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This novel's blurb: A romance and realistic-life story. After love betrayed her, she thought she'd spend the rest of her life alone, but then she met him.
"Mom, I've already divorced Zhang Jindong."
"Divorced? An Lu, what's wrong with your brain? Back when he was poor, you insisted on staying with him. Now that he's rich, you're divorcing him? What on earth is in your head? Are you stupid, An Lu?"
"Mom, he cheated on me. He has a mistress."
"He has a mistress, so you have to divorce him? Your father has messed around with so many women. Why didn't I divorce him? An Lu, if you get divorced, your man and his money will both go to that mistress. Won't that just be a bargain for her?"
"And now you're talking back." An Lu's father slapped his chopsticks down. "We worked hard to raise you. You eat our food and wear our clothes. You never found a rich man to support us, and now you dare talk back to us. This is completely unacceptable!"
"So you had a daughter just so she could marry a rich man and support you when she grew up!"
"Isn't that exactly right, An Lu? Let me tell you! You're far too rebellious. In this family, whatever I say is right. I can never be wrong!"
"Zeng Qiang, our family is doing just fine. We have a house and a car in Ningjing, and you even have your own business. Why do you have to marry a divorced woman? I'll make this clear: if she doesn't lower herself, she can forget about entering our home!"
An Lu had no idea who this Xiang Yu was, but every word he said mercilessly ripped open her wounds and left her exposed in front of everyone.
Under the bright spotlights of the art gallery, An Lu stood there alone and helpless. It was just like when her father had been pelted with rotten eggs in the street by the husband of his mistress, who had shouted that he was a home-wrecker. Back then, she'd stood just as helplessly in front of the crowd, with no privacy at all, listening to everyone point and whisper, not knowing how to deal with it.
"An Lu, marry me! I love you!"
As soon as Chu Yicheng finished speaking, several fireworks shot into the sky with a loud bang, lighting up half the beach. Candles lit one by one where they stood, their glow winding along to form a gigantic heart around them. The fireworks drifted down from above, forming a line of words: "Marry me, An Lu!"
This isn't a story about a couple getting back together after a breakup, nor is it about someone being reborn. It's simply the story of a woman hurt by marriage who carries her scars and continues forward with warmth and determination.
The author is rolling around and acting cute in the author's profile, begging you to add it to your favorites.
Theme: Be strong, be independent, and never give up.
Hey, it's me. After collecting it, I slowly read the first three chapters. The first three chapters have always been what everyone calls "reader's patience" hahaha, so it is really important to grasp the first three chapters. Therefore, I will look at it from the perspective of a young reader. If there is any wrong understanding of the plot, please ignore it and accept my praise, haha! [Let's talk about the highlights of the plot first] The following is only about the first three chapters, which I think are very good parts: (1) The rhythm is tight and hits the pain points: in the first chapter, the heroine is looking forward to her husband coming home, until she discovers that her husband has cheated on her and is humiliated by her mistress. Then in the second chapter, she is defrauded of investments and is heavily in debt, and then her family refuses. To be honest, it is really too tragic. From the plot of betrayal, divorce, being cheated, and bankruptcy, the author has successfully created a sense of suffocation step by step, which is really heartbreaking. (2) Creation of the villain: Zhang Jindong's description as a disgusting cheater is very infuriating. Ji Lili also successfully created a "green tea" temperament as the mistress. Her line "Sister, happy birthday" made me very angry and I can sympathize with the heroine's pain. (3) The personality of the heroine: When An Lu was betrayed at the beginning, she still had illusions about relationships, but she gradually sobered up and chose to sign for divorce calmly. After being cheated into investing and going bankrupt, although she had nothing, she quickly adjusted her state and began to look for a new way out. This tough character is very endearing, and we can expect a better future for her. (4) Foreshadowing setting: An Lu found a special "housekeeping" job out of desperation, and is about to meet a mysterious employer. This setting makes me want to continue watching and wonder how she will counterattack! [A brief talk about the parts that can be fine-tuned] Personal opinion, the author can consider it for reference. (1) After the heroine in Chapter 1 learned that her husband had cheated on her and was pregnant, her emotions went from shock and collapse to calmly signing the divorce a little too fast. If her psychological struggles could be properly supplemented, such as how she held back tears and how she went from anger to complete resignation, the picture might be more layered. For example: An Lu stared at Zhang Jindong, tightening and loosening her fingers unconsciously. She wanted to get angry, question, and cry, but in the end she just didn't say a word. She found that she no longer had the energy to argue. (2) The same goes for the description of the villain. Xiao San's green tea image is very successful, but if a little action can be added, for example, when she says "Happy birthday, sister," is there a glint of pride in her eyes? Or accidentally hugged Jing Jindong's arm? These details can make a picture more vivid than just a mere description. (3) The logic of bankruptcy and being deceived can be more detailed. I think the process of An Lu being deceived into investing by her best friend Tang Lin was a little hasty, and the heroine seemed to trust the other party too easily. If some foreshadowing could be added as to why she trusted Tang Lin (for example, Tang Lin had introduced successful investment projects in the past), it might make the plot more natural and avoid the perception that the heroine is too innocent. (4) When An Lu was deceived into bankruptcy, her main emotions were panic and disbelief. However, if some anger could be added, or a description of wanting to fight back but being unable to do so, her emotional changes would be more layered. For example: She dialed Tang Lin's number with trembling fingers, but when she heard the mechanical empty number prompt on the other end, she suddenly pounded the table. She was unwilling to give in and even felt humiliated - she didn't expect that she didn't even have a chance to ask for an explanation. [Final chat] In fact, the story is very attractive. The emotional conflict at the beginning and the creation of the villain are very successful. There is also a very good plot layout. I will look forward to the subsequent growth line of the heroine. However, I also hope that the image description and psychological description of each character can be strengthened. Don't be too "facial", which will lose a little space for imagination. It will be better if the plot can add a little more foreshadowing. Above, thank you to the hardworking author! The future is promising!
I am used to looking for articles on the homepage and on the list, but I haven't seen an article that suits my taste for a long time. I saw this article by chance. I don't have high collection points, so I almost abandoned the article for this reason. Fortunately, not bad, I clicked in and continued. I was full of joy and couldn't stop. The male protagonist in the article is affectionate and dedicated, while the female protagonist looks weak, but is actually strong in heart. She has her own principles at critical moments. She has experienced so many hardships and still believes in life. I like such a girl. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also so sweet. There are too many such sweetness in the article. I like it. The various appearances of other sentient beings in the article are also interesting to read. They are real and delicate. Only after certain experiences can you understand the sadness in them. Finally, I want to tell you that sometimes it's not that your writing is not good, it's just that you haven't met someone who understands you. Please stick to it, gold will definitely shine. Come on, Dad!
I don't like the heroine, she has no independent opinions and only cries when something happens.