The Days of Pairing Up with My Ex-Boyfriend

It's a negative review, don't read it (it's a joke, but it's really a criticism) This is the fifth book I have read about Madam. Compared with other stories written by Madam that focus on plot, this one focuses on emotions and the writing is slightly different, but it is also very good. It still gets better and smoother as it goes on. Madam grasps the plot and complex emotions with the power of writing, but I have to say that it has many flaws. After reading the ratings and reviews, I didn't really want to read it, but I couldn't help but read it. I almost gave up by Chapter 56, but I was distracted by the beautiful plot designed by my wife to have both the attacker and the follower withdraw from the group and fight back both emotionally and professionally, so I finished reading it in one sitting. My thoughts after reading this are that this is the only one among the five books I have read that received one or two negative reviews. Although 8.8 Is not a low score, it still reflects some problems. Let me talk about my thoughts from a few points, and the ranking is in the order of reading the article. 1 Title copywriting 2 Attack and receive feelings 3 Ember treatment 4 a play within a play 5 endings First of all, the first point is the title copywriting Although I am relatively familiar with my wife, when I first saw the title copy, I still couldn't help but follow the development of Jinjiang novels in the past and speculate on the plot. Therefore, the copywriting of literary names is very confusing, or to put it more bluntly, the copywriting of literary names is a fraud. ① First of all, the title of the novel must give people the first impression of speculation throughout the entire novel, right? But after reading the entire article, I can't remember how Gong Shou fired CP. In the first drama "Monopoly", both of them quit the crew and failed to become popular. In the second drama "Nian Yang", the character was not fired, but the friendship between classmates was fired in order to counterattack the Monopoly crew. However, from the perspective of the plot, it is more of a counterattack than a hype, and this plot is only one part, so I quickly skipped it. In the third drama "Rooftop", Gong did not participate at all... So to me, the text's line of "selling rotten food like crazy in the play" is a complete fraud. The next sentence, "Who would have guessed that he is acting, is really ready to move." Before following the previous sentence and reading the article, I thought it was Gong Shou's love again sprouting up in the play, but that's not the case at all. I say this not to condemn my wife, but to say that the title and copywriting do not fit the plot will really leave readers with a big gap. After all, it is a sign of attracting customers (this is also closely related to the data of the article). Although my wife wrote well, she still kept me, but looking back, I forget that the article is not on point, and I still want to read the plot of the title. ②The message given to me by the character design part of the copywriting is that there has always been no resistance between attack and reception. This is another point. It is true that readers like to make up their own minds, but after reading the copy, I preconceptions that attacking is more proactive, the kind of loyal dog, or the affectionate domineering person commonly seen in Jinjiang. But the whole story, how should I put it, I can't say that I don't love Gong. From the beginning, Shou was obsessed with Gong but didn't want to take the initiative, so he awkwardly asked for attention and couldn't get love. After he got enlightened, he took the initiative to pursue the ending (it also has something to do with the main perspective. Part of Gong's psychology was lost and was not shown in front of the readers, so the affectionate aspect was greatly reduced). It gave me a very subtle feeling. Shou took the initiative and asked to get back together, but Gong rejected it more than once! What do you mean by having no resistance? Your resistance is too strong to attack! My wife wrote very well, but it was just too good. I was cheerful at first, but in the end I admitted that I was tired when I went to Spain, so I postponed the waiting for courtship for the sake of the easy victory in front of me (the last straw of breaking up). I choked up! Originally, the feeling of chasing my husband in the crematorium from the perspective of the protagonist and the recipient has been lingering in my mind. The feeling of exhaustion here is really real, and there is no igniting enthusiasm like the rekindling of a broken mirror. It is too restrained. Although the article repeats that I dare not love, pray, or hope too much, but, alas, the feelings are too suppressed, making the reader and the recipient doubt the sense of lack. PS, I don't think this is Jinjiang's kind of crematorium literature, it's just a normal reunion where one person takes the initiative, but when I think about the copywriting, I feel so painful! Second point, feelings The wife is really good at it. The character design is very good. The young boys fall in love for the first time. One is not lacking in love, and the other is timid because of love. The wife is very good at describing the running-in and depression of the first love but not being able to get along after the fierce collision, plus the exhaustion of separation after graduation. I don't think anyone feels sorry for anyone, but the comments section is really uproarious about it, which affects the reading experience. Although I can't blame anyone, after all, it's normal for readers to empathize with others when writing about pain, and to feel distressed when writing about pain. But when it comes to fighting, I'm still a mask of pain! The third point is the person Ember To be honest, at first, I thought that there would be no role for Ember. The wife is always slapped in the face, which is not Shuangwen's kind of dismissal. Personally, although the counterattack in the opening attack is not enjoyable, at least it is not aggrieved. The result! At the end, Ember forces Shou