I Became a Mermaid, Then Returned to My Old World

Why don't you make a side story about Shiro?

I stayed up all night to finish it, and I feel that the plot has a reasonable setting and the characters are well drawn. All the threads have been tied up and all the baggage that needs to be shaken off has been shaken off. The only shortcoming may be that the pace is too fast and the number of words is too small, which makes it not enjoyable enough to watch.

I've finished reading~ It's time for me to write a paper Before I clicked on it, I didn't expect that there would be such a huge frame structure. It's not bad. Of course, it would be even better if Shen Zhifei had more roles. Oh, by the way, it's really great to see that it was finally confirmed that Lin Bai was not bewitched back then~

It's good-looking, but the author's big title and copywriting are not very attractive, so I clicked in many times but didn't read it. If it weren't for the literary shortage, I really wouldn't have found such a good-looking article.

The plot is still good, but there are a few holes that have not been filled in. Did Lin Bai be bewitched by the evil god? Did Sister Bai end up with the mermaid? What happened to the old people who talked to the mermaid after her death? In the end, the little girl, the residents of the city, and the city What is the ending of? The plot behind it is a bit too hasty, and there is too little description of Mr. Shen. I know Xiaokui's appearance, and even know that there is a mole on her earlobe, but Mr. Shen really can't think of any other characteristics except gentleness, but I like the writing style and the plot.

Good night Shenri Ten. This article is the first Lily fantasy novel I have read, and it opened the door to a new world of fantasy novels for me. I really like the character Xiaokui who is charming and strong without being arrogant. Every time I see Xiaokui getting stronger, I am happy for her. When I read the news of the author's death in September, I couldn't believe it. I still remember your message back to me. You are a great lily collaborator. I have collected many of your advance collections, but I didn't expect this. For the first time, I felt like something was wrong. I hope you will be happy in another world. Thank you for the works you brought. You are an excellent author. I wish you happiness every day. Good night.

The copywriting is indeed not very good, but I am really short on writing. I casually read the following and found a surprise = =

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After reading it, in general, although Shen is a good read, but... The portion is too small. I thought the plot was mainly about the two of them fighting side by side... Also, what is the concept of quick travel? It doesn't feel right.

As for the extra story, I want to watch Tiantian's love-love