Lin Jun, raised by bandits, hijacked the Xu family's bridal sedan in Guyang on a bright, sunny morning, an auspicious day for weddings.
The moment she lifted the bride's veil, Lin Jun could think of only two things.
Marry her, then kiss and cuddle her and get her all nice and clean.
She meant it, and she did it!!!
And then... she hit her head.
Lin Jun, lying in bed: Let me up. I can still fight.
Everyone else: Forget it. We can't beat you.
This novel will be published on Tuesday, September 29. A long chapter will be released then. I hope you'll show it lots of support.
Theme: Put aside personal gain and become a young person who makes a difference.
It was so shocking that I cried eighty liters of tears. Why is it so awesome? The author is too modest. The good article is not popular anymore. I am so sad. I feel sorry for all my friends who like ancient gl and have not seen it. I feel sorry for emo. Qinglang Mingming Xia's warm big dog seduces the really beautiful and powerful sister. It is a story about Ajun's passionate and pure love redeeming Qingqing, and at the same time Qingqing is also protecting and accompanying Ajun's growth. I saw some comments saying that there are not too many emotional lines, ah... This is not sweet enough. Apart from being a Qingshui article, I originally like to read articles that have plots and cars, because I feel that this is a complete story that is not restricted by netizens. But this one! They are so sweet just by being together. They are so cute, my friends! ! Who can not love the little sunshine and the sister who is as cold and strong as a cold blade to the outside but gentle and smiling inside? ! ! This book did not enter the first one or two pages of the main ancient style list. It is the fault of the majority of ancient style gl lovers.
See the author's own summary at the end. Let me tell you a little bit about what made me feel bad about this book. This book doesn't give me a bad feeling, it's that it doesn't hit the right mark when it opens high and goes low. Why do I say that? When I first watched it, the characters, personality, and plot were all very attractive. Whether it was Xiao Lin's naivety or Xu Qing's confused, unbearable, and cold complex, the show was actually pretty good. But as the plot gradually unfolded, I felt that the writing was not strong enough and the plot was simple. What's the explanation for the lack of writing power? In my opinion, the first climax of this book is when Xiao Lin races thousands of miles alone to save the captured Yao Niang and his party. What needs to be highlighted is the sense of urgency, fatigue, and crisis. The two-line narrative should show Xu Qing's subtle protection of the people in the village and finally his complete betrayal to show that the lives of the captured people are hanging by a thread. The other line should reflect Xiao Lin's nervousness, fatigue, and decision-making. The first point of conflict was when Xiao Lin met the princess. On the one hand, she immediately caught up with Xu Qing, and on the other hand, Xiao Lin's character and quality made it difficult for her to sit idly by. I felt that Xiao Lin's struggle was not reflected enough here. This paragraph means that the author designed the plot and wrote it consciously but failed to express it well. The next chapter is to explore the life experience. In fact, I originally thought that this part of the development was the complex interweaving of the royal mission and the mystery of the life experience and finally solved it. As a result, after a long time of preparation, I was given an ambiguous task of retrieving an unknown object. It had nothing to do with the general environment of the court situation and did not reflect the sense of intrigue. It was not difficult enough and lacked tension. The plot setting of this paragraph is really too simple... It fails to express the feeling of being cornered and looking for no way out, nor does it describe the feeling of a hidden danger and a bright future in another village. In my ideal plot, there should be a hidden thread. When you are desperate, you suddenly discover the story of digging deeper and deeper. But in any case, the author has consciously used Yao Niang and Xiao Lin's martial arts skills as a breakthrough, which is more reasonable than calling Batman and Superman's mother by the same name in Dawn of Justice. As the final part of this chapter, the bone china tower does not have enough sense of climax. The focus of this part should be Xiaolin's hard battle, but I feel that the author's description of the fighting scenes is not good enough, and the fighting is not exciting enough. And what I personally can't understand is how Xiaolin could have such strong emotional support for a family that she has never met and has no memory of, and that she must take back the things in the bone china tower. This feeling is too sudden and unreasonable. (Just like I can't understand the kind of child who insists on finding his biological parents even though his or her adoptive parents are very kind to him or her and knows that he or she is not biological, I can't understand this kind of emotion that has no time and no accumulation.) So I will give up the article for the time being.
After reading the author's own summary, I feel that she actually has more ideas and more complex designs for the characters, but I also feel that she has not been able to express them well. I feel that the subsequent plot is indeed quite exciting from the brief description. The author's ideas and imaginative character design are very good and interesting but not perfect enough.
What I always have to say is that it is easier to find faults than to write the article yourself. I respect the author's hard work and like the characters in her writing. I say this in the hope that her subsequent articles will be more progressive and exciting. You've been great.
