Don't Be Afraid, Apothecary [GL]

It looks good, keep up the good work, author

The article is overall a little rushed, especially the protagonist's cultivation has progressed too quickly, which is a bit like Feng Aotian's attitude, although I can generally understand that it is done to advance the plot. In addition, Xia's emotional change towards Li was also relatively sudden, without a relatively smooth transition. Of course, these are not important, anyway, as long as the article is sweet.

The clear soup is watery, I am so sad

Read it in one sitting. My wife is great! Come on (???_??)? Come on (???_??)? Come on (???_??)?

Hey, I finished another book

Something is wrong? Isn't the Zijin Furnace in Lin Guanren's hands? When did you arrive at Lim Koon Tang?

Has growing old together become a word?

Bb I've also finished reading this book.

The article is overall a little rushed, especially the protagonist's cultivation has progressed too quickly, which is a bit like Feng Aotian's attitude, although I can generally understand that it is done to advance the plot. In addition, Xia's emotional change towards Li was also relatively sudden, without a relatively smooth transition. Of course, these are not important, anyway, as long as the article is sweet.

It's a longer outline but there are still many shortcomings. I hope I can fix it when I have time and opportunity.