Is it a debut novel? The writing is very comfortable! Author's reply:
Haha, yes~ Thanks for the compliment!
So pretty!!! Come on, update. The author replies:
Thank you ~ Haha, your ears will cheer up!
"A Shao, I'm back! Come and help~" The door was kicked open by Li Ji. He threw the large and small bags he was carrying on the ground, swaggered into the room and spread them out on a chair. He curled his lips at me and said, "A Shao, stop making trouble. I know you are here. Help me put my things away quickly!"
'Pout at me'…?
Li Ji shouldn't be able to see 'me'.
From the 'my' perspective, Li Ji could only curl his lips in the air...
The young man has a handsome face and stands out——? I don't know if you made a typo, or if my Chinese language level is low due to my long stay abroad... Anyway, I don't understand...
At that time, my existence had only one purpose, which was to practice, practice, and practice again.
Personally, I feel that it is not going well... I don't think so. Change it to: At that time, I had only one goal of survival - to practice, practice, and practice again.
Writing is not easy, so do your best! Send a bunch of flowers~~
Author's reply:
I made changes based on the comments, thank you so much~
Is it a debut novel? The writing is very comfortable! Author's reply: Haha, yes~ Thanks for the compliment!
So pretty!!! Come on, update. The author replies: Thank you ~ Haha, your ears will cheer up!
"A Shao, I'm back! Come and help~" The door was kicked open by Li Ji. He threw the large and small bags he was carrying on the ground, swaggered into the room and spread them out on a chair. He curled his lips at me and said, "A Shao, stop making trouble. I know you are here. Help me put my things away quickly!" 'Pout at me'…? Li Ji shouldn't be able to see 'me'. From the 'my' perspective, Li Ji could only curl his lips in the air... The young man has a handsome face and stands out——? I don't know if you made a typo, or if my Chinese language level is low due to my long stay abroad... Anyway, I don't understand... At that time, my existence had only one purpose, which was to practice, practice, and practice again. Personally, I feel that it is not going well... I don't think so. Change it to: At that time, I had only one goal of survival - to practice, practice, and practice again. Writing is not easy, so do your best! Send a bunch of flowers~~ Author's reply: I made changes based on the comments, thank you so much~