[Bleach] The Lonely City

This is something I wrote on a whim because I was bored. Please ignore the illogical plot, out-of-character behavior, childish language, idiotic dialogue, and other such problems. I originally intended it to be a light comedy, but now I can't change it back. Anyway, just have a look. I'm starting a new story.[I will never give up on light comedy] That's all. PPP.S. Why was my old blurb deleted?????? Let's call it finished. Premise: