After Dressing up as a White Moonlight Substitute

When will Shu Ning be able to write another hot-blooded teenage comic novel with an upgraded heroine... (Can Shamate be restarted?

Although it has been a long time, I think I should write this comment Qiao Wan is the heroism of my girlhood, and Teacher Shuning, I am very grateful to you for creating this world. Wanmei is a child who is allowed by you to get up after failure. I have been very, very anxious before seeing Wanmei. Failure and making mistakes have been a complete taboo in my more than ten years of life. It was you and Wanmei who gave me the courage to make mistakes. The dialogue between Jia Ying and Mu Xiaoxiao [Love is respect, understanding and tolerance] [Love is also selfishness and possessiveness], as well as the relationship between Wan Mei and Miao Fa, have rewritten my view of love. I saw Miaofa's respect and appreciation for Wanmei, I saw Wanmei's growing admiration after being rejected, I saw the girl in pink holding a sword under the bodhi tree, and I saw her kissing the head that she had cut off with her own hands. I also see that you respect Wanmei's own choice. Whether it's Miao Wan's love or the affection between you and Wan Mei, I understand from the bottom of my heart - love comes first with respect and then with possession.

When "White Moonlight" Mu Xiaoxiao returned to the Kunshan School in glory, Qiao Wan, the "shadow" who had been a shadow for several years, finally experienced the collapse of his identity. Shu Ning's "Being a White Moonlight Stand" opens with the most poignant "stand-in dilemma", but it does not fall into the cliché of love entanglement. Instead, it unfolds a passionate picture of the heroine Qiao Wan stumbling and growing up in the world of cultivation and breaking away from labels, making "living for yourself" the spiritual core throughout. The most subtle breakthrough of this book lies in the reconstruction of "substitute literature". Different from the humble forbearance or love-minded counterattack of traditional stand-in novels, Qiao Wan's awakening is filled with sober anger and determination. From being regarded as a substitute for Mu Xiaoxiao by her teacher, enduring the comparison of "not as good as the original", to being completely ignored after Bai Yueguang's return, she did not fall into the quagmire of self-denial, but decisively "turned off the table and walked down the mountain", using the sentence "I will not do this substitute" to draw a line with the past. This clarity makes her growth path extremely tense - she is not a dodder saved by the male protagonist, but a lonely warrior who "grows up in the beatings". From an ignorant monk in the Qi refining period to a strong man who can stand alone, every breakthrough is stained with blood and tears, but it also reveals the tenacity of "it doesn't matter if the bones are broken and the flesh is stuck to the flesh, and you can slowly get up again". The three-dimensionality of character creation is another highlight of this book. The heroine Qiao Wan is by no means a perfect protagonist. She has a sandy air, can be wronged and angry, but always adheres to the Taoist heart. In the secret realm of the Demon King, she "turns bones into shields and pulls out bones into soldiers", and rectifies her name with her strength at the Three Religions Discussion Conference. In the end, the world will remember "Qiao Wan" instead of "Mu Xiaoxiao's stand-in". Mu Xiaoxiao, as "White Moonlight", breaks out of the flat "evil female supporting role" frame: her innocence is tinged with unconscious cruelty, and her sense of superiority after her return turns into disaster, until she finally takes off the disguise and faces her own bad nature. The trajectory of her blackening and transformation is delicate and real, making the complexity of human nature come to life. The male protagonist, Master Miaofa, hit the reader's fancy with his "cold and majestic yet hidden gentleness" character. His support was never a condescending charity, but a respect for Qiao Wan's independent personality. The emotional lines completed in the extra make this feeling more sincere and touching. In addition, supporting characters such as the eldest brother who is indifferent on the surface but is silently dedicated, Gan Nan who has always been a coward but finally tried to change his brother-killing and ascended the throne, Ma Huaizhen who is mean-tongued but extremely protective of his shortcomings, etc., Together form a vivid group portrait, giving Qiao Wan a warm background in his growth path. The discussion of "self-worth" in the book runs throughout the plot. When Qiao Wan was in the Kunshan School, even if he worked harder, he could only live in the shadow of others. Master Zhou Yan's partiality even broke the illusion of "equal treatment" - he would destroy Qiao Wan's foundation for Mu Xiaoxiao, but forgot the antidote when Qiao Wan was poisoned. After going down the mountain, she finally understood that true value is never defined by others: she relied on her own strength to win allies, and her tenacity to resolve crises, and finally transformed from a "fake" into a "savior of the world of cultivation", proving with her actions that "the person who gains respect is always called Qiao Wan." This emphasis on individual subjectivity gives the coming-of-age story in the context of cultivating immortality a more universal resonance. Of course, the work is not without flaws. The amnesia plot added later is a bit confusing, and the hastily introduced modern warfare, nuclear bombs and other elements are out of touch with the cultivation background, which inevitably gives people the abrupt feeling of "too much imagination but not enough writing power". But the flaws do not hide the merits. The author breaks the shackles of traditional cultivation novels with a "non-realm theory" setting, and uses a "pseudo-teenage romance" narrative to make the plot of leapfrogging monsters and overturning the situation full of excitement. The relaxed and moderate rhythm can intersperse daily warmth in the tense plot and relieve the reading pressure. For readers who like "substitute counterattack" and "growth and cultivation of immortality", "Becoming a White Moonlight Substitute" is undoubtedly a work worth reading. It may have the frankness of a "little white routine", but it uses Qiao Wan's history of blood and tears to tell the most touching truth: the real light is never to imitate others, but to still choose to break free from the shackles and live as one's own sun after recognizing the situation clearly. Just like Qiao Wan's determination when she jumped off Taixu Peak - no one can look down on her, because her value has always been written only by herself.

