"I can find a hundred reasons to hate him, but I still fell in love with him."
One sword made us enemies, another brought us together. The guy who stabbed me to death in my past life is kind of adorable this time around?
Full blurb:
Jiang Liuye stole a priceless treasure and wreaked havoc on the world. The genius sword cultivator Yue Qingheng killed him with a single thrust of his sword. Jiang Liuye was reborn ten years in the past as a frail, helpless eight-year-old.
Keeping his identity secret, he joined Qinghui Sect to study under a master, becoming the little junior disciple Yun Yiyin. To his surprise, he discovered that his senior brother was none other than his sworn enemy from his past life, Yue Qingheng!
Still resentful about being killed by Yue Qingheng in his previous life, Yun Yiyin picked on him at every turn and vowed to regain his strength and take revenge as soon as possible.
Then he discovered that his senior brother treasured the wooden plaque he'd made on a whim, and even took seriously the promises he'd made carelessly.
What is going on? Did you fall in love with me while I was bullying you? Tell me what you like about me, and I'll change it, okay?
Yun Yiyin (Jiang Liuye) x Yue Qingheng
A tsundere top who says one thing and means another x a hot-tempered, awkward tsundere bottom. Two tsunderes collide in a passionate romance!
Top's perspective! Top's perspective! Top's perspective! A story about a man who spoils his own wife.
A few final points:
1. The story gets off to a slow start, so please be patient. The first part is "My Youth Diary"; the later part is "Raising a Loyal Puppy."
2. Shen Yucheng is the second male lead, but the top won't have feelings for him beyond those between master and disciple. The top is devoted to the bottom, and the bottom is wholeheartedly devoted to the top. The second male lead is only there to move the plot forward.
3. The whole novel is Yun Yiyin's journey of self-reflection and growth. Training takes hard work and steady progress. Taking shortcuts in a rush to succeed won't end well, even for the protagonist~
4. Although Yun Yiyin is reborn at age eight, he doesn't start dating until adulthood, so the children's innocent friendship stays pure~
Theme: 1. It's never too late to mend your ways. 2. Success takes continuous effort. Cutting corners leads nowhere good.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, to be honest, my dissatisfaction is only with the attitude of collecting treasures. The author said that he was single-minded, but I really feel that what he did is not worthy of such a word. In the later period, there may have been many interruptions in the update, but I always felt that the pace of the main plot was too fast... In the early stage, I really thought it was a rare good article!
Very nice! Unexpectedly, the truth turned out to be like this. Master had fulfilled his wish and went back satisfied. Yiyi and his senior brothers also work together to establish a sect, punish rape and eradicate evil, and spend the rest of their lives together. It's great!
Although it was a bit unfinished in the end, and the plot was not finished because it was too late, I still like the emotional drama of attack and shou. In fact, I got the idea of gong and shou being a lifelong couple as mentioned by the author, but sometimes some passages are too subtle: do you choose the mother or the wife?
The front part is well written. The plot can be said to be unfinished. As I said before, I feel that the author's writing and diction are more like Jin Yong. But when I was in a hurry to finish it, it didn't matter if this feeling disappeared, but it obviously turned into a running list, and it didn't even explain whether Yun Yun's skill was reduced after the Lingzhu left. Many authors are like this. When they feel that the subscription is not as good as expected, or they are bored, or they have run out of ideas, they have already reached one or two hundred chapters, and writing a longer one is not worth the gain, so they end it in a hurry. But have you ever thought that it may be more important not to let readers feel that the gain is not worth the loss? After all, readers learn from each experience. Two days ago, I wrote under other authors' articles that I would not subscribe again. The author of this article's unfinished work and character breakdown are not that outrageous, not enough, but they must be finished carefully. Regarding Master Lingzhu, I still want to say that he has not sorry to anyone. In any field, there is no absolute level of success. As a master, I can't do a better job in treating my disciples, and it's already quite fair. He paid special attention to him, but he didn't teach him anything more, nor did he give him anything special. He didn't even teach him his two special skills as the third elder. According to the author and some readers, does this mean that he is biased to the outside world? Master regards Yun Yun as the continuation of Patriarch Yun's life, but in this case, Master plays all the roles of a loving father, loving mother and loving teacher, and is Yun Yun's true "mother". Is there any problem with a mother who regards her son as the continuation of her husband's life and treats her son exceptionally well? Again, the author's writing style is very good, but the three views need to be fine-tuned. When the Holy Mother is needed, the Holy Mother is not used (such as harshly criticizing the master), and when the Holy Mother is not used, the Holy Mother is messed up (for example, Xiao Qing believes that Yunyun should not take care of the master and should immediately follow him. For example, the little junior sister who deceived the master and killed the ancestors and cruelly made up for others did not receive any punishment from the master - at least she should be struck down by lightning to cultivate). Another key point is that the author writes about cultivating immortals, which is actually no different from the world of martial arts. The loopholes in this aspect are probably not just single digits: everyone's lifespan, age and appearance are all mortals, and the ancestor of the Yun family only lived up to a hundred years, so is it necessary to write it as cultivating immortals? Criticism is not the purpose. Hope the next one will be better!
I don't know who I'm disgusting with, but the protagonist basically doesn't make any progress from the beginning to the end. He seems to be pretending to be an infatuated lover who attaches great importance to love and justice. There is no important point in the relationship that is not promoted by the senior brother. A wavering, indecisive coward. In the end, it seemed like he was trying to pretend to be a responsible, caring and considerate person who was preparing to kill demons by himself. It was really funny. You didn't even discuss it with the other person involved. Do you want to think about what it would be like if the senior brother hadn't chased him out and left without saying goodbye this time? Another broken promise? It seemed that I had been thinking about it for a long time, and it suddenly dawned on me how heavy it felt when the other party called out his name? What's going on? Can't it be that you have grown up and decided what you can figure out on your own? No progress from beginning to end, really speechless
Although, Yiyin wants to leave without his senior brother in order to make up for his mistakes. It's a bit sad, they are a couple! The kind of people who want to advance and retreat together and share adversities together! I'm a little sad. I don't know why. I feel like Yiyin doesn't like Qingheng that much. I can't describe it. Senior brother doesn't really expect Yiyin to keep his promise? But I really like Qingheng! He has never left me, I really like him, I really, really, really like him!!!
Hahahahahahahahaha Senior Brother really loves his sword
Wow! Thanks for the great update! I'm curious about what's going on with Senior Brother. I hope the mystery will be solved soon and Yiyi and Senior Brother can have a good life.
It's really a literary shortage. Although I noticed before I read this article that it seemed like it hadn't been updated for a long time, I still read it. The author actually writes very well. Why didn't he stop writing? I don't know whether it's because I can't continue writing or I'm just too lazy to write. I just hope I won't be fooled.
When I saw the first difference in the dream, I thought that this must have happened in my previous life. Yunyun's chest is really unlucky, and she will be pierced by Xiaoqing for the rest of her life. Therefore, Xiao Qing will repay it by being stabbed repeatedly throughout his life!