to watch him commit suicide! ! On the one hand, this incident left a serious psychological shadow on Shou. On the other hand, while making some readers pity the ember, it also gave others a deep and helpless sense of nausea. I can understand my wife's idea of ​​writing a story, but if you label it as a "shuangwen" in Jinjiang, it's a scam. It's really so refreshing! The thunder of Ember explodes sooner or later. Although it appears several times in the middle, it does not bring any sense of crisis. The ending suddenly explodes, killing Shou and the readers. The point is that he is not the kind of pure bad (although it is not a whitewash, but it also brings a whitewash effect. In the attack and shou duo, doing this kind of thing is really not worth the gain)... Regarding the two aspects of Ember, the good thing is that it deepens the feelings of attack and retribution, but the bad thing is that it ruins the ending experience. Really, this happened in the penultimate chapter, and my wife doesn't like writing extras. Although the penultimate chapter is officially concluded, the feeling of suffocation cannot be suppressed! I can understand that my wife dealt with the ember at the end, with a beginning and an end, and dealt with the thread that runs through the whole story. But! To me, Yu Yan revealed that he liked being loved and loved. I was really speechless for a moment. I always thought he liked being loved. Although I thought it was love at first and then thought it was a lack of love, I never expected that he liked being loved... I am a heartthrob, this persona is a little exaggerated in the front, but it does not affect the plot and emotions, but suddenly the ember explodes and I can't control my love... I really, I laughed, I also felt that both the heartthrob and the ember collapsed. Deleting the ending scene of Ember has no impact or even better. After watching the feedback from most people, I feel that because Ember brings another effect, it is really unnecessary to solve Li Ding. Although Gong is a small company, he himself said that there is nothing he can do. He is also prepared to solve the problem of being suppressed. This matter should have been solved by him, but he ended up solving it in a roundabout way by kidnapping Shou. It gave me a terrible impression. To be more serious, when I think about it, I feel that attacking is useless (although there are reasons why I am personally too deeply influenced by the Jinjiang BaZong to get out, but as far as Jinjiang's audience is concerned, they just prefer the BaZong, the BaZong, Tianliang Wangpo's BaZong) Overall, the Ember event is a three-in-one event, stimulating the emotions of attacking and receiving + resolving Li Ding's Ember + perfecting the Ember, but it's not necessary, really. The fourth point, the play within the play I really, really like the wife's drama within the drama, but it's a pity that there is only one complete story in this book, and that is "Rooftop" When I read the previous two scripts of "Monopoly" and "Nian Yang", I still didn't understand why there were no complete scripts. The fragments were really meaningless. Only later did I realize that it was a structural problem. The main plot of this book is about emotions, supplemented by it, so Mrs. Kai's wife failed in the script. In the absence of a complete script, relatively speaking, it is only a fragment. When Gongshou quickly enters the stage of their emotional explosion at the beginning, the reader first experiences Gongshou's personal feelings, rather than trying to figure out the undercurrent of Gongshou's confrontation through the characters in the script (maybe I There are too many scenes, so I thought about it from big to small, and it's great to promote the emotions of Shou from the characters in the script, but there will be a sense of depression? Maybe the wife feels that the expression of emotions is limited). Considering the character of Shou this time, the plot design of the wife is also very good. The fifth point is the ending My wife really doesn't like to write extras, but compared to the Prince and the Best Actor, that one is perfect. The problem with this one is not Embers, it's still a close call between success and failure. The fifth point is the ending I don't think it's a bad ending or anything, but combined with Shou's emotional restraint and the violent ending of Embers, coupled with Shou's career leaving a blank space, this ending is really not that good. After analyzing it, let's talk about Gong. I actually don't have much opinion. I think the relationship line has come full circle and the relationship is renewed. However, there are many people in the comment section who feel that Gong is no longer in love. After reading the ending comment section, I think everything they said makes sense. My wife is biased. The author of the play also prefers to close other basic emotional lines. This has always been the case, but it is different. The wife likes to find romance in reality, so the running-in between attack and suffering is really too real. Their pain is easy for readers to sympathize with, and most people experience this. The old tiredness was not lifted well in the ending. Although Shou is said to be back, but for the readers, it is still not passionate and loving enough. The love between Shou and Shou cannot return to the pure first love before the mirror was broken, nor has it completely settled into a mature couple who can go hand in hand. This It is a sense of instability that comes back from the attacker and the recipient, giving readers a sense of distance that still leaves a gap even though they have not embraced each other tightly. Therefore, many people think that something will happen between them. This is the biggest unsatisfactory ending of this article. This is not the final ending. Alas, after saying so much, it's already 3,000 words. My original intention is to hope that my wife will be better. After all, I have read five books about my wife. I also noticed my wife's poor grades in the past, and I also analyzed some of them through the title and copywriting. I hope that my wife will be better!

