The Devoted Hound Rebelled and Ran Off with the Baby

I love watching it. I like it. It's not greasy. There's no third party to pull things off too much. It's a simple love affair between two people. The male protagonists' mentality is delicately portrayed and the changes are reasonable. Come on, ma'am!!! Shake, shake, shake, save the manuscript~

The rhythm is very good, the plot is tight and not procrastinating, the basic character design is actually very good, and the emotional pull is very exciting, but the character creation is too rigid. First, for example, if you want to show the powerful madness of Gong, you just blindly describe him suddenly going crazy and hurting people because of some trivial things, making him He seems to be very unintelligent, and blindly abusing people who have done something good for him does not show his moodiness very well. Instead, it makes people question how he got to this position. Even adding a setting that he is manic and needs to take medicine will make this character more reasonable. Including the period when he escaped from suspended animation in the later period, the description of Gong's emotional changes was not detailed enough. There was no transition at all like "pop!". We can describe his life background and the causes of his personality at this time to describe the changes in Gong's mentality, such as disbelief - self-deception - recalling the past - discovery of mistakes - despair - The Walking Dead. I looked at the chapter table of contents and found that this part should be arranged later. It would be better to mention it earlier. Secondly, the physical abuse that Gong suffered was too much, too bloody and cruel, and it would be difficult to recover from it later in the crematorium. After all, even if these wounds were doubled and added to Gong, the feeling would be very bad. There is also verbal abuse. The frequency of words like "mean" and "mean" is too high. For such a high-ranking person, he sincerely ignores the lives of people below him. Human lives are nothing to him, and they are not worthy of special emphasis. In terms of superiority and inferiority, it is like Fat Orange in The Legend of Zhen Huan. Orders such as "cut off", "drag down" and "kill" are given casually without much explanation, such as "you, a humble slave, should serve me" and so on, which does not show the natural indifference and arrogance of the superior. But to be honest, I really like the emotional pull of this kind of character. The author should not have used his full strength. Such a good foundation can be used to write thousands of collections. I hope to appreciate your better works next time. If you don't like such comments, you can delete them at will. I have no ill intentions. I wish you good health and happiness every day.

😂 The moment I took the Baoxin Pills, I really burst into laughter. Who has to take the Baoxin Pills before quarreling with his wife? Hahahahahahahahahahahaha

The second child came a little late. The emperor must be in his forties 😂😂😂

"Chu Liang's eyes did not squint, and his steps were slow..." This is a big bug for the author~ This place should use Ouchile.

""The leader of the Yunze tribe, Chu Liang has arrived..." This is a big bug for the author~ This place should use Ouchile.

Chu Liang seemed to have reported his name at the previous conference.

"Yu Wenjue saw the guard and was busy..." This is a big bug for the author~ bow your head

This is so bloody cool! It tastes so right

Finished reading!!! It's been a long time since I've read such an old-fashioned article hehe 😁 It has to be so bloody good...