person who has suffered a lot, why are the fox sisters indifferent? Even if they can protect themselves from being affected, what about the other sects? The article barely mentions other sects, only emphasizing that He Guizong is the strongest. But there was a war later, and the strongest sect in the world of immortality was difficult to resist. Didn't any other sects want to come and help? If He Guizong is defeated, they will not be able to escape, so it is better for Bo Yibo to help He Guizong. Even if I don't want these details, what about the final Demon Lord? Jin Lingdang is dead, where is the Demon Lord puppet she controlled? Wouldn't it be more advantageous for the Demon Lord to break free if she died? But if it's gone, it's gone. Although the ending is a happy ending (doubtful), and every positive character is alive, it makes people not happy at all, because this is just a farce in which the "villain" wins. The two protagonists are trapped in the border of chaos forever. Chu Danxue is still the same as before, just like when she was a demon sacred object, she is also the one who lives and dies. Jun Yining walked around the world happily and openly, ignoring the agreement he had made with Liu Sanye. Mrs. Fish could never get her red koi back. The world is as usual, just like Liu Sanye and Bai Tong never came, and they destroyed the Demon Palace by the way. Nothing has changed.
It was fun at first, but later on I felt like my writing skills couldn't keep up with my imagination.
When I first heard that this book had an upper realm, my heart skipped a beat, but I didn't expect the ending to be more hasty than I thought.
Turns out this is what it feels like to be fooled
After reading the whole article, the beginning is quite interesting. I don't want to comment on the rest. I can only say that words are the most faithful mirror of thoughts. Good luck.
Damn it, in the middle of the night, Senior Sister is actually behaving like that. . . . The author keeps me awake! !
Hey, if you die, you are dead. If you are reborn, you will no longer be the senior sister.