The Five Flavors of Youth

It's my first time writing a novel and it's so well written. It's really amazing. After reading the novel for the first time, I wanted to write down my thoughts. I think the feelings of the characters in the novel are very real, but I always wonder if such feelings would exist in real life. It's quite contradictory, haha. The first-person writing method is very immersive and makes it easier to empathize. Did Li Mao cry? The opportunity for the heroine to see her true heart clearly and face the past and future is so heavy, but I think if this were not the case, the story of the two of them should be.

I'm very curious about the next development of the plot.

Being brave is sometimes difficult, but also very easy. I hope there is a Chongchong beside you and me. If not, then give yourself courage

Hmm... It's very well written. I just want to remind you about the layout and the distribution of natural paragraphs. It's a bit uncomfortable to read a long paragraph. Of course, this is just a personal opinion! Love the great article!

I have a lot of feelings, but I can't explain it. I still remember the article deeply... I may be like her... She is the one who cries the most. The more I think about it, the more I cry, the more she looks like me.

Happy New Year's Eve^_^~

It turns out to be a short story, and it is very well written. The main theme of this article should be self-identity. The rhythm of escape and confrontation is well grasped. However, Chongchong's face is a little thin, and he is warm every time he appears. There are not many other descriptions, of course because of the limited space. Finally, let's talk about novel creation. I think the most important thing about a novel is the true feelings contained in it. This is the soul of the novel. How to have a real feeling is to depict the emotional progression from nothing to something, from one to many, in line with the character's personality. The characters' actions are reasonable and their emotions are natural, rather than forced and forced. On this basis, use some writing techniques, beautiful vocabulary, design the ups and downs of the plot, and reverse the climax to enhance the pleasure of reading. The above is my humble opinion on novel creation. Haha, as far as this short story is concerned, I am quite satisfied with it. I hope more people can read this and I look forward to new articles. I'm going to see Aldee.

I was very moved when I read it. Chongchong is like a little sun. How can I say this article? There is not much skill in writing (the kind that shows off skills), but the plot is very touching and captures the soul of the article. I learned a lot.

Roses bloom in September. You are the only one in my heart. I really want to be with you. I give you one!

Suddenly I remembered a sentence, we met at that time, no matter where the sky is, there is no limit