Becoming the Strong Female Lead in a Male-Oriented Novel

Well, just treat it as fun, and it is indeed fun. There are too many bugs and random writing at the end to ignore. What happened to the emperor being given a glass of dove wine? What do you mean by being an emperor? No matter how enlightened those ministers are, they cannot agree to do such a thing. This is treason. If this is really a rallying cry for princes and generals, it would be reasonable. How can we execute the highest authority in the system without authorization under the existing feudal system? The emperor was poisoned to death for no apparent reason. If anyone is willing to investigate, let alone the queen mother, the heroine and her family will be finished.

This is the first time in over ten years of reading novels that I have seen such a novel with a good plot but extremely poor writing. Keep a straight face the whole time. Every sentence feels like it was written on the way to the grave, without any detailed description, as if reading a running account. Stiff dialogue and stiff character descriptions. I admire myself for being able to read the whole book.

In the later period, the golden finger was too wide open, and the political battles in the court became child's play. It felt like it was exhausted and the writing was weak, but overall the flaws were not concealed. Rather than these, I would rather fix my typos and incorrect sentences! ! ! ! My blood pressure soared as I watched the whole process, so I will proofread it before sending it out after I finish writing it! If it doesn't work, let our school do it!

The writing above is quite good, although the beginning does not explain how the heroine died, so it is not abrupt. Some details are in place, but some details are not highlighted. Going all the way to the capital and then building a glass cannon is a bit of a heroine's halo. Let's not talk about the issues of government. The heroine, a liberal arts student, created glass. The article mentioned two or three times how she could create glass as a liberal arts student. To put it more seriously, he just knows how to do that. It's awesome, but I don't know how to explain the creation of cannons. Writing about traveling through ancient texts and making cannons will affect the subsequent historical development. Although it is a fictional text, I still feel that it cannot be written blindly. Whether it is physics or chemistry, making gunpowder is a science. Except for the ending, which makes this and that, the front is pretty good.

I obviously like to read farming novels, but every time I look for them, I only read novels about future interstellar powers or immortality. I never knew why. But now I suddenly found out that it is because the ancient farming novels will only get bigger and bigger because of the modern knowledge of the protagonists. They break away from the framework of farming and enter into power and disputes between rivers and lakes, whether it is from the male protagonist's perspective or the female protagonist's perspective.

Overall, the writing is okay. Of course, the ending chapter is a bit too generous. It's too hasty to cram all the inventions into one chapter. It's a bit far-fetched to compress the history into the protagonist's life of about 20 years. However, the flaws are not hidden at the beginning, especially in the handling of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, which is smooth and not radical. It's good. I hope the author will work hard

There is no good person, the little emperor is quite miserable

It's really awesome. This is my second review. Last month I was still wondering why no one made a movie or TV series about a woman playing politics in the court. If there are more such works and polished, there will always be something good.

It's miserable to have the puppet emperor who has lost his father and left his son for several consecutive generations, but there is no way, reform always requires bloodshed, but now only the emperor's family (?) Will be born, and the more than ten years of fine clothes and fine food should be regarded as compensation. But when I think about it, it's still a bit miserable [changed]

... The writing logic in the early stage and the later stage are completely different, which is a bit awkward, but it's okay. I like this kind of heroine who is independent and self-reliant and benefits society. The author has a good intention.