My Arch-Enemy Is Shining Again

The ending of the emotional progression is a bit unexpected

Oh my god, I finally finished reading it. I endured countless typos, grammatical errors, and embarrassing emotional lines, and I had to kneel down to read the entire book I bought. Can the author please correct the typos, grammatical errors and even wrong calculations in the text for the sake of me buying the whole copy? The most outrageous thing is that people's names can also be spelled incorrectly. Ost wrote Cyril. I was confused at the time. There is also the most common speech disorder, which is why... I... Am speechless and choked. Not to mention the various words that appear to be garbled and often inserted into a sentence suddenly. Can the author take his own article seriously, be responsible for himself and the readers, and review it every time he finishes writing to catch bugs? This does not mean that there cannot be typos. If there are too many key mistakes, it is not an occasional mistake but a problem of attitude. And this article is not as good as no cp. The relationship between Cyril and the protagonist is a mess. It is very blunt, very, very, very, and there is no feeling at all. You say it is a brotherhood, and I don't think it is inconsistent. Especially the protagonist's feelings for Cyril. I really don't understand how he fell in love with him. I felt that he treated him as a good friend, and finally fell in love suddenly. I... Finally, the characters, especially the protagonist's character, are so shaped... I don't even know how to describe it... If you ask me to sum up his character in just a few words, I can't even describe it. The author has portrayed it too carelessly... It's not profound at all... The whole article didn't resonate with my emotions at all... I just had to bite the bullet after reading it... This paragraph is purely personal. Please don't argue with me if you like it. This is the first time I write such a long comment, and I actually want to express my disappointment, but I really hope that the author can be a little more careful and at least correct the wrong wording, so as not to cause readers to spend money and cause headaches.

Kill the leader and wipe out the alliance leader, hehe

Looking forward to the next one, keep up the good work!

Ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. Keep up the good work. I look forward to starting a new one. I love you^3^

Dear Comrade Boyavin, hello and goodbye.

Good-looking, good-looking, finished with flowers, flowers, flowers, flowers.

Sweet, so sweet, so sweet!

Finished spreading flowers! Come on, madam!

I finally have a sofa