Transmigrating as Zhou Zhiruo in The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber

It feels like the writing is very fragmented. The author wants to write the heroine to be extremely resourceful, but in many places it feels like the heroine is impulsive and brainless.

Finally there is a book-traveling heroine who doesn't want to fall in love with Zhang Wuji!

Fortunately, he died. I was really afraid of an accident at the end of the last chapter. Simply

The writing is great, the writing style is very good, it is so rare to write it so carefully and it is free. And this is a story written five years ago. At that time, it was really rare for the author to have such a pure mentality of a strong woman. You must know that those awakening articles only appeared in the past two years. The author is really ahead of his time. I want to complain about the word "milf" at the end of the chapter. I think that although the original meaning of this word is that the charm is still there, but it has developed to this day, because the literal meaning is not beautiful, and the intuitive feeling is more emphasis on "old" than "beautiful", so the word here is too condescending and makes people feel melancholy. We usually want to see Mary Sue also Su when she is old, and don't want to see a too realistic B-side. It would be better if it is replaced by a middle-aged beautiful woman or beauty. After all, when I described Dai Qisi before, I didn't hesitate to praise her. So when it comes to our heroine, we shouldn't put too much emphasis on age! Beauty is enough~

Hey, I really don't understand that the heroine, a person who traveled through time, has such a deep obsession with strengthening Emei. I feel like she is obsessed with it.

Sharp! You caught my attention haha

Yin Li's father-killing is good, Yin Ye Wang biss

I think it's okay. The heroine's setting should be similar to that of Zhao Min. Isn't it unreasonable for Zhao Min to fall in love with Zhang Wuji because his shoes were taken off and he was tickled? Will giving up all love just because you fall in love with Zhang Wuji destroy your character? It's even more ridiculous that Yin Li, a ruthless person like him, fell in love with Brother A Niu because he was bitten when he was young... In comparison, I think the heroine's abruptness is quite acceptable. Anyway, she plans not to get married, so she doesn't need to be responsible.

Although I don't think Zhang Wuji's crime warrants death (after all, Zhang Wuji didn't actually want to go against Emei, he just insisted on shouting and killing), but my wife's writing is very good, and I think it is very attractive to read.

This Zhou Zhiruo is really vicious. In order to become the son of destiny, he killed the protagonist who had no hatred against him, and he still admired Emei very much. I guess she is your mother.