Pioneering the Ancient Wilderness

Why is there so many flaws in this ending?? Isn't there a way to practice Shou?? Why do you still grow old and die? Attack will never get old, I'm convinced!

There are so many flaws, I don't know where to start... I choked on the token of love between Attack and Shou. Shou was said to be a warrior, but he was just pretending to be a B. In the end, he didn't even become the Beast King? I was supposed to be strong, but I was stunned to force Shou to cut it again and again, so... I drove high and went low, and I felt like I was being fed Kouxiang again when I disagreed with him and took another bite. If he said he didn't have the sacred stone, he took another bite. Even if Shou accidentally took away the sacred stone, where was the water tribe's sacred stone? There are two priests, where can't they get a sacred stone? What month does it take to come back? You can think of attacking other tribes, but you can't think of grabbing the divine stone? There should have been several cool spots to show his deep affection for Shou, but they all ended up being forced to feed Xiang, so... Shou is like being captured by Gong, getting angry at every turn, digesting it on his own, making so many contributions, and being moved there, all in order to confess to Gong, and finally die, and let Gong find a suitable child? I was almost poisoned to death by this pair... What were you trying to do? After doing so much, do you selflessly contribute to a holy father and make wedding clothes for others? When a couple lives their lives, shouldn't they have to discuss it? What a good couple, attacking without giving any reasons, just picking the fruits and monopolizing the power. When receiving, I would feel dissatisfied for a while, then let it go and continue my selfless dedication. After watching it, my chest was tight and I was short of breath, and I choked half to death.

It's very good. I was so scared by the comments that I didn't want to read it. I thought it was ridiculous. But after reading it, I found out that there is no saying that one of them broke the other. Ye began to like Yun and wanted to become a partner with Yun, but Yun didn't want to become a partner with Ye. Moreover, he ran away to the Dahe Tribe and never came back. Of course Ye had to give up. Is it possible that he wanted to be together? Real love is true love when you cry, make trouble, and then hang yourself in a fierce pursuit. For Jing, Ye initially just admired her, then admired her, and finally she was attracted, and then she fell in love with her. In ancient times, there were no restrictions of etiquette and laws, so we got together as soon as we liked her. It's normal. I think this article is okay, and it's quite clear.

This ending is too cruel. You can watch your lover grow old alone. You can live together and grow old and die together. Although we reunite in the end, it is still too cruel for me.

I don't really like the ending where one person dies of old age and the other person is still young. Although they reunited later, I still feel a little uncomfortable in my heart.

This, the poisonous Wen, is the blood pack given to Gong? He died after putting Gong on the altar, and before he died, he still persuaded him to find a woman and have a baby?? I vaguely remember that Gong is bisexual, but I didn't realize that Gong was very affectionate until his death. Instead, in the last two chapters, I saw that "Ye didn't understand his thoughts" and "he felt that Jing was too gentle and kept compromising." The emotional line was really disconnected.

Good sisters who sleep with men together... Emmm

In fact, the content could have been very, very long, but it ended suddenly. Alas, it felt a bit unfinished.

I'm a little confused about what Chun was thinking when he tested her. Did she think that the protagonist was a tyrant who would do anything to get home because the protagonist refused to teach her his beekeeping skills?

The ending is too hasty. As for the issues mentioned in the comments, I can only say that the thoughts of an ancient human being are definitely very different from the thoughts of modern people. It is impossible to accept the male protagonist's ideas all of a sudden. It must be constantly adjusted.