Does Jin Guangyao still harbor attachments, trapped in his coffin?
If he could return to the world of the living, what would he choose?
To stay? Take revenge? Or be the one who's avenged?
Their past connection renewed, Xiyao separated by a step too distant to cross.
Huh~?
I'm a little confused. Does JJ really make posting a story such a solemn affair? I've already gone through so many steps, and I still have to write a preface?
I don't often feel the urge to write fanfiction.
When I first read the Mo Dao Zu Shi scenes in Mo Village, I found them pretty terrifying... The characters whose stories left me most dissatisfied were Yao Mei and Xiao Xingchen. Nie Yao also really appeals to me, but Nie Daodaoist and Xue Yang have personalities I can't quite handle yet. They seem difficult to write. Of these well-rounded characters, Yao Mei is the only soft persimmon. I'll pick on him!
Lan Da is a combination of gentleness, steadiness, wisdom, and responsibility, and I was also a little dissatisfied with the original ending.
I couldn't help wanting to give Lan Da a peaceful ending. (Yes, it's a consolation prize for myself.)
I started writing bit by bit in September 2018, and revised the outline several times along the way.
I unexpectedly discovered that I'm a chatterbox.
I haven't even written three-fifths of the story according to the outline, and it's already 50,000 words.
My writing is at a middle-school level, and I don't know how to tell a story. Suggestions and corrections are welcome.
Also, although I'll try to avoid OOC, here's the usual disclaimer:
All rights belong to the original author, Mo Xiang Tong Xiu. The OOC is mine.
Theme: A former prisoner is moved by the kindness of friends and family and eventually returns to society. Show care for vulnerable groups and offer them the compassion they deserve.
I know Yaoyao must die, but I still feel sorry for my sister Yao. He has already died once. Seeing that he was frightened by his own speculation and afraid of being controlled by others, I couldn't help but burst into tears.
Yes, Jin Guangyao was really heartbroken at that time.
I don't criticize evil friends. I feel that the life of evil friends is mainly due to their unsympathetic fate, and their nature is not that kind of evil. Therefore, those who make bad friends feel that they are still on a dead end and there is no light yet, so Xiyao does not want to make Jin Guangyao a good person in the eyes of the public, but hopes that he can get the light he expects and the warmth he desires, so that he can stay away from the darkness from his heart.
I don't know why there are so few Xiyao. They obviously have such strong feelings for each other. Maybe it's because they are really a combination of knowing that they can't do anything but doing nothing... Jin Guangyao's own judgment of himself is very accurate. Lan Da is the light he longs for. He yearns for, admires, and admires him. But Jin Guangyao is Jin Guangyao. He can't give up everything he has now to pursue this light, so it is destined that he and Lan Da will be in the friendship line during his lifetime. Some people say that Jin Guangyao did not kill Lan Da and killed Nie Da because Lan Da had not blocked his way. I think Jin Guangyao could never touch Lan Da. The reason is very simple. Lan Da is different in his heart. Lan Da is really worthy of Zewujun. Jin Guangyao's breaking point is his background. Being the son of a prostitute is the source of his inferiority and hatred that he can never forgive. You can call him sinister and cunning, but what he cannot accept should be Blame all this on him being the son of a prostitute, because this is equivalent to rejecting everything about him. He hates and fears Nie Da, and he will want to get rid of Nie Da, because Nie Da will never tolerate him. Nie Da is too straight, and he will not He would try to understand Jin Guangyao, but he didn't bother to understand, but the kick that made Jin Guangyao cut him into pieces, and the phrase "son of a prostitute"... Once again completely denied the existence of Jin Guangyao. Lan Da is a very kind person. He follows principles but has compassion. During the crusade against the Wen family, as the leader of the Lan family, he could not remain indifferent. However, everyone at the swearing-in meeting was in a passionate mood, as if his side was right and proper. Only Lan Da remained silent, shaking his head and sighing. But it doesn't make people think that this person is hypocritical at all... Lan Dahui is disappointed with Jin Guangyao and is angry because of what Jin Guangyao has done, but Lan Da will never define Jin Guangyao as the son of a prostitute, and wipe out everything about Jin Guangyao, just because he is the son of a prostitute... So Lan Da and Jin Guangyao are really, incomprehensibly abusive... Compare Xue Yang and Xiao Xingchen...
No, I eat Xiyao! Bad friends, I eat friendship
What do you want to do, author? Knife me?
Come on, baby, it's really well written. I'm looking forward to the rest of the plot.
Baby, won't you write?
Abandoned the author...?
Isn't it a cup of madness in Gusu?