
[Swallowed Dove] Comrades in Arms
[吞鸠]同袍
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 6k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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I think the author is very suitable for writing about the love between peers. It's no longer just about beauty.
After reading this article, my first thought was to change the desktop to a swallowing Buddha. Because Messi just won the Ballon d'Or, it's been his photo lately~ You take it this late at night This excites me~~ He even told me to read it~~ Hum~~ Be a little later next time~ You have to be punished! In fact, swallowing the little Buddha is gentler in my mind than the one here [even if it's my own] To be honest, this is more true~ He is so real It always hurts What I also have to praise is the details you wrote. Even the small details can resonate and even move you. [Covering chest] Show me something happier next time~~ It makes me not want to review anymore!
Jin~ The ending is so well written and heartbreaking. I once talked with someone about what kind of person Atun is, and the conclusion is that he is the type who would drink silently in front of the tombstone and live forever. Your attack is the most like the God of War I have ever seen. It has written something that I never dared to touch. It is great. As for Jiu Pan, it is a little different from what I thought. Jiu Pan, who is eloquent and smart, seems to me to be just like Jian Xue, a guy who likes to get to the bottom of things. However, because he is a demon in the demon world, he is not restricted by time. After the baptism of long years, he will probably be more calm. He is similar to the grown-up version of Jian Xue. To put it bluntly, he is more sinister = =I also like the Nine Queens you wrote, holding the hands of Tan Xie and She Sheng and moving forward slowly, following in the footsteps of Yin Zong and Zhu Wu, realizing the happiness of being a woman. This is what she longs for. Finally, the inadvertent details are touching =v=
He looked at his colleagues, unconsciously curling the corners of his mouth, and his eyes were as calm as if he were not on a battlefield but in a palace. He stood alone in front of the dead wood and swallowed a sip of wine alone. Leave alone again. Put your hands on your heart, take three steps back, Tao, fellow Taoist, how can you write so well? How can you make the dove-pan swallowing Buddha so handsome? How can you make the people of the demon world so beautiful like flames? How can you make the atmosphere so good? This is the dove plate in my heart I love you so much~~ Fellow Taoist! A handful of flowers to express respect.