The second brush is completed. At first, in my mind, Blowing Rain didn't need to change. The moon in the sky bends down and holds your hand. It will inevitably get tired after all, so I hope there is someone who can stop him from bending down. I hope he will always be curious, always enthusiastic, remain childlike and full of energy. I hope he doesn't have to understand the suffering in the world, all the shadows are turned away from him, he just needs to open warmly. Even the flowers in the greenhouse. But he loved him and changed himself. But Chuiyu has not completely changed. He still retains his passion for looking at the world and still shines brightly. Father Jiang's words convinced me that Chuiyu was polishing his pearls, but that's not everything. (There are a lot of mixed feelings)

Alas, it's rare to have a long comment below. A reader reads the article with true feelings and writes so many comments, which really makes the author cry bitter tears. But what I want to say is that the long comments from readers below can reflect to a certain extent the reasons why the data in Jinjiang is not good. It cannot be integrated into jj's current assembly line routine articles (many of which are really assembly line products, industrial saccharin), but for the sake of data, they still "false" some things, such as the title of the article, tags, and copywriting. I think the following comments from friends are mostly because I have read too many other novels with such non-nutritive names, so I have "preset" a lot of content and the results are inconsistent. It's really difficult for young authors. . I obviously put a lot of effort into reviewing a lot of data and the structure of several novels is quite large. The data is not as good as the fast food junk food recommended by the new article on the list. The ecological niche is still stuck between wanting to read fast food-style cookies and puppy blood and relaxing, and wanting to read novels with a logical closed loop and a sense of living beings. The first thing I say to Amway people is don't be fooled by the title of the novel. I think the author's structure and protagonist creation are both online. It's just that the lack of a core hot topic + a protagonist with more tension (that is, not as "one-dimensional" as a real living person) makes the film popular first and then pulls the data of the previous treasure articles. Because in my opinion, the author's articles have already been cheated in the early stage to make movies in the world of cultivation and pre-collected BGM. These two films have "memes", and the others are difficult to summarize and refine the "hot spots", which is unlikely to attract readers who rush to scan the article. Moreover, the author's CP has a strong sense of life. The feelings are more delicate and the reflections are more real. I think the writing style of this leisurely and sweet tea is very good, but I can also feel that it is not easy to "explode". Just like what a previous reader friend said, it is similar to "If you say you still love each other, why don't you get back together immediately and you still pull him?" In fact, people are very complicated. This is very real, just like in "Awakening" in the early stage, Gong used Shou's feelings for him to let Shou enter the game first. It is a natural reflection of the three-dimensional character creation. It can also become the legendary "lightning point" [changed] I have to say that characters with a higher gray level (and readers will especially care about the best black and white attitude towards the other half of the CP), although they are more "living", they cannot arouse discussion [changed] Alas, it's late at night and I've finished reading Wilderness before coming back to read other articles. The author hasn't published a new article yet, so I can just say a few random words. Looking forward to the new article [red heart]

