
[Xue Xiao Xue] If You Could See
[薛晓薛]君不见
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 134k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
43Chapters
820Favorites
10.0Score
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14.1kClicks per chapter
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This article is really well written, not too sadistic, and has a great ending. I have read so many articles by Xue Xiao, and this article of yours really fits the setting of the original work. It is just like what happened to Xiao Xingchen and Xue Yang in the future, and what happened to Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji is over. This is their story, and this is what will happen after them. The story is not like other authors who wrote about the unlikely situations of rebirth. Those situations are all portraits, but they are in line with the ending given to him in the original work. Just like Xiao Xingchen's soul was reunited in the end, and Song Lan also said the sentence "I'm sorry, it's not your fault" just like before. Xue Yang sacrificed his life and was reborn in the end. There is no OOC in this, because it is indeed possible for him to be a person, a story, and a life like that in the end. Although he is a rotten girl, I am also very satisfied with the relationship. I did not deliberately tie them together like other authors. The ending is very satisfying. Maybe they can live like this after that. It is really great!
My favorite character in Mo Dao, I have read dozens of Xue Xiao fanfics, and there are many with fascinating plots, but the character's personality is somewhat distorted. The bully will either become a cute and coquettish little puppy, or turn into a young and Dangerous boy with his mouth shut... I don't like OOC very much, and this article can be said to be the best way to restore the two characters... The plot is also exciting, but it would be nice if there was a little more ambiguity in the description??
This character has been restored very well.
It is well written. Although the plot is dull, it paves the way for Xue Xiao's future in the way of repaying life for an eye, and depicts the journey of enlightenment of a cultivator. The perspective is unique and the writing is also very good. Xue Xiao's grasp of the strengths and weaknesses of his character is the highlight. The only thing I feel is slightly lacking is that the description of the relationship between the two is a bit weak.
At first, I wasn't looking for their two articles on the Internet, but I accidentally found this treasure when I browsed it. I read it when I had nothing to do, and then I finished it. It didn't feel OOC. The two of them are not people who forgive each other so easily. They went through several lives and deaths before they could do it. With Xiao Xingchen who was willing to teach him, and Xue Yang who was willing to be taught, except for the inexplicable familiarity between the two of them at the beginning, everything became so good later on. People who know Xue Yang will not forgive him easily, or even refuse to forgive him. Those who can forgive him or slowly accept him There is only that Xiao Xingchen. The best thing I feel is that Xiao Xingchen knows that even if Xue Yang plots against him, innocent people are still killed by himself, and there is no way to escape this. And Xue Yang, a child who has not grown up, can only get what he wants after experiencing several lives and deaths. The last one The point is super good: If you are lonely, I would like to be with you. There is also someone in the middle. Find him and educate him, teach him how to distinguish right from wrong. Then I pushed it in a very appropriate comment. It is a very good book. I look forward to more original and original fanfics from you.
It's a pity that such a beautiful article ends like this. I hope that Xue Yang can really let go of the past and live with Xiao Xingchen in the future. In the original work, we can't see Xue Xiao together. I think this fanfic is more accurate to the character image, because some fanfics will portray Xue Yang as a arrogant boy next door. There is not a lot of darkness in the original work, and the ending will always be good, but it lacks a sense of reality, and it always feels like Xue Yang. This fanfic is not like that, the characters feel more appropriate. First time commenting, please don't comment if you don't like it.
People who do all the evil things die because they have the last bit of good in their hearts. This is also the regret that Xue Yang left for me. I cannot imagine that Xiao Xingchen is willing to be dragged into the quagmire by Xue Yang, and I cannot imagine that Xue Yang is willing to be dragged out of the quagmire by Xiao Xingchen. The rescued person needs to have the idea of rescuing himself... But the bad guy wants to correct himself, do you still believe him? Will you lead him to the right path? Are you afraid of getting stained by his dirt? Xiao Xingchen mistakenly killed Xue Yang once and mistakenly blamed him for breaking up with him again. Finally believed it. Xue Yang was like a child, he loved to eat sweets and thought that Xiao Xingchen didn't care about anything and all his attention was on him. If someone else had treated him like this, he would not only chop that person into pieces, but also dig up his ancestral graves and refine the corpses of his family. But it was Xiao Xingchen. Xue Yang was reluctant to kill him and was angry with him. What should he do? Then make him angry and make him feel uncomfortable. It is said that Xiao Xingchen's appearance made Xue Yang feel at ease. Why didn't Xue Yang's appearance make Xiao Xingchen understand the world? Know the world without being worldly This kind of Xiao Xingchen makes me feel more transparent. [No, it's not to save, it's to lead him to do what is right and teach him to distinguish between wrong and wrong] I really like this sentence. Xiao Xingchen personally pulled Xue Yang out and washed away the mud for him. Xue Yang was willing to take this path because it would lead him to Xiao Xingchen. Finally, there is one point that particularly struck me, Xue Yang wrote Xiao Xingchen's name there. Xue Yang is literate, but where does Kuizhou Xiaoba need to hold a pen? How long does it take him to practice the three characters "Xiao Xingchen"? Finally, Xue Yang's little paper man is so cute.
This article moved me very much. To be honest, when I read the original work, I particularly liked the pairing of Xue Xiao, but thinking rationally, I felt that they were impossible. There are really too many things between the two of them that cannot be crossed. To be honest, Xue Yang is indeed evil. Because he encountered a lot of unfair treatment in his childhood, his evil from the heart is much more severe than the evil of the Yiling ancestor. In the eyes of some people, he is indeed a heinous devil. We cannot deny this. As for Xiao Xingchen, he is a symbol of pure kindness. Yueming Qingfeng Xiao Xingchen did not come from nothing. Perhaps due to God's will, black and white are entangled together. The black will be stained with white, but it will never become white. Instead, it will be white and easily stained. In fact, it was true. Xue Yang was greedy for Xiao Xingchen's warmth, but didn't know how to do it. There was a blood feud between them. He wanted to drag him into the quagmire, but after Xiao Xingchen learned the truth, he couldn't bear it and chose to commit suicide. In the end, he died and Xue Yang was left with nothing but a remnant of his soul. The contradiction between them cannot be made up with blood, so the Yicheng chapter in the original work is destined to be a tragedy, which I feel very sorry for. And this article boldly imagines that they are all resurrected from the dead, and the hatred between them has become a past life. After going through thousands of sailings, the two of them are no longer limited by the past life, but cherish the present. The author grasped the characters of these two people very well, and his writing skills are also very profound. The novel's description of Xue Yang's past life experience in the nightmare, as well as the description of the scenes in Yicheng, all moved me to tears and admired them.
Save the child. Where can I see the last one?
I didn't see love...