[Reader's Guide]: A heartwarming little story, with a gentle male lead and a heroine who grows over time. The entire story is already written, so dive right in! Come on, are you really not going to add it to your favorites? =w=
My ongoing novel next door, "The Young Master's Orders"~
Say what you need to say, and get to the point.
[Blurb]
After a car accident, Bai Mang, an unemployed artist with no money, job, or connections, finds a cute and warmhearted monster by her side.
"My name is Si Liu. I'm a great monster, and I can change time."
Bai Mang doesn't know whether time can be controlled, but she's shocked to discover that she might be able to control monsters! Otherwise, why does this monster look just like the character in a manga draft she abandoned years ago?
Could she have drawn a monster into existence?
Though this monster has no bad habits other than mooching apples, monsters can't be kept for free.
So they make a deal
[Reading Tips]:
○1v1, heartwarming, and fully written. Enjoy with confidence.
○You need to accept the premise, or there will be lots of plot holes. Please read the trigger warnings carefully.
○First-person narration. (QAQ I know that puts some readers off at first glance, but I still sincerely ask you to give it a try before deciding.)
Thanks to Xixi for the cover design~
And finally, fate brought us together. Thank you all for your support~
Theme:
The author's choice of words and sentences is very good, and he is not uneducated. I feel that the overall writing style is more Japanese-style, but it seems that it has not fully absorbed the advantages of Japanese-style. Generally speaking, it is not suitable for online novels.
Here is a small suggestion: the author can add twists and intense emotions to make it more stimulating to read.
My original intention was to say "the writing is not good enough", but compared to many of JJ's articles, this writing is really not bad. The wording and sentence construction are also very cultured, closer to the level of paper literature. However, I feel that it reads rather bland, like boiled water, and is not "interesting" enough to arouse "resonance". In JJ, which is female-oriented, it seems a bit boring.
In addition, I personally feel that it is more suitable to send the son's order to his natal family. However, good long articles will always shine one day. It's great to be able to follow the v. I feel that after finishing it, I will enjoy it for a long time. In the future, it will be the rhythm of a great master. Come on, author (although I didn't read the article because it was too long hehe)!
I think Si Liu will be really fragrant after that 23333
This article is really good! Come on!
The author's choice of words and sentences is very good, and he is not uneducated. I feel that the overall writing style is more Japanese-style, but it seems that it has not fully absorbed the advantages of Japanese-style. Generally speaking, it is not suitable for online novels. Here is a small suggestion: the author can add twists and intense emotions to make it more stimulating to read. My original intention was to say "the writing is not good enough", but compared to many of JJ's articles, this writing is really not bad. The wording and sentence construction are also very cultured, closer to the level of paper literature. However, I feel that it reads rather bland, like boiled water, and is not "interesting" enough to arouse "resonance". In JJ, which is female-oriented, it seems a bit boring. In addition, I personally feel that it is more suitable to send the son's order to his natal family. However, good long articles will always shine one day. It's great to be able to follow the v. I feel that after finishing it, I will enjoy it for a long time. In the future, it will be the rhythm of a great master. Come on, author (although I didn't read the article because it was too long hehe)!
I think Si Liu will be really fragrant after that 23333
Su Yong reaps the consequences 233333