"If someone bullies you, humiliates you, or kills you, what will you do?"
"I'll help him, kiss him, love him...
You think that's what I'd say? No way!! I'll bully his whole family, humiliate his entire clan, and kill every last one of them! Leave no survivors, wipe them out completely!!"
Read this before starting!! I'm a new writer, and I write on impulse. My writing isn't great, my ideas aren't particularly original, and the details won't stand up to scrutiny. I make a lot of things up, so!! Discussion and advice are welcome, but please don't insult me. I'm very sensitive. Lastly, the entire story is already written, so as long as someone can keep reading, they'll definitely see it through to the end. Thank you!
Theme:
To give the author some credit, although I have only watched a few worlds, the author's writing style is much better than that of a newcomer. There are people who really can't describe it clearly. Although the author is much better, there are still problems with inaccurate rhythm control, which may make you tired from watching, but I believe that as long as you continue to persevere, there will be no problems! Don't be sad because of the click rate or comments (?-ω-`). As long as you keep writing, things will get better in the future. I will continue to follow the author (?-ω-`)
Who threw the protagonist into the small world? Does the heroine have a grudge or enmity with him? I hate people who talk to themselves the most.
The heroine is just a robot with no emotions!
When educated youth go to the countryside, aren't the fellows from the brigade going to the commune to pick up people? Or is this an imaginary setting?
Catching Bugs: It is inconsistent whether the enemy is the Liu family or the Li family
Who is Guo Song? (Think
It's all you need. .
That. . Flattery means flattering, isn't it a bit inappropriate to use it here?
It can't be Lily. I'll give up on Lily.
Please continue to work hard! Moma^3^