Halfway through the movie, I couldn't help but listen to Karen Mok's "So Many People in the World" on a loop. There is a line in this song that will last forever in my misty eyes. It was the blue morning when I first saw you. I was just thinking about Yang Xuefeng taking a picture of the holding hands in the screen saver. In the corridor of time, footsteps shouted, they met again in the second season of "Monopoly", and they got together again in that hotel. It was also in this long and fateful morning and dusk that gray leaves were floating in the pond. Jiang Chuiyu had a fight and ran back to the hotel to decide their entanglement with the color of the lotus. There are so many people in this world, and there is an open door in the crowd. Jiang Chuiyu counted from one to ten and destined to be Yang Xuefeng. A few frames of the past flashed by in the evening breeze, and I woke up in the warm light with many things to say. I'm so lucky to have you in this world, and I'll never let you go.

2. I was still very moved after reading it. After personally experiencing some things, I can better understand the views on "loneliness" in the article. The author's writing style is very good. It doesn't drag out but leaves enough memorable points.

Blowing Rain is really beautiful. In my mind, he never needs to change haha. Chuiyu's love is really sincere, wanton, and beautiful. He has always been brave, as fresh as the beginning. I think what Chuiyu has experienced in their love is not to let Chuiyu think clearly. Chuiyu loves when he loves, sad when sad, interesting is interesting, and decisively wants to be together when he wants to be together, so in my It seems that whether what he has experienced or what Gong (who suddenly forgot his name/dog head/) has experienced, it is actually to make Gong think clearly - especially in the last paragraph, when someone (who also forgot his name) commits suicide in front of Chuiyu, and when Gong actually hugs him, the feeling that Chuiyu has been tolerating Gong is particularly obvious. In fact, Gong's feelings are right, because no matter who Chuiyu likes or who he is with, the time he spends with Chuiyu must be particularly beautiful and unforgettable. Finally, I like the author's writing.

The plot of these last few chapters made me have the urge to give it two stars... I could feel what the author was going to write, but it felt a bit stiff. Maybe I couldn't stand it so I read it too fast. It's sad, the writing is okay, but I won't read it again because of the next few chapters.

That's how it ends I always feel that there are still many unfinished words. Consider it a semi-open ending. Although it ends in a traditional entertainment industry article, announcing the love affair. But there have been hidden worries between the two since their reconciliation. Xuefeng's words: I'm lucky enough to be liked, how can I ask to be liked all the time? There was no further answer from him in subsequent texts. The latter part is mainly about Chui Yu's inner growth. I want to fall in love with the light and start to learn this line with no final explanation. Maybe it is their love. When Chuiyu started learning about lighting, no one thought he was serious. Just like his previous hobbies of acting, violin, music and so on. The novel is not written to the later part, but I think it is like learning and liking lights. As time goes by, people around him will understand that Chuiyu also loves things throughout his life. Not just those hobbies from the past that could be replaced at any time. After getting along with each other later, Chuiyu gradually changed (started to make strategies for dating, realized that other people liked things that he didn't like, and truly understood Xuefeng's preferences, needs, and conversations with his father), as well as the experience of witnessing Yu's suicide. During the period he had just gone through, Chuiyu couldn't even accept that Xuefeng and he were not in the same space for a moment. I don't know if Xuefeng also changed his mind at this time and gained some sense of security. He was no longer in a state of being ready to leave whenever the rain blows. Do you understand that Chuiyu can't live without him? But I think it's like Blowing Rain's attitude towards lights. Time will tell. As we get along year after year, Chui Yu gradually changes. One day Xuefeng will understand that Chuiyu's love for him and his love for Chuiyu are equally important and irreplaceable. Of course he is not an indispensable violin to Chuiyu. And the love of my life must be you. They will always be together, and they will always find the answer through a lifetime of companionship. But it still hurts. After all, the sooner you understand, the sooner you will be happy. I really want a side story to see a completely happy ending! The other thing is a little bit of personal growth. I read a lot of articles in Jinjiang, mainly sweet articles of course. Most of them are just too sweet. This is a rare article that changed my own ideas while reading it. I am also thinking about how to like someone and how to deal with love relationships. Thank you for writing such a novel, which made me have some reflections on myself. Show your heart to me. Looking forward to the next article~

It feels like diaphragm after eating shi

It's pretty unconventional, but it's a bit scary for Ember to die in front of the blowing rain.