I can't see comments from long ago on my app, so I forgot about this one! I didn't expect the author to reply so many times! Sorry! So I read the article carefully and wanted to make some answers——
The answer is——
I still don't understand...
Honestly speaking, the author's writing style is not bad. But, this narrative - emm, indeed, this is an innovation and an attempt - but the fluency and coherence are too low? What is the connection between the two lines? I know the secret will be revealed at the end, but what about the foreshadowing?
The purpose of the article is to connect the readers with the emotional symbols of the characters in the book, and to introduce the world you created to the readers. It's fun to think about it for a while, it's fun to think about it all the time, the characters have a thousand love and hate relationships, and then the reader - huh? Black question mark.
In the final analysis, the narrative method is a tool, which is used to tell the story better. If the plot is weakened because of the narrative method. Isn't this a kind of alienation?
Sorry, I may be a bit sarcastic. After all, writing is the author's own business, and as a reader, I have no intention of making any personal comments. Please follow your own path and walk well.
If you ask me which chapter's writing style I like best, actually - as I said before, the author's writing style is really good. As long as the writing style is stable and has its own characteristics, it's great. If you want me to read it, the first chapter is pretty good! Chapter 2 is also good!
Okay, okay, having said all that, I wish the author's writing will get better and better! Also wish you a prosperous future!
Qwq... Actually... I didn't understand... These two extras... (I don't know why I wrote this suddenly and... Why I used this way of writing...)
Can't compare, can't compare, too social, too social (laughs) The author is so cute~
Hahahaha, I thought of National K-Song. One day I went to the APP and found that I had two more fans. I was so happy that I released two songs. The next day I found out that the two fans had withdrawn. . . . .
I can't see comments from long ago on my app, so I forgot about this one! I didn't expect the author to reply so many times! Sorry! So I read the article carefully and wanted to make some answers—— The answer is—— I still don't understand... Honestly speaking, the author's writing style is not bad. But, this narrative - emm, indeed, this is an innovation and an attempt - but the fluency and coherence are too low? What is the connection between the two lines? I know the secret will be revealed at the end, but what about the foreshadowing? The purpose of the article is to connect the readers with the emotional symbols of the characters in the book, and to introduce the world you created to the readers. It's fun to think about it for a while, it's fun to think about it all the time, the characters have a thousand love and hate relationships, and then the reader - huh? Black question mark. In the final analysis, the narrative method is a tool, which is used to tell the story better. If the plot is weakened because of the narrative method. Isn't this a kind of alienation? Sorry, I may be a bit sarcastic. After all, writing is the author's own business, and as a reader, I have no intention of making any personal comments. Please follow your own path and walk well. If you ask me which chapter's writing style I like best, actually - as I said before, the author's writing style is really good. As long as the writing style is stable and has its own characteristics, it's great. If you want me to read it, the first chapter is pretty good! Chapter 2 is also good! Okay, okay, having said all that, I wish the author's writing will get better and better! Also wish you a prosperous future!
Qwq... Actually... I didn't understand... These two extras... (I don't know why I wrote this suddenly and... Why I used this way of writing...)
Can't compare, can't compare, too social, too social (laughs) The author is so cute~
Hahahaha, I thought of National K-Song. One day I went to the APP and found that I had two more fans. I was so happy that I released two songs. The next day I found out that the two fans had withdrawn. . . . .