Now that they were living among ordinary people, they had to be careful with their money. At a noodle stall, the two of them shared a bowl of wonton noodles. The little white snake didn't know how to use chopsticks, so the monk picked up noodles and fed them to her. They leaned their heads together, their foreheads touching, and watched the bustle of the street with four wide, darting eyes, barely paying attention to their food.
Behind thick clouds of steam, the wonton seller called out in a shrill voice. The acrobats struck their gongs with a clanging, thunderous din. Men and women of all ages crowded the streets, the marketplace alive with activity. Now and then, a gallant young rider trotted by, the clop-clop of his horse's hooves ringing out.
Clop-clop, clop-clop. The sun, red as rouge, ran down beyond the hills, and the sky filled with orange clouds.
The little white snake was, after all, a demon who had cultivated for a hundred years. Her beautiful human form drew eyes wherever she went. And with the monk feeding her noodles, occasionally taking a bite himself, it was no wonder passersby gossiped.
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The author has a very literary talent, but it does feel too much like Dream of Red Mansions. Please divide it into more paragraphs.
How's the ending? Is it sweet?
After reading the text, I always feel that the ending is not very good. I will save it first and read it later.
Come on~ I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved my sleeves and dropped a
I feel like I'm watching Dream of Red Mansions, feeling tired
You write, or you are still writing, and it is there, only increasing but not decreasing. The writing is really good, and there are really few authors like this nowadays. Looking forward to the next one.
I haven't started reading it yet, but I saw in the introduction, "the mouth is absent-minded", emmmm, that's a bad sentence, please pay more attention to it.
Author, you are so tired from reading this section.
Fascinating, so beautiful, will update soon
Great work, great author.