This is the first story I’ve ever posted, so no matter how many bricks you throw at me, I’ll take them head-on, even if they leave me bleeding! Dear readers, don’t hold back!
I really couldn’t stand Xu Xian’s cowardice in The Legend of the White Snake. I’ve always liked the naturally uninhibited Xiao Qing best, so this story came about. Though I guess it can’t really be called a GL story! I’m still not very good at writing, and can’t measure up to you all! Feeling rather inadequate…
It’s my first attempt, so please forgive me if it isn’t very good!
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I like everything else, but Xiaoqing seduces her brother-in-law and proves it to her sister, which makes her feel uncomfortable.
Oops~ People hate Xu Xian the most. .
Xiaoqing is so stupid and not worth it. Are all women stupid?…
Well written That's it I hate Xu Xian the most cowardly man
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This this. . . The little one is really ashamed. . . . . . The generous advice given by the elders is really to the point, which makes the little ones suddenly enlightened. In fact, it is my first time to write this kind of article, so I am still very uneasy. Now with your guidance, I believe that I will be able to write better articles in the future! The little flower who lives up to everyone! 8 The reason why I wrote short stories because I was too young was because I was too lazy. Even if there are thousands of stories fighting in his mind, the little one will cover his head and sleep and ignore them. So, that one, the little ones will work hard, try not to sleep, and work hard to write articles~~~~~~~~Floating
People who can't let go are the saddest in the eyes of others, but in their own eyes, they are happy, even if they don't have anything, they can still watch.
Can it be considered a fanfic... Falling in love with someone who doesn't love you, that kind of pain... Ahhhhh
Ai, I also like The Legend of White Snake and the GL version, but this one… I can't say it's not well written, maybe it's too short and it's hard to express the characters well. The characters seem to be out of touch with the original impression. For example, Xiao Qing, who is deeply affectionate and daring to do things, seems to be just an ignorant little sister who seduces her brother-in-law. She seems very superficial... Another example is Xu Xian. Although he can be very hateful at times, he can be considered excusable. After all, it takes some time to accept that the person next to him is a python. Isn't it much better after he is confused? ~~Here... With his infatuation for White Snake, no matter what, he wouldn't have an affair with Xiao Qing! Rabbits also know not to eat grass beside their nests... Besides, the description of the white snake is not deep enough, and the character of being soft on the outside but strong on the inside is not shown. Moreover, I don't think that when she finds out that Xu Xian has an affair with Qing'er, who is as close to her as a sister, she will forgive any of them. She will probably fly away without seeing anyone! Because she seems to be very proud of love, the reason why she forgives Xu Xian's recklessness several times is because she sees that his love for her is indeed deep in his heart and has not changed! In my opinion, no matter how many wrong things Xu Xian does, as long as his feelings remain unchanged, it will be hard for us, Sister White Snake, to be willing to blame him for leaving him… PS: I like the Legend of White Snake very much, so I'm going to say a few words. It's my personal opinion. Don't be angry :) I believe the next one will be better... Send you a bouquet of flowers