I read this article during the epidemic, which left a great shock to me as a junior high school student at the time. Six years later, I still have great insights when I read it again, and I still shed tears because of the friendship, family affection and love in the story. Thank you Shu Ning for making this story come to life, and thank you for warming me up many times.

Alas, this book actually starts high and ends low. The plot after amnesia is not as good as the previous one. There are also many modern chapters in the extras... Actually, I still want to read the fictional background.

A pot of uncooked rice is neither satisfying nor deep enough. Why do you still discriminate against women after you have become immortals? Does long × long d affect the cultivation of immortality? I didn't see this setting? There are only a few main female characters except for the heroine and the stupid tool-man female supporting role. Wang Ruyi is also a fool with a love brain, and women like Jiang Rouxue Shi'er who cultivate the world of immortality live as resentful wives in the old society. Is this reasonable? There are a lot of men in the main characters, and they don't even have a harem. Pei Zhen is so stupid and cheap that he makes people grow knotty. You can definitely choose one of the two young masters, Xiao Boyang, and change it to a female character, and the layout of the story will be much bigger. The struggle between monks and demons is like playing. So many people died, but Mei Xiang and Su Rui were not liquidated by the monks? Are you kidding? His ability to jump around is as funny as the old Nozomi Tojo's ability to live. The introduction of some modern weapons and ideas doesn't do much. The main plot is also a long story of more than one million words, with a hammer in one direction and a stick in the other. The plot is very compact until the heroine leaves the school, and there are many inexplicable turns later. There is also an amnesia killing episode at the end which is also very confusing. Shu Ning's romances are all very good, and this book has obvious advantages and disadvantages. The first part on the mountain is really well written, but it's a pity that the plot behind it can't keep up. If you just want to write a romance harem, the writing is completely sufficient. If you want to write a story with far-reaching and grand ideas, there is still a lot to be done.

Haha, the second brush was successful! The stupid and sincere girl goes straight to the end of the world, it's great! Long live the friendship with the crying bag Gannan [Come on]

I really like this story. I have read it for the third and fourth time. I really like Qiao Wan's character. The descriptions of other characters are also very vivid. It's really good to read. I like it.

Mr. Fu, I'm not surprised by what you do when it comes to things related to your wife [covering face and crying]

This is the first novel that I have to find the finished version no matter what method I use to finish it [Bixin] I like Wanmei and Miaofa [Like]

Qiao Wan, the smartest, bravest, kindest and strongest person in the world, will be happy throughout her life.

I've read it three times, and it looks good (๑• . •๑) In the second volume, I feel like the author wants to write it well but doesn't know how to start, so he just keeps pushing forward. Many things are not explained clearly, and there are also problems with the connection between the front and back, but the flaws are not concealed, and it's good to read ~

Why haven't I fully booked it? I can't even rate it.

Wow, five brushes [poor] Who dares to think that those who have been watching from junior high school are now in college. Sky

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I have a feeling this man is going to publicize his love story with his special assistant wife [Sunglasses]

Finished repainting! ! ! Wanmei I love you [milk tea] [milk tea] [milk tea] [milk tea]

So well written. . . . . I will always support you

It was so messy at the end and I felt like I couldn't write it. The author tried to write in every direction but ended up not writing well. That's how I felt. But the first half was really good and it was the reason why I finished reading it. But I was really disappointed after reading it.

Not bad

Love you! The moonlight shines brightly in front of the bed, the text is posted on the Jinjiang River, the nutrient solution is irrigated, and the code words are doubled~

So beautiful~

Throw flowers!

Teacher, don't you have any extras?

A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!

If you irrigate the plant with nutrient solution, will it grow a million-dollar plant? !

The Nutrient Solution (1/1) achievement has been achieved, and there is a certain chance of an update being dropped. Please keep up the good work, knights.

The nutrient solution is filled up and the battery life is strong!

When will there be a bonus episode? Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, I really want to watch it [crying] [crying] [crying]

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