It was fun and enjoyable to watch! The plot is very well written, with ups and downs, foreshadowing, etc. All handled very well. Some people say that it starts but ends but that doesn't count. I can only say that the tail description is not detailed enough. In other words, it is too short and it is not interesting enough! There is absolutely nothing wrong with anything else, and it can be said to be quite wonderful, and the writing skills are definitely good enough. I read the column and it was the first time I wrote about Machiavellianism. It was really great. And the ending was so heart-warming. No one was missing, but I didn't expect that Qingqing would still lie to A-Juan in the end. I mean, even after so many years, A-Juan didn't notice anything was wrong. It's really the roughest line in the world. 23333 But it was also because she was unguarded against Qingqing. Hehe, she got a big cookie again.
After reading Zuo's words, it is true that the Feng Li siblings will break up. The bad nature of men, eh, the family ties that shielded him from the knife and died for him can't withstand the temptation of imperial power. But that's okay. It's a pity that a smart person like Feng Li should not be the emperor. I'm so happy for her that she can find her own happiness in the end (but I bet 50 cents that she has definitely loved Ah Juan^q^). I think I am also a fan of the Iron-Blooded Princess. Apart from the two protagonists in the article, I like her the most_(:з∠)_
There are a little bit of emotional scenes, but when you look at it, you will find that feelings are no longer important at this time. From fighting side by side again and again, and returning home safely again and again, it is actually the sublimation of feelings. You don't need to write too much to express the beautiful love between these two people. It is really beautiful. I say the important things twice! I, who only love watching sweet love stories, couldn't stop reading it in one sitting (I was tricked by the copywriter into thinking it was a story about a silly bandit robbing his wife^q^)
I want to write a long review, but I don't know if the number of words is enough. Anyway, it's a really nice article about political strategy. Finally, I'll give Qingqing and Ah Juan a little blessing. They will definitely be able to have a happy ending together (^-^)
As for the sweet article that was promised, is it in a side story? It's almost over, my dear, I haven't seen the sweet love between the protagonists, and the emperor is fascinated by the beauty, not to mention that the siblings are being provoked and messed up because of this traitorous daughter, such as giving the emperor a pillow to provoke him and saying that his sister has too much power and is too powerful. If the trust is too high, it will affect the stability of the emperor's throne and lead to usurpation. This is the beginning of another palace battle. There are quite a few emperors like this, especially if they are afraid of being seized of power after being in power for a long time. This emperor doesn't look very smart. It was Feng Li who pushed him up.
I reviewed it again. It's really well written. When will the author come back to write a new article? I'm looking forward to it.
Oh my god, this younger brother is so incompetent, why not Feng Li become the queen herself?
. . . . Don't be disgusting, I'm going to vomit. If Feng Ze really wants to write like this in the end, I. . . . .
Nice! ! ! I really want to read the story of the princess too. Woohoo.
I finished it in one go, it's really well written! ! ! The plot in the story is completely ready for a second part! Let one person write a book about the journey of becoming a queen! ! !
I think this article is really great! When will you be back? Woohoo!
It was so shocking that I cried eighty liters of tears. Why is it so awesome? The author is too modest. The good article is not popular anymore. I am so sad. I feel sorry for all my friends who like ancient gl and have not seen it. I feel sorry for emo. Qinglang Mingming Xia's warm big dog seduces the really beautiful and powerful sister. It is a story about Ajun's passionate and pure love redeeming Qingqing, and at the same time Qingqing is also protecting and accompanying Ajun's growth. I saw some comments saying that there are not too many emotional lines, ah... This is not sweet enough. Apart from being a Qingshui article, I originally like to read articles that have plots and cars, because I feel that this is a complete story that is not restricted by netizens. But this one! They are so sweet just by being together. They are so cute, my friends! ! Who can not love the little sunshine and the sister who is as cold and strong as a cold blade to the outside but gentle and smiling inside? ! ! This book did not enter the first one or two pages of the main ancient style list. It is the fault of the majority of ancient style gl lovers.
