Looking Up at the Jade Terrace

I like it so much, it's a long-lasting love, the author, please give it a try!

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful ancient novel, I read it in one sitting!!! Every character is vivid, every aspect of the character is traceable, and the creation is so three-dimensional!!! The author's literary skills can also be seen in the writing!!! The characters, plot, and language skills are all top-notch. I love it so much!!!

Finished reading!!! It really hurts me to see the author say that the data is not good later. I felt that some of the content in the article was a bit brushed off, such as the first kiss between the male and female protagonists. Actually, I think it could have been expanded upon, but I don't know if it was deleted. The prison kiss was a bit abrupt, and the emotional scenes could actually be more detailed. I still hope that everyone will support the genuine version in the future and let the author write happily!! This is my first time to leave so many comments to an author! I hope the author can work hard!

I recently read an article that feels like an old saying and I like it very much. Since the current comment is only visible to the author, I would like to make some comments. Before the period after the young marquis went to Beijing to issue a military order, his parents and younger brothers were taken as hostages, desperate and desperate. However, the writing always felt too light and sweet. If you add the plot of the male protagonist sending his parents and younger brothers to Beijing, the mother's righteousness and touching maternal love, and the younger brother's ignorance and innocence, the character arc will be more complete. Moreover, the male protagonist's state of entering the capital was described as being exhaustive, but in actual face to face with the emperor, he felt that he had no means or words, and his performance was not as good as the first time he went to Beijing to meet the emperor, which was really a bit disappointing. I personally don't mind the other descriptions of war and the concept of money, but the tactical design could be better. Raising money and food is too easy, which weakens the characters. The second half is still a pity, but the irritability of the young marquis + raising a cat is more cute in the second half. In the first half, it seems a bit inexplicable that he always beats his subordinates. The heroine's book bag attributes in the early stage are not shown much. But in general, it is a rare and rare traditional ancient novel about heroes and beauties with excellent writing and smooth plot. Please take pity on the author and let us ancient Chinese lovers write more ancient Chinese novels in the future!

Lin Xuran imissu😭😭[heartbroken][heartbroken]

It's nice. Doesn't the author stop writing now?

I love every character, they are so great!

Well written, wow wow, thank you author for the great article.

I looked it up in my favorites, but I didn't expect that I had already finished it, so I reviewed it again.

I finished reading it in a few days. It's very well written.