There are too many stories I'm following, so I'm writing something to build up good karma. No need to explain why I praise Ye Xiu. I'm putting Green River on hold for now. If I add more content later, I'll upload it, but whether the site approves it depends on the website.
This story is also updated on Lofter. The tags are All Hail the King and This Love Will Last. Search for the story title, "This Love Will Last," not the author's name. The author likes changing their ID.
Brother Umbrella's ghost stories and memories, Qiao Yifan transmigrates. The main pairings are Su Mucheng and Ye Xiu, and Ye Xiu and Qiao Yifan; the secondary pairing is Double Flowers. No love triangle. Also known as "Those Years When I Lost My Dignity Alongside My Junior." Some content involves ghosts and the occult.
This is my first time writing a story, so please leave a comment if you spot a bug. I won't accept "love makes it right" or flame wars.
The narrative mixes chronological, reverse chronological, and flashback passages. If you don't want to read the author's notes, please skip them.
About Su Xiu: My OTP has to be the main focus. The original outline was a story centered on Su Xiu, but since this is my first long story and I was afraid of ruining my OTP, I decided to write this one as practice first. Sadly, my writing isn't good enough, so Su Xiu doesn't get much time on the page. I'm sorry, Brother Umbrella, and I'm sorry, God Ye.
About Ye Qiao: This pairing is rare, so there's a lot of room to explore. Qiao Yifan isn't reborn; he transmigrates into a parallel world. I set it up this way mainly because, with a superlative white moonlight like Brother Umbrella, it would be nearly impossible for Xiao Qiao to win over Old Ye according to the original story. The second reason is that I wanted him to help Old Ye. This Xiao Qiao isn't a shy, innocent angel with a conscience. Influenced by Ye Xiu, Wei Chen, and Fang Rui, he's a slick old hand who loses his dignity all the time.
About Double Flowers: My writing isn't good enough, so they barely appear. "This love will last, only to become a memory; even then, it was already a time of confusion." This line of poetry should have meant a bad ending, but here I use it to mean hopeful pursuit.
Theme:
It's really nice to watch. The scene description and technical analysis are very good. As for the lack of foreshadowing, I don't need to be too harsh. Mainly because I had a lot of fun watching the first half, but the second half became more and more melancholy? I was really torn
To be honest, I read the relationship line and settings several times but still don't understand them. It's a bit confusing.
I like this ending! Sprinkle flowers! Hug the author mua!
Yo yo yo yo yo yo!!! Kissed!!!
Why is Chapter 40 locked?
Woohoo, Chapter 40 is locked!
Lao Wang feels miserable hahahahahahahahahahahaha
DaDa, Chapter 40 is locked? Please unlock it DaDa.
It's not bad to be provided by an old woman with two guns.
Xiangzi really wants to make me cute to death