See the author's own summary at the end. Let me tell you a little bit about what made me feel bad about this book. This book doesn't give me a bad feeling, it's that it doesn't hit the right mark when it opens high and goes low. Why do I say that? When I first watched it, the characters, personality, and plot were all very attractive. Whether it was Xiao Lin's naivety or Xu Qing's confused, unbearable, and cold complex, the show was actually pretty good. But as the plot gradually unfolded, I felt that the writing was not strong enough and the plot was simple. What's the explanation for the lack of writing power? In my opinion, the first climax of this book is when Xiao Lin races thousands of miles alone to save the captured Yao Niang and his party. What needs to be highlighted is the sense of urgency, fatigue, and crisis. The two-line narrative should show Xu Qing's subtle protection of the people in the village and finally his complete betrayal to show that the lives of the captured people are hanging by a thread. The other line should reflect Xiao Lin's nervousness, fatigue, and decision-making. The first point of conflict was when Xiao Lin met the princess. On the one hand, she immediately caught up with Xu Qing, and on the other hand, Xiao Lin's character and quality made it difficult for her to sit idly by. I felt that Xiao Lin's struggle was not reflected enough here. This paragraph means that the author designed the plot and wrote it consciously but failed to express it well. The next chapter is to explore the life experience. In fact, I originally thought that this part of the development was the complex interweaving of the royal mission and the mystery of the life experience and finally solved it. As a result, after a long time of preparation, I was given an ambiguous task of retrieving an unknown object. It had nothing to do with the general environment of the court situation and did not reflect the sense of intrigue. It was not difficult enough and lacked tension. The plot setting of this paragraph is really too simple... It fails to express the feeling of being cornered and looking for no way out, nor does it describe the feeling of a hidden danger and a bright future in another village. In my ideal plot, there should be a hidden thread. When you are desperate, you suddenly discover the story of digging deeper and deeper. But in any case, the author has consciously used Yao Niang and Xiao Lin's martial arts skills as a breakthrough, which is more reasonable than calling Batman and Superman's mother by the same name in Dawn of Justice. As the final part of this chapter, the bone china tower does not have enough sense of climax. The focus of this part should be Xiaolin's hard battle, but I feel that the author's description of the fighting scenes is not good enough, and the fighting is not exciting enough. And what I personally can't understand is how Xiaolin could have such strong emotional support for a family that she has never met and has no memory of, and that she must take back the things in the bone china tower. This feeling is too sudden and unreasonable. (Just like I can't understand the kind of child who insists on finding his biological parents even though his or her adoptive parents are very kind to him or her and knows that he or she is not biological, I can't understand this kind of emotion that has no time and no accumulation.) So I will give up the article for the time being. After reading the author's own summary, I feel that she actually has more ideas and more complex designs for the characters, but I also feel that she has not been able to express them well. I feel that the subsequent plot is indeed quite exciting from the brief description. The author's ideas and imaginative character design are very good and interesting but not perfect enough. What I always have to say is that it is easier to find faults than to write the article yourself. I respect the author's hard work and like the characters in her writing. I say this in the hope that her subsequent articles will be more progressive and exciting. You've been great.
It was fun and enjoyable to watch! The plot is very well written, with ups and downs, foreshadowing, etc. All handled very well. Some people say that it starts but ends but that doesn't count. I can only say that the tail description is not detailed enough. In other words, it is too short and it is not interesting enough! There is absolutely nothing wrong with anything else, and it can be said to be quite wonderful, and the writing skills are definitely good enough. I read the column and it was the first time I wrote about Machiavellianism. It was really great. And the ending was so heart-warming. No one was missing, but I didn't expect that Qingqing would still lie to A-Juan in the end. I mean, even after so many years, A-Juan didn't notice anything was wrong. It's really the roughest line in the world. 23333 But it was also because she was unguarded against Qingqing. Hehe, she got a big cookie again. After reading Zuo's words, it is true that the Feng Li siblings will break up. The bad nature of men, eh, the family ties that shielded him from the knife and died for him can't withstand the temptation of imperial power. But that's okay. It's a pity that a smart person like Feng Li should not be the emperor. I'm so happy for her that she can find her own happiness in the end (but I bet 50 cents that she has definitely loved Ah Juan^q^). I think I am also a fan of the Iron-Blooded Princess. Apart from the two protagonists in the article, I like her the most_(:з∠)_ There are a little bit of emotional scenes, but when you look at it, you will find that feelings are no longer important at this time. From fighting side by side again and again, and returning home safely again and again, it is actually the sublimation of feelings. You don't need to write too much to express the beautiful love between these two people. It is really beautiful. I say the important things twice! I, who only love watching sweet love stories, couldn't stop reading it in one sitting (I was tricked by the copywriter into thinking it was a story about a silly bandit robbing his wife^q^) I want to write a long review, but I don't know if the number of words is enough. Anyway, it's a really nice article about political strategy. Finally, I'll give Qingqing and Ah Juan a little blessing. They will definitely be able to have a happy ending together (^-^)
As for the sweet article that was promised, is it in a side story? It's almost over, my dear, I haven't seen the sweet love between the protagonists, and the emperor is fascinated by the beauty, not to mention that the siblings are being provoked and messed up because of this traitorous daughter, such as giving the emperor a pillow to provoke him and saying that his sister has too much power and is too powerful. If the trust is too high, it will affect the stability of the emperor's throne and lead to usurpation. This is the beginning of another palace battle. There are quite a few emperors like this, especially if they are afraid of being seized of power after being in power for a long time. This emperor doesn't look very smart. It was Feng Li who pushed him up.
I reviewed it again. It's really well written. When will the author come back to write a new article? I'm looking forward to it.
Oh my god, this younger brother is so incompetent, why not Feng Li become the queen herself?
. . . . Don't be disgusting, I'm going to vomit. If Feng Ze really wants to write like this in the end, I. . . . .
Nice! ! ! I really want to read the story of the princess too. Woohoo.
I finished it in one go, it's really well written! ! ! The plot in the story is completely ready for a second part! Let one person write a book about the journey of becoming a queen! ! !
I think this article is really great! When will you be back? Woohoo!