Please Let Me Push You Down!

I really can't help but complain, why should the protagonist stop liking the professor? Just like the mentally retarded one... Since the professor can't be professional, he has no right to be an attacker. I'm really convinced, so why does the protagonist exist? The whole article is written in a mess, and the emotional line is terrible.

I have finished reading the article in general~ I would like to post my own little opinion here~ I hope it can be of some help~ The whole article feels very confusing, and the characters' personalities are not clearly shown. It can be seen that the author has something he wants to express, but he cannot express it clearly~ It is recommended that you make a small outline when writing the essay, clearly describing the main line, general idea and each short story triggered by the main line. The number of words does not need to be too many, just use some general words to explain it. But in general, the whole article can still make people clearly feel what kind of character Da Da wants to create~ My little opinion, I hope you can gain some insights and write better articles next time~ o(∩_∩)o ~

The original idea of ​​the article is very good!!! Very attractive!! Unfortunately, the time point is too unclear, and it jumps to another paragraph without any transition. It is very confusing, and I was asked to buy all the chapters at once, but I can't stand it anymore after seeing this chapter. Please continue to work hard!

I started to wonder why I bought all the chapters at once, and I regretted it a bit.

??? I feel like the plot is getting weirder and weirder.

Nice article, please keep up the good work LZ

= =! It's intermittent. I can't understand it. I need to rework it a lot.

Damn, why don't you revise your article? Your writing is intermittent, and I find it very difficult to read it~! TAT

If you let me stay, I will stay

Yes, yes~~~I also like this pair very much~~~It's a pity that there are too few articles