Blurb 1: Bai Zhi woke up to find that she had transmigrated into a novel she had recently been following. Unlike other people who transmigrated into books, however, she had landed in a world where two novels had merged. In one, the male lead was a career-minded heir from a male-oriented web novel site. In the other, the heroine was a delicate noblewoman who had lived a second life, seeking revenge, taking down scumbags, and face-slapping everyone who crossed her. Bai Zhi had transmigrated into the maid of the Marquis's second daughter, a villainous supporting character with her nose in the air and a reckless manner. Watching the second daughter walk away after mocking her sister for being unable to judge people, Bai Zhi felt helpless. Then she watched the second daughter go on to provoke her brother, who would later rise smoothly through the ranks of the court, and felt even more helpless.
What should a maid transmigrated into two books as the servant of a wicked villainess do? Asking online, and in a bit of a hurry.
Blurb 2: As Xie Mubai's maid, Bai Zhi's life goal was to reform this great villain. But not only did she fail to reform him, she also discovered that Xie Mubai was actually a handsome young man. Tell me, how much sorrow can one bear? Like a cross-dressing beauty flowing eastward.
Xie Mubai: Be good. I'll come marry you as soon as I change into men's clothes.
A temperamental, unpredictable cross-dressing beauty with a screw loose X an outwardly adorable, inwardly snarky heroine
Theme:
Make a small suggestion to the author. It can be seen that there are actually a lot of things that I want to write, but as a reader, it is really tiring to read. First, the coherence is not very good, there are too many omissions, but the picture is not strong. After saying a sentence, you have to think about who said it for a minute. Second, the plot often makes people a little confused. For example, the relationship between the young master and his wife was carefully written later, but it was basically revealed at the beginning without any explanation (why not learn from the Red Mansion?), Which is very confusing, let alone the setting of two books. Third, the plot is too urgent, which will test your writing skills. It is better to go slower first. Books with compact and coherent prose and a large amount of information are more difficult to write. Don't worry, madam, practice slowly.
It turns out there really is a twin sister 😭
Finished reading, scatter flowers, congratulations
Whose child is the heroine? Is she from the Protectorate?
This pace is so fast...
The plot of the novel is still very interesting, but the writing is really tiring to read. In many dialogues, I can't tell which sentence is said by which person. Can't one person say one sentence? Sometimes one person says two sentences, and I can't tell who said what. Although not writing names is much simpler, if the dialogue is not organized, it would be better to add "xxx Road" and "xxx said", which will better read the reader's senses.
It feels like the author has laid out several lines
Curtain Bai is a really interesting person, so what did his father ask for?
No, no, you have done a good job portraying me. Although the real and fake daughters have their own little calculations, they also have a warm side, and they are not stereotyped, which is particularly valuable.
Mubai doesn't play by the rules, but I find it very charming hahh